Some readers said that the content is too watery and the pace is too slow. Explain:

First, the readers feel that the water is very much because the new book issue contains more than 1,000 words per chapter, and there is not much content. This problem will be resolved after the release, because each chapter starts with at least 3000 words after the release.

Second, the slow pace is because writing a book can’t just write cool points, but also need to pave the way for those cool points. Readers can think about it, if I only write about the first month, what will happen in the second month, and the third How about the month, is it very monotonous, like a running account? After writing the three cool points, you are not interested in reading it.

Third, the main line of this book is that the protagonist gradually becomes a kendo powerhouse who breaks the void through groping. Therefore, the protagonist needs to have a complete cultivation process, and all of this requires the author to perform original exercises. After all, only the protagonist can practice on earth.(Read more @ wuxiamtl.com)

Fourth, if you want to arrange a reasonable training process, you must have various preparations, such as writing live broadcasts to fight fakes. In addition to writing pretense, the most important thing is to make money. The protagonist needs a lot of money to accumulate in the early stage of cultivation.

Fifth, when more than 30 chapters are over, the preliminary foreshadowing of this book will be completed, and the following plots are guaranteed to become more and more exciting, and more than 30 chapters, in fact, only less than 60,000 words, it is not water at all.

Sixth, don't guess how the protagonist will practice? Because the practice method of this book is to create a new practice system, it is definitely not the book review area that you have to jump off the building if you want to fly.

at last!

I hope that readers will be patient to see the content before the shelves, if the content before the shelves is not satisfactory to you, at least it won't cost you money, right?

If readers feel that this book is pretty good, I hope to support it with collection, flowers, rewards, monthly tickets, and evaluation tickets, for encouragement, thank you! .

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