I asked you to write about Fishman, and you went crazy with your creations on the spot?

After all, there are too many adaptations of the theme of the rise of little people.

Not to mention that the routine is old and the audience is tired of it.

It's really hard to get people interested.

Unless Lu Chen’s next plot is exceptionally well written.

That's another matter.

So... at least for now.

Yan Gelin's development of this plot was lower than his expectations...

At this time...

Liu Heping, who had been silent, also spoke.

"The regional background is the soil for the extension of the plot. Different regions produce different stories.

Just like the high loess slopes, the unique elegance and poetry of Jiangnan water towns are destined not to appear.

Similarly, in areas of Guangdong Province where clan culture is prevalent.

Even if the story is about the rise of a small character, the story will definitely be different from other places."

"Yes, Teacher Liu is right!

It depends on whether Lu Chen can organically combine the two concepts of personal rise and clan.

If we just briefly introduce the regional environment.

Introduce the unique cultural environment of Guangdong Province.

Instead of taking full advantage of this, personal development was still the main line, resulting in the background design being blurred.

So I think the story creation of No. 48 will most likely disappoint people."

Shu Ping continued to express his views.

Yan Gelin and Chen Sicheng nodded.

Even Liu Heping nodded slightly and agreed with Shu Ping's views.

After all, everyone had seen Lu Chen delineate clan culture and ancestral halls before. When using the two keywords of culture,

I felt bright and fresh.

But now that the plot is unfolding, it is obvious that Lu Chen has not made good use of these two keywords for the time being...

Of course!

Having said that, it is only the beginning after all, and the plot is not complete yet. Expanding, it is definitely inappropriate to draw conclusions prematurely...

But to be honest, Lu Chen's beginning is indeed too satisfactory!

No wonder the judges were slightly disappointed……

………………

At this time...

Chen Sicheng listened happily.

He has long said that No. 48 is of average strength.

But Liu Heping glanced at the other party.

But now it seems.

Lu Chen's performance was clearly moving towards his evaluation...

The subject matter was the same as that of most other players. It was not new, but rather cliched.

I want to advance to the next round with a story like this.

Don't call it a fool's dream.

But the probability of promotion is really not high.

Anyway, Chen Sicheng doesn't care what the other three judges think.

At least with him.

For a story with this kind of cliche theme, at least two points will be deducted for the first time!

If the plot continues to be unsatisfactory, more deductions will be made!

Chen Sicheng has always felt that a good story must have absolute commercial value.

Now that he is a judge.

Then don't get involved in this kind of old soup and old rice!

He can't possibly approve it!

Studio.

Listening to the conversations of several judges.

Netizens are also talking about it

【Yes, the teachers are right, it’s a bit of a stretch to unfold the plot! I thought I was going to write about internal fighting within the sect, but this is the result?】

【Isn’t this story a proper idea for online writing? The key is still the old-fashioned idea for online writing from more than ten or twenty years ago. It’s so outdated!】

【No. 48 is not as strong as Teacher Liu Heping said.】

【To be honest, when I first wrote the words [clan ancestral hall culture] on the 48th, my eyes really lit up. I didn’t expect it to become vulgar immediately!】

【Let’s take a look again. I hope Teacher Liu Heping won’t slap me in the face. If No. 48 fails to advance, it will be really embarrassing. Open the door to embarrassment!】

【So embarrassing!】

【Look, he's ready to write again! 】

In the picture...

Lu Chen walked back and forth for a few times and walked to the whiteboard again!

Picked up the black pen and wrote:

"Because Lin Yaodong has been on the streets all year round, he has seen all directions and listened to all directions. He found that collecting scraps is very profitable, much more than he can earn by setting up a stall and making snacks. At that time, it was just the 1990s, coastal trade was developed, and all kinds of foreign products were available. Gadgets are pouring into the country, including a lot of foreign garbage and so on.

Dongshan City! (A virtual city in Guangdong Province.)

As a port city, it is the first city in China to be exposed to this trend.

After learning about the money-making project, Lin Yaodong immediately decided that he would start a business selling scrap products!

