HP Approaches the Magical World

Joanne is a talented person, just like the Ms. Rowling in Jon's memory. This girl does have a very strong talent in literature.

It's just that the lady in Jon's memory completed the long masterpiece "Harry Potter" alone without knowing anything about the magical world, and now Joanne by Jon's side has a right to The wizarding world actually knows.

In the book created under such circumstances, some of the content in it should be better than the content in Jon's memory.

Jon can't remember the description of Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall in the first chapter of the original book when the Boy Who Lived was introduced eleven years ago. Jon remembers what was said in the conversation between them It's not very clear, he just still remembers the extinguisher and the cat crouching in the corner, and Hagrid descended from the sky on a motorcycle.

Then there was nothing. Jon could not remember many things. Of course, he picked up the main spells and plot memories, followed by the big storylines and characters, and finally memories.

Originally, Jon thought that he would be able to recall many specific descriptions when he arrived at Privet Drive, just like when he went to Ollivander a year ago, he was in the store and recalled that classic description.

I can’t remember the content of the books I read. There may be many explanations for this kind of thing, or it is because the loss of time has drained Jon’s spirit, or new things have occupied his memory space, or even, in Hull. After Jia changed his worldview a few times, he gradually began to forget things related to the past.

Too much to explain, too much to talk about.

In the end, it's always because those things are no longer important.

The world seems to be the same world, nothing has changed, the sun will still rise and cast light over the garden, illuminating the copper nameplate inlaid on the wall in front of the house;

Everyone in the house goes out to work day after day,

Every night is exactly the same, just go back to the room to sleep after eating, watch TV occasionally, and relax with my lover occasionally.

Only the photographs hanging on the fireplace show the passage of time, and the growth and aging of people.

Time is like that.

"Our life is actually wasted in such time."

Jon finished today's magic practice—just Occlumency and Legilimency on himself—and pushed open the door.

Nine o'clock was neither too early nor too late. When Jon went downstairs, Joanne had already prepared bread and milk for him, and she was proofreading the manuscript on the table.

There are not many manuscripts that have been written. After reading the ideas of the first chapter of Jon's new version, Joanne was inspired, and she wrote several pages, all of which were completed last night and this morning.

"Are you up? Come over to eat, and take a look at the content of this chapter by the way."

Joanne greeted, and Jon walked over obediently.

There are no major problems with the previous content of the first chapter. According to Jon, it was introduced from the Dursleys, emphasizing the Dursleys' aversion to the magical world and conflicts, as well as the celebration of wizards.

"Here I think you can add a little content. I think if you want to portray the character of Dumbledore, you can actually put some effort into his clothes. You should have Dumbledore in your MI0 file. of the photo?"

"Yes, there is, but I always feel that this matter is not very good. After all, Mr. Dumbledore's strength is beyond our imagination. I am worried..."

"Don't worry about this, I will find a time to raise this matter with Mr. Dumbledore,

And find a way to get him to agree to our plan - which, in fact, would have helped Dumbledore's thinking.

But until then, your writing should be kept confidential. Except for the person in charge of MI0, it's best not to spread it. Say the same to the person from the Ministry of Magic. Just say your first meaning, don't Let him perceive the deeper meaning.

Besides, didn't I tell you before that the main character in your story should be our "Boy Who Lived" instead of Dumbledore. If you write too much about Dumbledore, will it be a bit overwhelming? "

"But this is inappropriate. You don't want me to write you into the story. I can accept this, but according to what you said, Mr. Dumbledore has high hopes for Harry Potter, so he will definitely pay attention to it all the time." Harry Potter, in this case, how can we not only reduce his content, but also reflect his ability and care for Harry? Without this guide, how can Harry Potter’s growth be expressed? ?”

"Suffering helps people grow, and so does responsibility."

Jon took a sip of milk: "The content of the first two chapters is mainly to explain the cause and process of Harry Potter's life here. This book deals with the Muggle society rather than the wizard society. You should understand what I mean. mean."

Joanne nodded. Of course she understood what Jon meant. Muggle society's yearning for mysterious power would make them interested in this wizard from the very beginning, and there is nothing better than a little wizard who grew up in a Muggle family. It can make people feel more substituting-if the little wizard's experience is tragic, then sympathy can make people quickly enter the role.

This is a commonly used technique when writing fairy tales. By giving the protagonist a tragic past and a bright future, it can give readers a more comfortable reading experience, but there is only one problem.

"According to this line of thinking, we completely exaggerate the description of Harry Potter's childhood, but it can't take too long, right?"

"Of course, you have to know that although literary creation can be a little fictitious, Harry Potter is a wizard after all, and he is a wizard with a super reputation. We can't describe too much about his tragic childhood, which will destroy him. The image in the hearts of the wizarding public, just write a little bit so that he will be pitied, you should be able to grasp this scale, right?"

Of course, Joanne has this ability, or in other words, the text itself has this ability, but it seems a little different according to the writer's own writing habits and application of techniques.

She was about to write and start revising her notes when the doorbell rang suddenly.

Jon put down his glass and was about to open the door when Joanne stood up.

"I'll go."

She glanced at Jon and asked:

"So early, who will come?"

Jon also glanced at the envelope on the coffee table and smiled.

"It should be that our guests have arrived."