I Just Want to Copy Books in Peace

After Du Caige finished telling the outline of the story, let them give their comments.

Yu Shan, who was big and three thick, scratched the back of her head, and chubby Meng Zhaolong helped her glasses. After looking at each other, Meng Zhaolong spoke first.

"It feels like the story is a bit ordinary."

"Yes, there are not many reversals." Yu Shan followed the evaluation.

"Also, it feels like there are a few places. It's a bit far-fetched, and it feels like fighting for the sake of fighting. You can talk well, but you have to fight. For example, when Yan Yuanyi and Huo Linger just met."

Yu Shan also nodded in agreement, "I've also seen The Romance of the Dragon and Snake. Yan Yuanyi is indeed very domineering, but he shouldn't take action against the younger generation as soon as he comes up."

"What are you thinking?" Du Caige was speechless, "Do you think this is a drama? It's an action movie! The focus is on the design of the fight scene! Of course, if you have something to do, you have to play a few games!"

"Do you think this is a crazy stone? This is not a detective in Chinatown. Those two films rely on all kinds of reversals and all kinds of bag shakes to attract the audience. Those two films don't need any special effects, they don't need too much The action design is all about using the plot to pin the audience to their seats."

"And what about my movie? As long as the storyline is smooth, the logic is smooth, and you can justify yourself, and finally sublimate it a little bit, and discuss why Feng Yuxiu is a 'one-man martial arts', that's enough. Everything else is used. Fight scenes, use special effects to speak!"

Yu Shan and Meng Zhaolong thought for a while and could only nod their heads. You are the BOSS, you are right, you are right!

But the expression seems to be not very optimistic.

Du Caige was too lazy to tell them.

Both of these guys don't quite understand the heart of commercial cinema.

In fact, if this "Dragon and Snake Romance, One of the Personal Martial Arts" was filmed in a garish way, using a lot of space to explore human nature and Feng Yuxiu's inner world, then it would lead to the street!

As soon as the audience listens to "Romance of the Dragon and Snake", there is a picture in their minds.

They just came to see the fight scene, not to listen to your idiots.

They are looking forward to seeing action movies that punch to the flesh!

Looking forward to seeing all kinds of wonderful boxing!

but you tell them,

Oops, Feng Yuxiu has changed his mind because of various reasons.

And what kind of mental journey does Huo Linger have?

Tell them slowly and slowly, "Some people live to gain face, and some people live to become lizi". What to say "I hope you are like me, take a breath, and light a lamp. You must know that if you don't forget, there will be an echo. If there is a light, there will be someone."

Then it's going to hit the street and go home.

On the contrary, you don't need to talk about big truths, you don't need to analyze your heart too much, just be straightforward and just say one sentence, "Feng Yuxiu, come to ask for advice. Today we are not only superior, but also life and death."

After you have finished speaking, you will fight, and after you have finished, you will explain a few words, and that's about it.

Finally, he gave a cool explanation, "Kung Fu, two words, one horizontal and one vertical, right, standing, wrong, falling. Only those who are standing are qualified to speak."

This is much more appropriate.

Du Caige said, "Just help me sort it out, is there any major logical problem in this plot?"

They thought about it and said no.

Yu Shan also asked, "When Feng Yuxiu was hunted down, Huo Ling'er went to save him. What are the identities of the two young and beautiful girls who appeared at this time? You said they didn't seem to understand Chinese martial arts, but The speed and response are extremely fast, the strength is extremely strong, and the movements are extremely precise, and he can actually fight back and forth with two master pill holders."

"They are witches."

"Witch?" Yu Shan and Meng Zhaolong were puzzled together.

"Well," Du Caige didn't want to talk more, "it's just a hook."

They suddenly realized, "It's for the next movie, right? The witch... represents a currently unknown force?"

"It's almost like this. As for whether there is a next one, it depends on the results of this one."

Regarding the next part, Du Caige has only a rough idea.

The next villain should be the "Witch" organization.

The showdown between Chinese martial arts and biochemical warriors must be of interest to many viewers.

Although he doesn't plan to shoot the main story of "Dragon and Snake Romance" for the time being, it is now a postscript and a side story, and slowly builds a universe of martial arts.

But a character like Wang Chao, after all, is the core of "Romance of the Dragon and Snake", as well as Demeanor, Tang Zichen, Ba Liming, Qiu Chan, etc., are all characters worthy of writing.

Find a chance to get them out.

It is quite suitable to sew the "witch" together.

After discussing the plot outline with Meng Zhaolong and Yu Shan, Du Caige arranged it so that the screenwriter team could refine and enrich the dialogue based on his story.

Try to intersperse some humorous dialogues, try to focus on the details.

For example, he would only say that Huo Linger and Tan Wendong fought against Yan Yuanyi together and were defeated.

Very simple sentence.

Then these screenwriters have to think about it and write a complete battle process, the dialogue before the battle, the moves used by both sides during the battle, the summary and reflection after the battle, and so on.

For example, Du Caige would only say that Huo Linger and Cao Jingjing met with respect and vigilance, and exchanged a few words.

The screenwriter team is responsible for writing the content of their greetings, reflecting their respective moods and character characteristics.

In this world, there may be a few movie scripts that are completed by one person alone.

But the vast majority of scripts are completed by the strength of the team.

After the script was over, Yu Shan and Meng Zhaolong chatted with Du Caige for a while.

Talk about their experiences and insights during the filming process, the embarrassment they have made, the jokes they have made, and of course they will also talk about what they are very proud of.

Du Caige simply asked them to bring the first cut versions of the two films and read them together.

After all, he also had the title of "Producer" in these two films. Discussing editing with them is also in the title.

At present, the first cut versions of "Crazy Stone" and "Tang Detective 1" have not been post-processed, no special effects have been done, even the simplest image retouching has not been done, and the soundtrack has not been adjusted.

For ordinary people, it will be confusing.

However, they are all professionals, and naturally they can make up a lot of things.

And these two movies don't need too many special effects, and the completion of the first cut version is already very good.

Du Caige discussed with them for a while and made some comments.

As for whether they listen or not, it doesn't matter, anyway, the final cut right is not in their hands.

They don't have that coffee spot yet.

If they don't listen, Du Caige will just go into battle with scissors.

After talking about the two films, Meng Zhaolong asked again, "How do you plan to deploy actors in your 'one-man martial arts'? It is said that Liu Chi has already left, right? It's a pity, she should be good as Yan Yuanyi."