I asked you to write about Fishman, and you went crazy with your creations on the spot?

"Teacher Chen, you said that the first reason why you gave it a 6 out of 10 is because the story is not complete enough!

So let me ask you, what exactly do you need to achieve high integrity?!

Come on, come on, director team, please bring me the scene from Lu Chen’s live broadcast room and project it on the screen!"

Yan Gelin's domineering expression leaked out!

Soon, the picture from Lu Chen's live broadcast room was projected on the big screen.

The first thing that caught the eyes of the contestants was the three whiteboards, densely packed with text!

"I went and wrote so much!"

"I just wrote on a whiteboard."

The contestants were all stunned!

Yan Gelin pointed at the picture on the screen and said:"Mr. Chen, see for yourself, where is the completeness of this story?

The villain Lin Yaodong, the Third House of Tazhai, the Haoyu Group, and the hidden umbrella design.

The positive candidates are Li Weimin, Li Fei and Zhao Jialiang.

The three people led two lines to snipe Lin Yaodong together!

If you look at the plot of these fifteen episodes, the logic is clear, the main line is clear, and the characters are well-proportioned!

It can be said that this story requires characters and plot!

Be determined and determined! Be connotative!

As a result, you tell a story like this, but it’s not very complete?!"

"Teacher Yan, I……"

"Just listen to me first!"

Yan Gelin interrupted Chen Sicheng again.

"Then let’s talk about the second reason!

Are you saying this drama is off topic?

I seem to remember that you said at the beginning of the program that if it were you who wrote it, you might write about the rural resistance war.

Think about it for yourself, you have integrated the two elements of the countryside and the Anti-Japanese War. Why is it that Lu Chen wrote about a rural anti-drug campaign that was off topic?

Besides, the story is designed so clearly!

We just want to destroy the poisonous village of Tazhai!

Is Poison Village not a village anymore?

Why did it go off topic?

Speaking of which.

I have to say this [serious homogeneity].

We have been emphasizing this issue repeatedly during the game.

After this round, we found that too many contestants chose the same theme.

Resulting in similar plots, similar designs, and similar central ideas?

Do you think this is a good thing?

Also, you always talk about the rules of the show, let me ask you!

What is the ultimate goal of this competition?

Is it to write eight-part essay?!

Or to cultivate formulaic writing! ?

Our real purpose is not to discover good stories!

In order to allow more excellent screenwriters to enter the public eye?!

I believe that this is the true original intention of this show!

Rather than the left sentence of the rule in your mouth, the right sentence of the rule!!"

Yan Gelin's voice shook the hall!

The veins on his face were visibly bulging!

It made people look at him sideways!

"Just this point of view can also answer your last point - program creation!

What does it mean to rely on creative minefields to attract people's attention?

You said this more than once during the previous live broadcast.

I refuted you before, and I will refute you now too!

I admit, at first, Lu Chen’s story was indeed eye-catching!

That's because we don't know his story!

Because I didn’t understand, there was a misunderstanding! but!

This is the creative process!

Look at these whiteboards.

How to deduce the core of his story!

I, I, Teacher Shuping, Teacher Liu Heping!

Including the majority of netizens, they all watched it with their own eyes!

Don’t you, as a judge, even understand the creative method of telling a story?!

Always one rule at a time, one rule at a time!

There are so many rules, so many rules!

I’ll leave it at that today!

I'm here to be the judge!

I want to see good stories!

See the great screenwriting talent!

As long as in the end, the creation of this story is reasonable and legal!

Meets the requirements!

Then everything that happens in the middle, I think is secondary!

As for the commercial value you mentioned!

I have no opinion on this.

After all, I am just a screenwriter, not like you, a billionaire director!

But I personally don’t recognize any of the first three points you mentioned!

I even think these three points of yours are completely nonsense!"

"well said!"

Behind... when Yan Gelin said this!

Shuping applauded enthusiastically on the spot!

Even Liu Heping clapped slightly to express his attitude!

Seeing the two great mentors applauding.

