HP Approaches the Magic World

Joanne is a talented person, just like Ms. Rowling in Jon's memory. This girl does have a very strong talent in literature.

It's just that the lady in Jon's memory completed the long masterpiece "Harry Potter" alone without knowing anything about the wizarding world, and now Joanne beside Jon has the right person.

The wizarding world actually knows.

Some of the content in the book created under such circumstances should be more outstanding than the content in Jon's memory.

Jon could no longer remember the description of Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall in the first chapter of the original book when the Boy-Who-Lived was introduced eleven years ago. Jon remembered what was said in the conversation between them.

It wasn't very clear, he just remembered the deluminator, the cat squatting in the corner, and Hagrid falling from the sky on a motorcycle.

Then it disappeared. There were not many things that Jon could remember. Of course, the main ones were the spells and the plot, followed by the big storyline and characters, and finally the memory.

Originally, Jon thought that he would be able to recall many specific descriptions when he arrived at Privet Drive, just like when he went to Ollivander's a year ago, he recalled that classic description in the store.

There may be many explanations for the inability to remember the content of the books he has read, or it may be because the passage of time has worn away Jon's spirit, or new things have occupied his memory space, or even, in Hull

After Jia changed his world view several times, he began to gradually forget those things related to the past.

There are too many explanations to start with.

In the final analysis, it's always because those things are no longer important.

The world seems to be the same world, nothing has changed, the sun will still rise, casting light over the garden, illuminating the copper nameplate embedded in the wall in front of the house;

Everyone in the house goes out to work day after day,

Every night is exactly the same. I just go back to my room to sleep after dinner, occasionally watch TV, and occasionally relax with my lover.

Only the photos hanging on the fireplace show the passage of time and the growth and aging of people.

That's how time works.

"Our lives are actually wasted in this kind of time."

Jon completed today's magic practice - just Occlumency and Legilimency on himself, and then opened the door.

Nine o'clock was neither too early nor too late. When Jon came downstairs, Joanne had already prepared bread and milk for him and was proofreading the manuscript on the table.

There are not many finished manuscripts. After reading the ideas in the first chapter of Jon's new version, Joanne got inspiration and wrote several pages of it, all of which were completed last night and this morning.

"Are you up? Come over for dinner and take a look at the contents of this chapter."

Joanne greeted, and Jon walked over obediently.

There are no big problems with the content before the first chapter. According to Jon, it is introduced from the Dursley family, emphasizing the Dursleys' antipathy and conflicts with the magical world, as well as the celebration of the wizards.

"I think you can add some content here. I think if you want to portray Dumbledore's character, you can actually put some effort into his clothes. Your MI0 file should have Dumbledore.

A photo of it, right?”

"Yes, yes, but I always feel bad about this matter. After all, Mr. Dumbledore's strength is beyond our imagination. I'm worried..."

"Don't worry about this, I will find a time to raise this matter with Mr. Dumbledore and find a way to get him to agree to our plan - in fact, this plan is already helpful to Dumbledore's ideas.

But until then, your writing should be kept confidential. Except for the person in charge of MI0, it is best not to spread it. The same should be said to the person from the Ministry of Magic. Just say your first level of meaning, don't

Let him perceive the deeper meaning.

Moreover, didn’t I tell you before that the main character in your story should be our ‘Boy-Who-Lived’, not Dumbledore? If you write too much about Dumbledore, wouldn’t it be a bit overwhelming?”

"But this is inappropriate. You won't let me write you into the story. I can accept this. But according to what you said, Mr. Dumbledore has high hopes for Harry Potter, so he will definitely pay attention to it all the time.

Harry Potter, in this case, how can we reduce his content while still reflecting his abilities and care for Harry? Without this guide, how can Harry Potter's growth be expressed?

?”

"Suffering helps people grow, and so does responsibility."

Jon took a sip of milk: "The content of the first two chapters is mainly to explain the origin and process of Harry Potter's life here. The area this book deals with is Muggle society, not wizard society. You should understand what I mean.

That’s what I mean.”

Joanne nodded. Of course she understood what Jon meant. Muggle society's yearning for mysterious power would make them interested in this wizard from the beginning, and nothing would be better than a young wizard who grew up in a Muggle family.

It makes people feel more involved - if the little wizard's experience is tragic, then sympathy can help people quickly get into the character.

This is a technique commonly used when writing fairy tales. It gives readers a more comfortable reading experience by giving the protagonist a tragic past and a bright future. There is just one problem.

"According to this idea, our description of Harry Potter's childhood is completely exaggerated, but we can't take up too much space, right?"

"Of course, you have to know that although literary creation can be slightly fictional, Harry Potter is a wizard after all, and a wizard with a super reputation. We can't describe too much about his tragic childhood, as that will destroy him.

For the image in the hearts of the wizarding public, just write a little bit to make him feel pity. You should be able to grasp this scale, right?"

Of course Joanne has this ability, or in other words, the text itself has this ability, but it looks a little different based on the writer's own writing habits and application of techniques.

She was about to start revising her notes when the doorbell suddenly rang.

Jon put down the cup and was about to open the door, but Joanne had already stood up.

"I'll go."

She glanced at Jon and asked:

"Who could come so early?"

Jon also glanced at the envelope on the coffee table and smiled slightly.

"It should be, our guests have arrived."