What business makes money to him! Whatever he does!

Because he is afraid of poverty!

A poor boy's desire for money is engraved in his bones.

In order to make money, Lin Yaodong thinks he can do anything!"

Writing this.

Lu Chen paused again.

But this time, he quickly picked up the pen again and continued writing:

"Because Lin Yaodong was smart and knew how to get things done, he soon became successful in the waste collection business. In the next few years, he also earned his first pot of gold by collecting waste.

At that time, he was just in his early twenties. Because he entered the society early and came into contact with many people, his momentum was comparable to that of someone thirty years younger.

Also because I made money.

Lin Yaodong's life changed dramatically!

First of all, the family conditions have improved, they can have enough food to eat and live in a house that does not leak.

Secondly, their family's reputation in the village has gradually increased.

The villagers will say hello when they see him.

Such drastic changes in the external environment.

Let Lin Yaodong truly feel the charm of money!

His desire for money also increased explosively during this period!

He believes that money can bring him everything! therefore!

He desperately hopes he can make more money! change yourself!

Change the family! even!

He wants to change Tazhai!

Change the destiny of your own lineage!"

…………

See the last line of text!

Shuping's eyes widened slightly!

"It’s a topic with the clan!"

"As expected, it is indeed the path from personal development to leading the development of the village!"

Chen Sicheng curled his lips.

This plot was not only reasonable, but also expected.

Yan Gelin also pursed his lips and took a deep breath.

"The character's personality is established! But...it's still not enough! Yan

Gelin commented.

Liu Heping continued to watch quietly without saying a word.

"Teacher Xiao Sa, let me see... why don't you change rooms? You can't stay in Room 48 all the time."

Chen Sicheng suggested.

Xiao Sa checked the time. Indeed, he stayed in Room 48 for several minutes.

It was a bit long.……

"Let's switch rooms. How many judges are there?"

Shu Ping and others naturally have no objection to this.

As judges, there are so many contestants, and they can't just look at one person!

What's more, the story of No. 48.

To be fair, it is indeed not exciting enough...

At least that's how it seems for now.

Immediately,

Xiao Sache went to other live broadcast rooms, and the judges continued to comment on other contestants.

…………

【Alas, this story is not very interesting. I will go to other rooms to have a look.】

【I am coming too】

【You can come and take a look at the live broadcast room No. 4. It is quite interesting. No. 4 has designed a plot similar to a stage play, which is quite fun.】

【stage show? Country stage play? Oh, that's interesting. I'll go take a look.】

【I am coming too! 】

The people in the live broadcast room are like the rising tide, they come and go quickly.

In the blink of an eye, the number of 300,000 plus people fell by more than half.

Even the number of people is still declining sharply.

It soon fell below 100,000.

…………

And at this time. inside the room.

Lu Chen, who knew nothing about the outside world, continued his deduction.

Write to this point.

Lin Yaodong's inner construction has basically taken shape.

Values!

Money Concept!

World view!

All have been initially established!

People only have a fascination and desire for something!

Will breed greed!

Breeds ambition!

With greed and ambition, people will want more at all costs!

It was this mentality and motivation that finally led to Lin Yaodong's transformation into a drug lord!

And the next plot is very crucial!

It was precisely because of this incident that Lin Yaodong embarked on a criminal path for the first time!

And take this as a turning point and an opportunity.

It has a very profound impact on it!

From the inside out, usher in the first transformation in life!

It truly laid a solid foundation for him to later become a drug lord!

This opportunity and turning point is car smuggling!

Although it was not stated explicitly in the original play.

But it's not hard to speculate.

As Lin Yaodong's experience increased, he gradually became dissatisfied with the"petty profit" of collecting scraps!

Finally, I discovered smuggling, which is very profitable!

So he took the risk and started smuggling.

It also laid important foreshadowing for his escape to Hong Kong and his exposure to drugs!

So... the next plot is the beginning of the real climax of this story!

PS: It’s been the third update today! There are still two chapters left before the plot explodes!

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