After the players were stunned and lost their minds, they also began to win in twos and threes. Applause!

It eventually turned into raging applause for the film!

Live broadcast room.

Countless netizens went crazy at this moment and burst into tears!

【Teacher Yan is so popular!】

【I cried! Teacher Yan is so tough, Thai pants are hot!】

【It felt so good, slapped in the face in front of Chen Sicheng! I love Teacher Yan so much!】

【Call Teacher Yan!!】

【Thank you, Teacher Yan, for speaking up and clearing Lu Chenju’s name!】

………… on the stage.

Xiao Saren was equally stupid!

I never expected that the two mentors would openly"fight" on stage over Lu Chen!

This...

Xiao Saxin's mountain road has eighteen bends!

Of course, Chen Sicheng's comments were unexpected.

But Yan Gelin's domineering display was even more unexpected!

Look at this posture!

If nothing unexpected happens.

Today, Douyin, scarves and other headline searches on major social media are likely to be dominated by"Xia Bi"!

…………

At this time, the person with the ugliest face was undoubtedly Chen Sicheng!

He never expected that Yan Gelin would openly disagree during his review session!

The key is to be so"arrogant"! moment.

Chen Sicheng, who felt seriously offended, turned gloomy.

"Teacher Yan, have you said enough? Can you let me say a few words? Yan

Gelin said nothing, acquiescing.

Chen Sicheng snorted coldly:"You may disagree with my opinion, but I don't think you have the right to interfere with my rating!""

"Wrong, Teacher Chen, I did not interfere with your grading, nor did I want to.

Whether you give it six points or five points, even if you give it zero points today, I will never interfere with you.

But I want to remind you!

Although you have the right to score!

But as judges, we all have the power to supervise each other.

What if, you are right today!

I will never stand up to refute any of your words!

But your review is really outrageous!

I think it is my duty to make some comments on your speech!"

"A six is ​​my rating!"

"Okay, then you continue to maintain your point of view, I don't want you to change the score.

But you also can’t take away my right to express my opinion on your remarks!"

"you!"

Chen Sicheng's chest rose and fell violently!

"OK! I won’t refute you! But don’t worry, I won’t be affected by you! My evaluation of player Lu Chen is all my sincere evaluation! If he is willing to listen, he will listen. If he is not willing to listen, I will never force him!"

"Come on, I think it’s better not to listen to your opinion!"

Yan Gelin is so cool!

Say whatever is on your mind!

She changed the subject and suddenly looked at Lu Chen in the audience.

"Lu Chen!"

"Here, Teacher Yan!"

"Don't let some people's comments affect your own confidence and judgment!

At least I, Teacher Shu Ping, and Teacher Liu Heping all recognize your creative style!

I hope you can give your best in the next round of 16 promotions!

Write better stories!

You know, a screenwriter’s best weapon is his story!

You have to use your story to silence those who question you!

Did you hear that?!"

"I heard you, Teacher Yan!"

Under the stage, Lu Chen nodded heavily and bent down to express his thanks!

Faced with Yan Gelin's behavior of speaking for himself regardless of face and image!

Lu Chen was naturally very grateful!

In the next round of promotions, he is ready to give his best , must win the first place in the second round!

Otherwise, I’m sorry to Yan Gelin, Shu Ping, Teacher Liu Heping... for their public support for me today!

"great, good luck! I'm optimistic about you!"

After saying that, Yan Gelin ignored Chen Sicheng, stuffed the microphone into Xiao Sa's arms, and returned to the team.

Chen Sicheng's face was as dark as water, almost on the verge of losing control!

But for the sake of the entire network's live broadcast, he He still suppressed his anger and returned to the team without saying a word.

Seeing this extremely embarrassing atmosphere, Xiao Sa was under great pressure!

He had no choice but to use all his strength to mediate!

He smiled and said:"Everyone! Although the discussion between the two judges and teachers was very intense!

But I believe they all express their personal opinions out of an attitude of being responsible for the players and the game.

As a player, I think everyone should be happy!

