I am actually an author who is better at delicate emotions, psychological descriptions and daily portrayals. After adding a lot of psychological descriptions and several daily life scenes to the early plot of Iaier, although the length of the story has been lengthened, the delicateness of emotions and the perception have also improved a lot.
The editor also gave a lot of suggestions in this regard, which clarified the direction for me. I am very grateful to him.
From everyone's comments and complaints in the two-month serialization, I can feel that the portrayal of small details is indeed liked by many people. It can be said that everyone's comments have given me confidence in the direction I have set. Thank you readers.
Compared with other similar works, the characters will pay more attention to the growth of the main losers and Will.
Maybe it's like, compared with the development of constantly drawing new characters and new wives, it pays more attention to the sense of cultivation in the game, and is more inclined to constantly draw more powerful weapons and armor.
I hope to make everyone feel the wild love of the blackened heroines wrapped in delicate emotions.
About the subsequent plot arrangement of this book.
The content on the shelves will finish the part of the divorce in one go. You can read it directly without dragging it out by subscribing directly after it is put on the shelves!
The foreshadowing of the heroines is sufficient, and the subsequent plot has everything you want.
After all, compared to the heroines, I may be the one who wants to beat Will, the guy who is always on the edge of danger.
About the listing.
Let me say one more thing, I hope everyone can subscribe more.
Subscribe in the first month!
Don't keep the book, A Zi will cry when she sees the backstage.
Because I am a social animal, I am usually busy with work, basically I write when I commute and get home from get off work.
I will try my best to update while ensuring the quality, at least I can complete the full attendance every month.
Hello everyone, I am A Zi.
Because according to my pace, the plot of the first stage is basically finished, so I mark it here as the end of the first volume.
The following will enter a new development that is popular, so I will write a little postscript.
Here is the situation.
Because the release of this book has used up all my drafts, I have been writing and revising the first 10,000 or 20,000 words more than the published part since the beginning of this book, because some feelings and emotions may not be more thoroughly understood until the end, and I will go back and revise the previous ones.
After the drafts were used up, the character transformation of Treya was relatively not so good, and the recent work was also very busy, so the past two weeks were basically 2k per update, and the time for revision was basically almost as long as the writing time.
But I will not give up. I can guarantee full attendance every month, which means 90,000 updates per month.
For example, there will be fewer updates in the beginning of this month, and there may be more in the end.
Hey, we are about to enter the popular plot.
Ah Zi is also looking forward to it wwww.
(Will, I have wanted to poke you for a long time, wait for me!)
Chapter 171 Two Doors
I am sorry that I have been using up my drafts because I was accompanying a distant relative on the weekend recently. Then I didn’t notice that the chapter numbers of the updated chapters and the draft chapters did not match, so I added a chapter twice.
I will give you a free chapter.
I will read the comments section, but I will read the whole chapter every two or three days because I am too busy.
I am really sorry this time.
Please forgive Ah Zi for updating almost 110,000 words this month.
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For Will, who is standing in front of the city of Yavik and reading this letter...
The confusion in his brain may be no less than that of Iel who wrote the letter.
This...
This letter...
It can directly make him ignore all the weird things he encountered today and top the weird list today.
This, this, this... What are these and what are they? !
Xiu didn't apply for the job?
Then who is the "protagonist" now?
Wait, does this have something to do with the name of Qiming Star not being "inherited" but chosen by himself?
In this case, who will be kicked out of the team?
Leah and Treya set out to find me?
That's not right.
Why did they set out to find me? !
Hmm... it seems that the captain is missing, which is indeed worth looking for.
But... why do they seem... as if they know where they are going?
Did someone tell them?
No, no, no...
The more confusing thing is...
Liya...
Liya might be...
near me?
I don't know why, the other descriptions, even the one where Xiu didn't appear, gave Will a weird feeling of "something wrong", but...
Liya's description, however, gave Will a kind of...
chill that started from the back.
Even the cerebral cortex began to numb.
Why... why is this?
Liya...
Liya should have come here because she cares about me... right?
If I meet her, I just need to tell her, and I should... should be able to follow them into their team and explore as the Star of the Morning Star.
After all...
She should be a very kind teacher...
right?
There are more and more mysteries.
Whether it was the green strange stone that suddenly appeared, or the missing Xiu seen in the letter, or the missing "Former Qiming Star" found before, or even Leah and Treya who ran out now...
They were all "mysteries" in Will's hands now.
But these mysteries were far apart, and there seemed to be some faint clues in between, but they could not be grasped.
The next clue closest to him now is probably... probably...
Ice under the moon?
"Little Will? How's it going?"
While Will was staring at the letter closely, he waved Shona's palm.
The open five fingers waved repeatedly in front of his eyes.
"Your condition...is not quite right."
Shona was very keen, and she could tell at a glance that Will's condition was abnormal.
"Why don't we leave today? On the one hand, you are very unlucky, and on the other hand... it seems that you were a little distracted after reading the letter?"
Will also began to think.
The weird things that started happening today seemed to remind me in an "outside" way that something bad was going to happen.
but……
Will reflected on his first half of life.
When his life was almost in danger, he was attacked by Leah.
When there was a social and existential crisis of falling out with the royal family, it was when Treya broke off the engagement.
Even later, when he actually died suddenly, he contributed one of the most comic scenes in the book.
It's obvious!
As a cannon fodder villain, the more dangerous the situation, the easier it is to trigger important plot points!
This is the biggest difference between him and the protagonist!
At this time, you have to face the difficulties to get the real clues!
He realized.
It must be the apocalypse to be so unlucky today. Just to tell him that today is the most suitable time to explore the dungeon.
Anyway, he will die in a year, and he will definitely not die now.
"It's okay, we have to leave today! Something good will happen today!"
Will shook his hair, pushed up his glasses and spoke.
"Why do I feel like... within these ten seconds, you seem to have had an epiphany?"
Shona was so frightened by his momentum that she took two steps back.
"Okay. Then Qiming Star -"
"Let's go today!"
Will picked up the second half of the sentence.
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The dungeon exploration went very smoothly, even to a fault.
Floor 51…
Floor 57...
But, perhaps this kind of "smoothness" is another kind of weirdness for Will.
"I always feel that this dungeon has some subtle changes from when we explored the path before."
Standing at the door of the 58th floor, Shona did not open the door and stood with her hands folded.
"Ah? Nothing? I feel like this is the normal dungeon that I have lived in for forty years." The swordsman uncle scratched his beard and said.
"That's right, I agree with this uncle's opinion." The magician girl almost opened the door.
"What a big deal, anyway, you are here, Vice Captain Shona." The Holy Shieldsman waved his hand, not caring at all.
"Yeah." The archer nodded, seeming to agree with the words of the three people in front of him.
Shona held her forehead, with an expression on her face that said, "These four people are really hopeless."
Then she looked at Will.
Will gave her an affirmative look in return.
In fact, they had obtained the guide written before opening up wasteland dungeons, especially before reaching the final BOSS. This guide is placed in the Adventurers Association and can be accessed for free.
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