I'm Actually The Big Villain In The Book

Volume 6 Extremely Long Reflections

Volume 6 is over!

I wrote after four o'clock last night, and finally coded out the last chapter. I turned my head and saw that it was getting bright outside, so I gave up the plan to continue some testimonials, and went to take a nap for a while.

Before I wrote the sixth volume, I felt that this volume was not easy to write.

It's not "difficult to write" in the literal sense, but it feels awkward to many old readers.

In fact, the original outline is different from the content written now.

The sixth volume in the original plan was the end of "Fengning Civil Disturbance Chapter", and Wei Changtian entered a bigger stage.

Of course, this main line goal must have been completed.

But to be honest, due to the reaction of many readers, the development of some characters actually deviated from the outline.

So in the testimonials, I will try my best to explain why I wrote it like this according to each character, and why some characters are changed.

The first one is Qin Zhengqiu.

The plot of Qin Zhengqiu has not been changed.

This character laid the groundwork from the fourth and fifth volumes, and completely changed in the sixth volume.

His relationship with Wei Changtian has also changed from "boss and subordinate" to "neither enemy nor friend".

The question about him may be mainly why he wanted to kill Wei Changtian.

This is actually explained in the text.

Because Wei Changtian once told him in the story of "meeting a fairy in a dream" that "only one person can become a fairy in this world".

Qin Zhengqiu was only second rank before, so he didn't care about this matter.

And when the Moon Picking Sword appeared, even though he found a chance to break through first rank, he still didn't think about becoming an immortal.

It wasn't until Wei Changtian exposed the real dragon's forehead scale that it completely aroused Qin Zhengqiu's desire to "become a fairy".

This is the case with many things.

If there is no hope, there is a high probability that the National People's Congress will not have expectations.

But if there is a glimmer of hope, that person may be able to desperately pursue this glimmer of hope, and even sacrifice everything.

The second one is Chu Xianping.

Chu Xianping's plot has not changed.

The original plan was that his identity in this volume would have a breakthrough.

No longer just Wei Changtian's military adviser, but slowly changing to a direction of being completely independent.

If you are looking for a reference.

There is a high probability that it is Chu Xuan from "Infinite Horror", or Zhuge Liang.

The third one is Ning Yongnian.

Ning Yongnian's plot has been changed.

And it's a big change.

In the outline, he should have died in the next volume, or the next volume, and the cause of death was also his voluntary sacrifice in order to resist the enemy.

In fact, I originally wanted to completely portray the image of Ning Yongnian as a traitor through such a big plot, so as to make the complexity of this important character more three-dimensional.

At the same time, it can also leave a branch line for the next big battle.

However, when I wrote about Ling Boting's negotiation, it may be because I read the comments, or it may be because the whole volume lacks a climax, so I temporarily let him die.

Of course, Wei Changtian wanted to kill him wholeheartedly, and that won't change.

Now that I think about it, it’s actually pretty good to write it this way. After all, Ning Yongnian survived for so long, and I feel a bit procrastinated.

It's just limited by the space, in the end, the sublimation of his characters was not particularly good, which is a bit regrettable.

The fourth one is Yangliu Poetry.

There is nothing to say about this. The increase in the role of Yang Liushi in the sixth volume is to pave the way for her future plot.

I said before that each character has a complete story line, and then Comrade Xiao Yang is the focus.

Fifth, Xu Suisui.

About the role of Xu Suisui.

To be honest, I really didn't expect her to be so annoying before I wrote it.

In fact, I spent a lot of space in the fifth volume to write about her daily interaction with Wei Changtian. I originally wanted to give her some favorability.

But since her series of "Riddler" operations, her popularity has declined sharply, and the comments are all scolding her.

I even posted a single chapter to explain it

First of all, Xu Suisui's plot has not been changed, and there is no way to change it.

She has a great influence on the subsequent plot, if it is changed, there is a high probability that the outline will be redone.

Secondly, I now understand why everyone hates Xu Suisui so much.

The key point may not be in this "character", but that I made a mistake in writing skills, or a mistake in plot design.

For online articles, especially cool articles, the core of all "cool points" is "poor information".

To put it bluntly, there is a gap in the information mastered by the protagonist and the supporting role.

I'm already awesome, but you don't know it.

I can recite ancient poems from my previous life, but you think I'm illiterate.

I'm a hidden rich second generation, but my girlfriend thinks I'm poor.

I am actually the boss behind the scenes of the company, but my boss only treats me as an ordinary social animal.

It is because of these information gaps that readers want to watch the moment when the protagonist uses these information gaps to pretend.

As the saying goes, "expectation".

Wei Changtian's previous information gap was full until Xu Suisui appeared.

As soon as this character appeared, Wei Changtian became the weak side at both ends of the information gap.

Xu Suisui knew what he was going to do, even his character and thoughts.

This will undoubtedly make people very uncomfortable.