Fortunately, the judge teacher can be so responsible!

Here... please let us give applause to these two teachers!"

Xiao Sa took the lead in applauding!

Applause was everywhere in the audience!

Seeing that the atmosphere was finally getting better.

Xiao Sa did not dare to delay and went straight to the topic:

"So next, I will officially announce the final score of this round for player Lu Chen.

Network rating 8.4.

The judging panel scored 9 points, 9 points, 10 points, 6 points, and the overall score was 8.5 points.

Therefore, the final score of player Lu Chen is: 8.45 points!"

Another burst of applause……

"At this point, all the top 32 players in this round have been born!

Next, look at the big screen!"

On the screen.

Ranked by performance, the top 32 are officially ranked!

What is unexpected is that Lu Chen is ranked fourth!

【I really laughed out loud. The most popular work this round, which set multiple records, was only ranked fourth! If you tell me this, no one will believe it, family members!】

【It’s really off the mark, and it didn’t even make it into the top three!】

【The scumbag Chen destroyed an originally perfect result with his own hands!!】

【Don’t worry, there will definitely be a lot of people criticizing Chen Sicheng in the hot search tonight!】

【There's no point in scolding, they're the judges!】

【The Internet will put pressure on him!】

【I really want to beat the crap out of Wang Chen! He was just jealous of Lu Chen, jealous!!】

【envy? You can’t be so narcissistic, right? He’s a billionaire director! What does your family, Lu Chen, have?】

【Haha, don't be so weird! We are only in the top 32 now, and there is still plenty of competition to come!】

【Stop pretending, he’s really that awesome, can he write a Tang Dynasty detective if he has the ability? Or Northern Ireland too】

【Don't worry,"Breaking the Ice" is definitely better than"Northern Love" by your scumbag Chen! I'm leaving the words behind!】

【Haha, so funny! Who can't pretend to be better?~】

【That is, if you don’t get eliminated in the top 16 promotion round, you’d be really laughing! 】

Studio.

Fans of Lu Chen and fans of Chen Sicheng unexpectedly got into a fight!

The two sides were quarreling and fighting!

But in the end it was still based on Lu Chen’s huge number of fans!

Chen Sicheng was defeated steadily.

…………

And with the list of the top 32, fully announced!

This round of competition has officially come to an end!

Xiaosa is standing in the middle of the stage!

Holding the microphone, he said loudly:"Dear viewers, this round of competition is over!

In ten days, we will start the second round, the top 16 promotion competition!

You can take the time to follow the Douyin and Bibo accounts of"The Writing is Like God Conference"!

Get to know the latest updates on the show!

Finally, thank you all for staying with us for nearly five hours!

Audiences, let’s meet again in ten days’ time for"Bi Xia Bi"》！"

As Xiao Sa finished announcing the next round of competition time!

The game is officially over!

The contestants and judges left the hall one after another.

Live broadcast also stopped~

………… ten minutes later!

Chief Director's Office

"Boom, boom, boom!"

"Come in!"

"Director, are you looking for me?"

Lu Chen pushed open the door and walked in with a confused look on his face.

After the game, Lu Chen, like other players, was ready to pack his things and go home.

Unexpectedly, the staff told him that the chief director Hong Tao wanted to see him.

So, Lu Chen came

"Come, come, sit, sit, sit."

Hong Tao pointed to the stool in front of him.

Lu Chen sat down.

Hong Tao didn't know whether to laugh or cry. He poured out his bitter words:"Lu Chen, I asked you to write about the countryside. What the hell is this Tazhai of yours?"

Lu Chen:"……"

"Director, the anti-drug campaign in rural areas is also a rural area, so you can tell me whether it’s a question or not?!"

"Okay, okay, I'm just complaining. Hong

Tao smiled and waved his hand:"Actually, I came to you because I want to discuss with you the collective bidding meeting tomorrow at two o'clock in the afternoon.""

"Collective bidding? Tomorrow afternoon?"

"What, are you okay?"Hong Tao asked.

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