I Can Absorb Spiritual Contamination
: Say 2 things (also known as the instructions for entering the palace)
Book friends, mental pollution is this book. Will it be boring if you look at it?
Let me first talk about my own feelings these past few days:
First of all, the grades are poor.
Now is the era of big data, and writing novels is also the case. If the data is not good, it is the result of no recommendation and self-destruction.
Of course I know that I had poor grades at the beginning, but hundreds of thousands of words were written later, and my grades gradually improved. The typical example in this type of chicken soup is the mortal who is Wangyu.
But there is a premise: the author must have enough confidence in the book.
Sorry, I smashed the book about mental pollution, and others fell in the follow-up plot. I am special, smashing it at the beginning, it is not attractive.
Summarize some of the advantages and disadvantages of this book:
1. At first, I buried too much, and most readers didn’t realize it. Foreshadowing is a good thing, but I forgot to add conflict.
There are no basic conflicts. The protagonist starts at the pinnacle of physical skills. It is too comfortable like a salted fish, without a sense of oppression. It is difficult for you to substitute, and the protagonist cannot move the plot.
At the beginning, the whole process was like a branch line npc, relying on supporting roles to push the main line;
2. The opening chapters deliberately imitated the secret description style, but learned something different and lost my own things. This is my mistake. Many people can't stand it at all in the first three chapters.
3. There are too many power systems in the early stage. The three systems at the beginning are all new systems that have been changed. Readers are dazzled; not to mention those who have just read the book, the old bookworms are very annoying;
4. The most important point is that this book so far, because the foreshadowing has not been reflected, there is no conflict, and the early days are daily routines, so it is not interesting enough.
Although I try to be a little funny, it is difficult because the background is set there and the apocalyptic wasteland cannot be funny.
I was writing torment, and the readers were too tired to read and didn't know what to watch.
--the above.
Therefore, the reason for the cut is very simple, mental pollution of this book, I must admit that no one loves it (including myself).
I blamed me for being bad. I set a lot of backgrounds and later stories, and made various foreshadowings. But when I opened the book, I ignored the most important question: Can readers read this book? Will you have the energy to point to the next chapter?
The answer is no.
This book is too imitation of the writing style of the Great God, and it is not suitable for me at all.
What I want to write is a story that a reader looks like, and I write a powerful story myself.
So I opened a new book.
The new book was actually conceived in 2016. At that time, there was a book with the same setting background. Those who follow my old book may know that it is the largest swordsman in history.
Because the speed of the car is too fast, the book score is very poor, the number of subscribers is two to three hundred, but I have been writing more than 1.2 million words until the little black room, which is also the precedent of a wave of anti-routines. Bullying the young girl should start with me.
This time, the familiar old driver made a comeback.
The new book is completely my own writing style, I discarded everything I learned from the Great God.
It has the blessings of my four or five years of traveling north and south. The control of the rhythm has risen linearly, and the understanding of various novel things can make my brain more smoothly reflected.
Brothers don't worry about going into the pit, labor and capital will be godly after this time!
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