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"If this work wasn't fun, even if it didn't require any very innovative plot, it would still be a semi-masterpiece!"

In addition to the exclamation of the audience, several judges on the judges' bench also did the same. Huang Yulang was the first to speak highly of it. As soon as the words"demigod" came out, this animation can indeed be evaluated, and it was even conservative. After reading it, Teacher Ouyang naturally nodded with satisfaction after listening to Huang Yulang’s evaluation:

"I was worried earlier that although Lin Yun is quite experienced, his emotional portrayal might be rough."

"Because for children, emotional feelings are more direct. For a work, the importance of emotions is self-evident. It can even be said that most stories are written about emotions."

"The drama described by Lin Yun clearly creates suspense and emotion."

"In the exchange between the Lion King, Xuan Yizi and Huo Linfei, we can obviously see the different emotions of the three people, and even feel their emotions."

"Huo Linfei is confused. He must have lost his memory, so he no longer recognizes Xuan Yizi and the Lion King, so his emotions are relatively confused and out of touch."

"On the contrary, the Lion King's mood is relatively heavy and helpless. Because we can see from the dialogue that one hundred thousand years ago, maybe Xuan Yizi and Huo Linfei were friends of the Lion King, but one hundred thousand years later they turned against each other."

"This loneliness can be clearly seen in the several times when the Lion King restrained himself from using force."

"Especially the last sentence"I don't want to kill you personally", there is a kind of helplessness between heroes cherishing each other and becoming enemies between heroes. That kind of dissatisfaction with fate is difficult to grasp."

"In just a few sentences, the characters can be written so clearly, which is really amazing!"

Teacher Xuemei also nodded and agreed:"Yes, you can also see the entanglement on Xuan Yizi's side."

"It can be seen that he must be hostile to his former friends for some special reason"

"It is difficult to describe these details through lines."

"So when I said earlier that Lin Yun's creative level is higher than mine, I'm not exaggerating, hahaha."

Fortunately, both of them have a certain pattern. Seeing that Lin Yun's story is so well written, there is no jealousy, but joy.

Huang Yulang also has a similar feeling, so he said from the beginning that this super beast is at least semi-armed. A masterpiece.

But Wang Ze next to him didn't think so. He just felt embarrassed when he heard several people bragging about a player here. Damn it, as a judge, you can't assume the status of a judge, but you are still bragging about a player here. It’s really out of character.

He looked at a few people and said, then he said in turn:

"Hey, I really envy the three teachers for their closeness to the people. Isn’t this Lin Yun a relational person? Why do you praise him so much?"

"In my opinion, this piece of drama is pretty well written and somewhat interesting. If you put it among young creators, it is considered to be at a high level."

"But if you look at creators of all ages, this kind of literary drama can be written by many seniors, so it’s not surprising."

"Moreover, the previous teachers were still saying that this guy is very creative. Why, when I look at it now, does the plot have no creativity at all? Aren’t they all stories about bad streets?"

Wang Ze has been criticized by them before, so now he is too lazy to give face and speaks more and more bluntly.

However, this person's words are not nice, but his words are rough and not rough, and there is some truth.

Because although this piece of writing is good, it is also It’s not too exaggerated.

The praises of the previous three teachers are all based on the level of young creators.

Most young people lack experience, so they are good at creativity and imagination, but they are rarely good at writing literary dramas. Lin Yun’s paragraph The literature and drama are good, and they are considered top-notch among young creators, but in front of the seniors, they can only pass.

Teacher Xuemei said that just because she is not a screenwriter, so it is normal that her creative ability is not as good as Lin Yun.

But the truth is this , but the words cannot be said straightforwardly.

The three of them admired the young people, and Wang Ze spoke like this, which would offend others.

Teacher Ouyang would not care too much, but Teacher Xuemei and Huang Yulang were different.

Teacher Xuemei retorted directly :"oh?"

"Does Judge Wang Ze know that Lin Yun is a young man?"

"If young people don’t use the standards of young people, why should they use the standards of old-timers?"

"Do you mean to say that your Old Master is no better than"The Romance of the Three Kingdoms"?"

As soon as these words came out, they directly refuted Wang Ze's argument and made the other party speechless.

Wang Ze still wanted to quibble, but at this time Huang Yulang also spoke to help:

"Yes, Teacher Xuemei is right."

"Everyone knows that primary school students are better than primary school students when they go to school. Where does the idea of ​​primary school students being compared with professors come from?"

"Besides, praise creativity and write routines. Creativity is used in setting, so the plot cannot be innovated casually."

"After all, whether it is reality or a story, it is all about a set of logic that normal people can understand."

"Unless, only those with mental illness can understand other logical things. After all, there is something wrong with their minds."

"You think so, Teacher Xuemei?"Good guy, he also knows how to find his colleagues to cooperate.