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【There was no other way. In order to protect the entire dragon clan and the warriors of the Qinglong clan, Jianlong could only choose to return his life to the Scorpion King, hoping to save the remaining Qinglong clan members.】

【Stegoryu asked if he could keep the Azure Dragon clan if he died. The Scorpion King responded: Maybe……】

【Stegosaurus listened, thinking that the other party agreed, so he closed his eyes and waited for death. Unexpectedly, the Scorpion King just controlled the scorpion tail behind him, easily killed the Stegosaurus, and completed what he just said.】

【It turns out that what she said was still the same: Perhaps the nature of the soul is bloodthirsty, and revenge is just to give bloodthirsty a reason.】

【At this point, the sword dragon was killed, and the entire Qinglong tribe was slowly slaughtered. The only ones left were Long Jian and others in the suburbs. 】

Writing this can be regarded as a simple explanation of the Scorpion King.

Two of the famous lines from The Scorpion King have already been written and appeared, and indeed the audience outside screamed as soon as they appeared.

Nothing but these words are really extraordinary.

When the audience outside saw the death of Stegodon and the easy slaughter of the Qinglong clan, they couldn't help but sigh in their hearts and sigh.

"Damn, I'm getting more and more worried now. How come the super beast weapons written by Lin Yun are all about killing people? Can this be shown to children?"

"I don’t know, but I think it’s just right to show us. I have to say, this plot is really adult-oriented."

"Indeed, it’s a good thing that Lin Yun wrote the massacre of the city in words, otherwise the children outside would be frightened and cry when he visualized it like this."

"And the Scorpion King seems to have a very high level of style. The lines she said are really powerful and very cool."

"Yes, yes, especially this line, not only has a strong character, it is simply written with great skill. Looks like a middle grader, but is inspiring"

"Maybe the nature of the soul is bloodthirsty, and revenge just gives bloodthirsty a reason. Oh my, this is so well written."

"Lin Yun wrote before that what has happened must be done again, and then he wrote that victory can bring honor. How long has it been before that he is wholesale of golden sentences again?"

"It’s not just one sentence, just two sentences! I particularly like that one. I don’t have the right to choose between heaven and hell. It’s so pretentious!"

"Damn it, I’ll just set it up as a personalized signature. Lin Yun’s literary talent is also pretty good. He’s awesome."

"And listening to the previous conversation, it seems that the Scorpion King and Stegosaurus know each other, and this Stegosaurus feels sorry for her."

"I don’t know, maybe it’s a relationship problem, maybe it’s because this Stegosaurus was always in trouble and gave up when he was young."

"It makes sense, it's usually this kind of plot. Although it's a bit cliche, it doesn't matter, as long as the level of force is high enough."

Every audience member was immediately attracted by the Scorpion King's lines after just listening to a few sentences.

I have to say that the character of the Scorpion King reflected in his story looks very good. Although he is a villain, With the proper character, it is normal for this kind of villain to be recognized by others.

And from the perspective of the audience, they recognize it. And from the perspective of the judges, the character of the Scorpion King is still up.

Ouyang The teacher likes to comment on poor writing. He said directly:

"Lin Yun's ability to create characters is really good. Whether it's the Stegosaurus in the front or the Scorpion King in the back, he can emphasize his character through just a few lines."

"Especially the Scorpion King, who seems to be more important. Her method is to massacre the city, and her statement is bloodthirsty. Although she is not a decent person, she writes that her words and deeds are consistent, and she constantly emphasizes her character."

"I said he really wrote well! Can!"

Teacher Xuemei:"Yes, and there is also suspense."

"Looking at the conversation between Stegosaurus and the Scorpion King, it’s true. I wonder if Stegosaurus has let this woman down."

"But you have to look at the details later. He places the foreshadowing and suspense very well. It is shown from the beginning so that the audience will not give up on the drama."

"I think Lin Yun did a better job, with the same rhythm and no ink marks. Huang Yulang also added:

"Although this is the story of the second universe, as soon as you enter this universe, the villain immediately appears and then creates a strong character."

"Moreover, as soon as the villain comes out, he slaughters the city and kills people, so he quickly becomes hostile to the protagonist group. I think we will fight soon"

"His pacing is really fast, and there is no dull plot. If I were an audience member, I could watch it in one go!"

Teacher Ouyang:"This guy has good creative skills, and his rhythm is pretty good."

"Keep reading. Don't tell me. I really want to see what the identity of the Scorpion King is."

"Her two lines also made people feel deeply."

Several judges commented from a professional perspective, but they failed to point out the faults of the plot, and even praised them constantly.

There was nothing they could do. Lin Yun's super beast weapon was already excellent, but if there were problems with the rhythm and plot, No.

But he didn't know, and he didn't care about the external comments. As for the plot, he just kept writing.

These three hours of creative time couldn't be wasted at all, otherwise he was afraid that he wouldn't be able to finish the plot.

So he continued to work, he As my hands continued to type on the keyboard, the story continued...