I live in a desert island property
Summary and a day off
The content of Bankai Trading Market is finally over!
I originally wanted to make a summary, but there were too many people who had no choice but to criticize, so I didn’t want to sell my melons. I stood at attention and was beaten, and you whipped me fiercely with your whip.
I did delete some indecent comments in the book review section. Some people asked me to hurry up and eunuch, so it’s not like I hate them out of love. I deleted these comments, otherwise they would be really indecent.
And you told me to stop posting it altogether, and just post it all at once after a month of accumulation?
What to say, thank you for your advice, but you can’t do this in online articles, otherwise it won’t be just one person scolding, but everyone will be scolding.
There are also some readers who actually don’t read enough and are dissatisfied with their desires, so they say that I am out of context every day. My productivity is really limited, and I can’t write 20,000 words a day like an eagle.
Many days I have reached 7,000 words, which is beyond productivity. There is really nothing I can do.
Comments such as "abandoned" and "replaced" have also been deleted. Deletion means that I saw this post and I'm really sorry, it didn't meet your taste.
Because putting a lot of "abandoned" articles in the book review section will annoy more readers, I can only delete them.
After thinking about it for a while, I realized that one shortcoming was that the protagonist should show off his skills with the Dark Giant instead of the Dragon Turtle.
Of course, my idea at the time was that there would be a super enemy later, and the protagonist should be the last to go.
This is a natural thought.
Letting the protagonist play in Dragon Turtle may help relieve the tension.
The serialization is stressful and the pacing is a bit flawed, I'm sorry everyone.
But as a whole, I don’t think there’s any big problem with the plot.
The world is cruel, peace is just an illusion, and the collapse of rituals and music is reality. There is no absolute good or bad, only positions. This should be written out. There are so many plot twists, which are very tiring to write, but the effect is not very good.
It seems that I still have to write something simple, and running over directly is the best way...
I learned a lot from this book and will correct it next time.
Civilization is too complicated, and the civilization flow does have some inherent disadvantages. It won't work if it's too realistic, and it won't work if it's too childish.
I don’t know if any readers like this plot?
If you like it, leave a message here.
If you don’t like it, be sure to leave a message, just leave it in this paragraph.
Some people say that the combat power has collapsed. I have to defend this matter.
This book only has three stages: extraordinary, immortal, and eternal, not a hundred stages. It can’t be beaten across realms.
In addition, the protagonist spent two days exploring the rules of the Third Demon God, hoping to defeat the eleven top transcendent beings.
It's not like the weakest among the eleven, that would be difficult.
No matter how awesome the Demon God's rules are, after just 2 days of trial and error, you can't really cut 5 into 2 2.5... That's when it really breaks down.
Strong rules can defeat the devil's rules. Wasn't the devil [Ten Thousand Eyes] killed by the Six Blinds? You control the rules of the devil, but you are not strong in all aspects, others can still kill you.
Now being able to defeat many top transcendent beings is already a very high level of combat power.
Many readers would like to see one punch in a second, which would be great, but they really can’t write about it later.
Some people say why the new path is so awesome and my hard work in training is of no use? You must be broken!
Answer: The new road will eliminate the old road. The new road must be simpler and easier. Otherwise, why would it be eliminated? Cars have replaced horse-drawn carriages. It’s a simple truth.
Some people say that extraordinary people are ruined, so you must be ruined!
Answer: The trading market brings together extraordinary people from multiple communities. There are so many worlds and hundreds of extraordinary people, but they are actually not many. The strongest people of the New Path Civilization all come from other communities, and the number is really small. !
Okay, that’s it for the rough explanation.
The fighting is not well written, so I'll try to think of as many solutions as possible. There's really no way around it, so you can whip it as much as you like.
Then take a day off.
I have finished writing a plot, and I haven’t rested for a long time. I will sort out the subsequent plot and write something light and happy. I will be back soon!
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