【After Tianyu met Huo Linfei and Miao Shoujun, the Lion King's men also began to appear.】
【During the battle and conversation with Tianyu, they mentioned that they wanted to hand over something to create a small suspense.】
【It was also in this battle that Tianyu demonstrated the power of supernatural locks and weapons in front of the audience for the first time.】
【The so-called armament is a fighting form lower than the super beast's armament. It stimulates the super energy in the body through the super power lock, and then turns the super energy into the corresponding armor. In addition to being armed, the super beast warrior can also rely on the power lock to summon his own exclusive mobile phone, called"Shanchi".’!】
【After being armed, Tianyu cooperated with Shanchi to take away Huo Linfei and Miao Shoujun, all the way to his master Xuan Yizi. Since then, the village chief of Novice Village and the protagonist have met, and the real main plot has begun.】
【Try to complete the above content within one or two episodes. After setting up suspense and creating a strong atmosphere, quickly enter the main plot. 】
Writing this, Lin Yun could be considered to have completed the layout of the beginning of the plot. He pretended to be a little tired and stopped for a moment, and then slowly exhaled.
Lin Yun sat slumped in a chair and muttered to himself:
"The plot at the beginning should be like this. It is suspenseful and compelling, and the pace of entering the main plot is not slow."
"But the subsequent connection involves more detailed settings. Whether it is auxiliary settings or character settings, we need to continue to refine them before writing them down.……"
Having said this, he took out the notebook and pen beside him and began to write and draw on them, pretending to think.
The audience outside was also watching the opening plot on the screen, thinking and exclaiming:
"My Cao, this Lin Yun is amazing. He actually wrote such a specific opening plot in one breath."
"Indeed, if the plot at the beginning were performed, I would still be willing to watch it. I also want to see who these sudden villains are, who this girl is, and how the protagonist group rises so quickly"
"I have also written online novels before, and the big guys often say that there must be a story and events at the beginning. A common technique is to put pressure on the protagonist, and then let the protagonist perform under the pressure to show his character."
"Indeed, when he wrote this, I really wanted to read it. I don’t know how strong the Lion King and her men are. What other weapons are there, and what do they look like?"
"Alas, it's a pity that he has to think about the setting again, so he should continue writing quickly. What's the plot next? What is Xuan Yizi like? Please write it quickly, brother!"
Every audience was led by Lin Yun all the way, and they followed the entire opening plot, and unconsciously immersed themselves in the story.
For this kind of plot that adheres to the opening design standards, it is actually very easy for the audience or readers to be confused. Bring it in because people just want to see the protagonist and the plot. If you have it, they will naturally watch it.
This group of viewers has watched the game several times, so their evaluation of the story is also at a certain level, and they can easily It can be seen that Lin Yun's beginning is good.
At least many people are willing to read on, and are very willing to read on.
Including the judges on the judges' bench, seeing Lin Yun write out the beginning in one breath, that is also a compliment in their hearts. Continuously.
Seeing that Lin Yun was thinking again, Bingbing took this opportunity to say something more.
Bingbing said:
"Wow, it seems that Lin Yun, the player we are paying attention to, is indeed very efficient."
"It's only been twenty-five minutes now, and he has already finished writing the opening plot. He has used less than one-sixth of our three hours of creative time."
"As for the quality of this opening, let’s ask a few judges and teachers to evaluate it."
"Teacher Ouyang, what do you think of Lin Yun’s beginning? Bingbing turned to Ouyang Yibing and asked.
Ouyang Yibing did not hesitate when he heard the question, and quickly started to comment on the camera:
"I think this beginning is quite qualified, at least it is above the passing line."
"And why do you say this? The key is that player Lin Yun has the right idea. He wrote the beginning of the plot in one breath. This kind of smoothness is a rare state in creation."
"First of all, after Lin Yun determined the world view, he decisively determined the story to be an adventure style, that is, the protagonist goes through all the journey and finally confronts the villain."
"Then he quickly determined the basic characters of the villain and the good guys. The villain side is a leader and several subordinates. On the decent side are the guide and the protagonist group. These are relatively common character settings."
"For example, the guide on the decent side is set as an outsider, waiting for crisis. His disciple happens to be the heroine, and there is also a supporting character next to the protagonist, the one named Slim Jun"
"These characters just form the most basic triangle relationship, which is our most common lineup of two men and one woman. Although this lineup is not too novel, it is absolutely stable and not prone to problems."
"Therefore, I think that Lin Yun, in addition to being imaginative and creative as we have seen, is not only obsessed with forced innovation. In terms of stories, he is willing to take a safe path and accept mature writing methods. His thinking is very correct.!"
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