After all, when most people read novels, they must assume the role of the protagonist.

After understanding this point, I became more determined not to change the outline.

Because what Wei Changtian did in the game against Xu Suisui was actually to break the information gap and make the situation develop in a completely uncontrollable direction.

And up to now, Xu Suisui's information advantage has basically disappeared.

In other words, in future plots, she is actually an important character who also has a system cheat and has similar but not exactly the same goals as Wei Changtian.

Sixth, Lee Parasol Tree.

I actually changed the plot of Lee Parasol Tree a bit.

She is different from Xu Suisui. When I wrote that she left Fengyuan, I knew that the future would be very unpleasant.

But I still want to say a few words for her.

Actually she is not stupid.

All her motives are for "Da Bong", the name of Da Bong.

Preserving Dafeng is more important than Wei Changtian.

That's why she made a series of seemingly stupid decisions.

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From God's point of view, whether it's Wei Changtian, Li Qi, or even anyone else, they understand the situation in Fengning and Ningxia better than she does.

But this actually means that in other people's minds, the country "Dabong" is not the most important.

Needless to say, Wei Changtian, he actually didn't care much about whether Dafeng was subjugated or not.

What Li Qi really values ​​is not the nominal "big tribute", but the dignity of the country.

Only Li Parasol Tree wants to do his best to avoid the subjugation of the country.

So she gave up almost everything she could.

I have read all the comments of the readers.

Some people think she is hopeless, some people think she is useless, some people think she is stupid, some people think she should be written to death.

In fact, I really thought about writing her to death.

But finally think about it.

I even changed her ending to be better than originally planned.

It means that Wei Changtian finally allowed Li Qi to restore Dafeng in Jianchang Mansion.

Although there is only one state, Dafeng did not die in name after all, and it was the last thing he did for Li Parasol Tree.

As for Li Parasol Tree's ambition of "Every time he kills a person, I will save a person", it actually represents the transformation of Li Parasol Tree after going through so many things.

In short, the plot of Lee Parasol Tree is over here.

Even if it reappears later, it should be the finale.

The above is the explanation of several important figures in the sixth volume.

Long-form web articles actually have a common problem.

In order to promote the plot, new characters must continue to appear.

But in order to take care of the readers' emotions, positive characters rarely leave the scene.

This leads to more and more characters being written, and in the end most of them are left alone, and even the author has to forget that there is such a person in the end.

I don't like this way of writing very much, but it is impossible for everyone to give too much space.

As a book friend said——

"Wei Changtian's wife says a word, and a chapter is over."

In this case, someone must leave.

Rather than slowly fading away until it is forgotten by me and the readers, I prefer to give everyone an ending.

Youjia's ending is sad.

The ending of Lee Parasol Tree is happy.

Another example is the important roles of Xiao Feng, Lao Zhangtou, and Ning Yongnian before, as well as the supporting roles of Wu Ding and Bai Youheng, and even Wang Gan and Yun Lian, who are too small to be small.

Everyone has played an important role in a certain paragraph or in some plots, and then at some point in the future, they will end in a "unwatered" and reasonable way.

I think it's pretty good, and I will still write like this in the future.

All right.

After forcing Lai Lai so much, it turned out to be 3,000 words.

So the purpose of this testimonial can finally be revealed!

It is clear! I'm taking a day off!

Resume update tomorrow!

Finally, as usual, I wish you all the best of luck and good health! !

ps: Volume 7: I recommend Xuanyuan with my blood.

From Lu Xun's "Self-inscribed Portrait": "I don't know if Han Xingquan doesn't know, I recommend Xuanyuan with my blood."

Attached is the source of the titles of the first six volumes.

Volume 1: Chang Ye is not finished.

From Su Shi's "Ode to the Former Red Cliff": The face and the pillow are in the boat, and I don't know the whiteness of the East.

Volume Two: Soaring to 90,000 miles.

From Li Bai's "Shang Li Yong": The roc rises with the same wind in one day and soars up to 90,000 miles.

The third volume: One Hundred Thousand Banners Kill Yama.

From Chen Yi's "Three Chapters of Lingmei": This is to go to Quantai to recruit the old department, and kill Yan Luo with a hundred thousand banners.

Volume Four: The Iron Horse and Glacier Fall into Dreams.

From Lu You's "The Wind and Rain on November 4th": Lie down in the night and listen to the wind and rain, and the iron horse and ice river fall into a dream.

Volume 5: One sword touches the dragon's gate.

From Li Bai's "Gongwu Crossing the River": The Yellow River comes to the west to decide Kunlun, roaring thousands of miles to touch the dragon's gate.

Volume Six: Rivers and Lakes Night Rain Ten Years of Light.

From Huang Tingjian's "Send Huang Jifu": Tao Li Chunfeng a glass of wine, Rivers and Lakes night rain ten years of light.

thank you all!

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