I am the master of depressive comics

Chapter 11 Miyamae Sword’s editing work is particularly serious

"Ho ho ho"

The giant lava beast, with lava flowing all over its body, rushed towards the two of them, and the ground trembled as it ran. But the two people standing there were motionless.

"This...this job transfer mission requires us to defeat this thing? Is there a bug in the system?"

"Damn it, the operator won't let me change jobs? I've spent all my living expenses this month just to change jobs."

The innocent Gabriel looked at the screen and kept venting his dissatisfaction.

"Run quickly, don't just stand there, that thing is coming."

Gabriel, who was venting, reacted and hurriedly controlled the character and Kamiya Yuu to hide aside. "Boom, boom, boom", a big hole appeared where the two of them were, and countless magma was buried deep in the pit.

"Give me a buff spell first, and I'll attract the attention of the lava beast."

Gabrielle reacted quickly after seeing the news. Accurately release two negative effects on Kamiya Yu's character.

"Ding, your physical strength is being consumed faster."

"Ding, your bleeding speed has increased. Your health has dropped to 50%."

...........

The warrior standing in front of the giant lava beast was easily swatted away by the giant beast like a little chicken. The fallen angel behind him was not spared and died directly.

[Whether to re-complete the job transfer task: the 6th time]

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"Your skills...how should I say? It's really good. But I still hope that you can add negative effects to the enemy next time."

"Oh, I was careless. This job transfer mission will definitely be successful."

"Stop talking, let's leave quickly."

Gabriel tried to use words to cover up his mistakes. He was really an angel.

Five minutes later, the two men reappeared. The screen displays [Whether to complete the job transfer task again: the 7th time]

Gabriel's eyes were wide open, he was going crazy, and his hands were typing quickly.

"It will definitely work this time, trust me."

After 30 minutes, [Whether to complete the job transfer task again: the 10th time]

.......

Silence, there was silence in the team channel, and the atmosphere kept getting quieter.

"How about we stop here today. Anyway, the mission lasts for three days, and there will still be time after that." Kamiya Yuu suggested as he typed.

"No, I have to pass the level today. I don't believe it and I still can't pass it."

Looking at the determined and stubborn tone of the fallen angel on the screen, Yu Kamiya could only continue playing with her.

At two o'clock in the morning, after 35 failures, the two finally successfully completed the job transfer mission and became the last person in the job transfer mission time ranking.

"That's it for today, we have to go to school tomorrow."

Kamiya Yu yawned, staring at the screen with his eyes helplessly, while his hands kept moving.

"Fallen angel, go to bed early and have a good night."

"I will, good night."

The next day, Kamiya Yuu slept all morning. The teacher Shizuka Hiratsuka, who was going to teach classical Chinese, was completely motionless during the whole process. He was startled and thought he had died suddenly.

Three days later, a package of documents was mailed to Shueisha's headquarters.

Shueisha is located in Chiyoda District, the DJ capital of Sakurajima Province. Chiyoda District is the political and economic center of DJ or the entire country, and it is also a prosperous business area. Most of Chiyoda Ward is used for political offices and the Emperor's residence.

Countless submitted comics will be screened by editors to determine the quota for serialization. At this time, Kamiya Yu's manga is in the hands of editor Miyamae Ken.

Miyamae Tsurugi has short green hair and cold eyes. He often wears a black sportswear with yellow trim. His fat figure still couldn't be hidden under his sportswear.

"Hey~"

"The quality of comics written by newcomers nowadays is not good. How can I have the nerve to publish it with only this plot and illustrations?"

Miyazaki Ken held a manga in his hand and kept flipping through it. At the same time, he had to write his own suggestions for the manga.

As the editor of Shueisha, Tsurugi Miyamae is mainly responsible for comics such as shoujo comics, but this time there is a shortage of reviewers for the Newcomer Award, so he was called in to help.

Comics, as a unique art, requires the author to conceive the plot and then draw it. Comics editors need to edit, review, and occasionally provide suggestions to writers' works. Of course, the effectiveness of urging manuscripts in the industry is also one of the editor's abilities.

In addition to editing skills, qualifications and experience are also important. Unfortunately, Miyamae Tsurugi, as a new editor who just joined Shueisha, has only one cartoonist under his command and is at the bottom of Shueisha's editorial department.

The review process of Shueisha's editorial department is: the editor first reviews the comics, finds high-quality works and submits them, the chief editor reviews, determines the gold, silver and bronze awards, and gives a certain cash reward and the amount of comics recommended.

Miyamae Tsurugi, who returned to work, raised his eyes on his nose and read the comics behind him carefully.

"The Strongest Hero of the Aldi Kingdom", "The Legend of the Ninja", and "The Legend of the Hot Blood" were read one by one. Miyazaki's scalp felt numb and he kept holding his forehead.

"What on earth are these comics authors writing? I don't understand the plot at all. And this artist, a seven-year-old kid can do better graffiti than them."

It is precisely because Miyamae Ken is so dedicated to his work that he will carefully watch every work in his hands and fully give his own suggestions.

He originally chose the career of screenwriter because he hated contact with people.

As time went by, Ken Miyamae read several more works, all of which were rubbish. Now he was constantly selecting works like panning for gold in the mud.

A work in front of him attracted his attention, and he looked at it.

[Octopus Pi's Original Sin]

After thinking for a while, the name was interesting, but he didn't know what the content was like. With this thought, Ken Miyamae opened the copy of the comic.

There was a card inside, with the words: Kamiya Kyon.

"Kamiya Kyon? I haven't heard of him. Anyway, it's either a newcomer or an old cartoonist who has anonymously opened a new work." Ken Miyamae thought while holding the comic.

Looking at the first page at the top, this is the front page of the comic, the place that best reflects the cartoonist's painting skills.

On the paper is a girl with short black hair, one eye slightly closed, with bruises at the corner of the eye, revealing a pitiful expression, and tears constantly flowing from both eyes.

This is a girl who seems to have experienced violence, which can be seen from the faint black at the corner of her eyes. "Is it about school bullying? This is not easy to write!"

Gongqian Jian thought at first glance, and at the same time opened the cover and looked down.

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