I'm by no means a softie

One or Two Winds in the World: "Using the manuscript again? Are you kidding? Didn't I send it to you fifty minutes ago? Brother, are you urging the manuscript every fifty minutes? That's too much. If you do this again, I will block you!"

One or Two Winds in the World: "Speaking of which, you haven't given me any advice after reading it. How is the writing? Can you comment?"

Xia Sheng did not reply, because he did not know how to give a better evaluation, so he began to seek help, joined the male editor group, and asked them what they thought after reading the first draft of "The Chronicle of Sword and Law" "Everyone, please tell me, don't think about it.

Liangfeng’s platinum status, his platinum status came from women, and now he has switched to men. He has basically no readers in this field. You can only think of him as a newcomer to the Internet. Let’s give this opening chapter of "Sword and Law"

Comment, tell me more”

Fifty thousand words, for an online article, is just the beginning of a fast-paced article that can be seen by the naked eye in the market. This opening can even be reduced to 10,000 words after reading the first three chapters of a novel. After carefully looking at the title and introduction, I can basically decide

Whether this novel can be signed will most likely affect the life or death of the work. "Chronicle of Sword and Law", is there any problem with the title? Point out the subject matter directly, "Sword and Law", and briefly mention "Chronicle" to bring the work to the work.

It has a sense of solemnity and orthodoxy, although there is nothing explosive about it, but it is also not poisonous. It looks like it is following a serious path. Basically, no one will not click on this book just because of the title, and this is enough.

Choosing a strange title may attract a lot of people's attention, but it will also offend a lot of people, indirectly losing some readers. Let's look at the introduction of "Sword and Law" again, it depicts the world of transgression very straightforwardly.

", "big scene", and pointed out that the golden finger of the protagonist should be very familiar with it, and told the readers about science, divine power and royal power, empire and commision in smooth and beautiful words...

Che, Daza? Can you write it well?

The reader is dubious, and after a slight increase in expectations, the protagonist 'I' makes an impassioned speech. The scene at the beginning of the chapter is 'But before that, I want to drift in a lonely boat on the sea, and survive in a small boat on the sea? I want to die.

La?

The reader's sense of expectation increased again, and he subconsciously wanted to see how he survived. The last sentence of the introduction: "This is a story that happened 20 billion light years away. This is the chronicle of a real fantasy planet. It is true.

, what are you bragging about? If you write poorly, I will blast you to death!

This sentence will once again raise the readers' expectations. I suspect that many people will click on the table of contents of this book and officially end the reading. In terms of the main text, is the beginning of "The Chronicle of Sword and Law" qualified?

(Editor-in-Chief of Team 2) Baodao: “It’s a record-breaking, let alone the female protagonist, in the first sixteen chapters, there is no real intelligent creature except the protagonist!

(Editor-in-Chief of Team 6) Peanut: "Nonsense, the guy who made friends with the protagonist is intelligent and well-born. Didn't you pay attention?"

(Chief Editor of Team 2) Baodao: "There is no civilization without words, but I am not being honest. Although there are no supporting characters, the opening elements are very complete. Goldfinger, the world view, and the protagonist's image are all revealed, and countless small conflicts are arranged around survival.

, and finally solved it successfully, logging into the island leads to the next plot... There is no problem. Chief editor of Group 2) Baodao: "I have been thinking about what kind of story Yiliangfeng will use as a starting point, which can explain the big world background more naturally.

And arouse the readers' emotions to generate expectations, instead of being dissuaded by the simple background and the name of the person. For example, "The Lord of Secrets" is an opening that has been proven to be effective. The protagonist is in the "center of the storm" and commits suicide.

And resurrected, and buried the main plot through the diary, leaving a sense of suspense to attract readers to read, but there is still a way, the setting is very blunt, the environment and life details are too long, and other shortcomings,

In order to make the world more real and unavoidable, I thought that Yiliangfeng would use this similar method and writing style, but to my surprise, a completely different and amazing sentence summarized the beginning of this chapter, "The Monk's House is wonderful!"

(Editor-in-Chief of Team 9) yy: "The protagonist of "Sword and Law" is in a desperate situation at the beginning, so it has a faster pace and can better arouse the readers' emotions. Through the celestial bodies, physical rules, different marine creatures and the sky that are different from reality,

Birds and various natural wonders bring readers into the book. The story has a tight rhythm, with rushes and slowdowns, and the world setting leaves no trace. Facing the strange natural conditions and magical creatures in other worlds, it is difficult to leave a mark in people's hearts.

It creates a strong sense of suspense and makes people want to continue reading to see what new things the author can come up with, thus creating the expectation to follow the protagonist to continue exploring the world in the book... The disadvantage is that the foreshadowing may be a bit long.

I didn’t feel it when I was reading it, but after reading it I suddenly realized that 50,000 words seems to have just entered the main plot! This progress is a bit slow... You should quickly let Yiliang Feng write it!!"

(Chief Editor of Group 7) December: "The writing is concise and razor-like, which is rare in online articles. It is also different from the writing style before Yiliangfeng. When I saw the clip of the protagonist fishing while controlling the sail to escape from the storm, I thought

I read the magical version of "The Old Man and the Sea" and then I discovered that the writing style of "The Sword and the Law" is different from that of online writing and traditional literature. There is very little rhetoric in the characters' language, only descriptions of otherworldly scenery and creatures.

When the time comes, I will be willing to show the gorgeous brushwork, which reads like a poem and doubles the look and feel when paired with illustrations!”

(Chief Editor of Group 1): "(Picture) I hate this picture the most. The dark moon rises in the dark night, and the cold stars quietly appear in the sky. The storm under the water ice cloud not far behind the protagonist creates huge waves. He is preparing to go in the opposite direction.

I ran away for my life, but I was hallucinating because I was too tired. I saw a nebula in the night sky that looked suspiciously like the Milky Way galaxy. I immediately decided to drive a lone boat across the waves in the direction of the nebula, roaring: Fuck you, I want to go home...

…It’s funny but also a little sad, and with this painting that faithfully represents the spectacular scene at that time, it’s full of artistic content!”

(Editor-in-Chief of Group 6) Peanut: “Did Yiliangfeng paint these paintings himself or did he hire someone to paint them?”

Shengxia: "He drew it himself, but can you tell me more about the shortcomings? He is waiting for my review and evaluation."

There was a moment of silence in the group, and Baodao (chief editor of Group 2) spoke: "With many years of experience, I really feel that this book has an aura of 'asking for the highest', so I can only give one evaluation; Duo Ma!"

…

"I got it, I'm coding. I'll try to save a hundred thousand words of the manuscript and publish it."

In fact, Zhou Yumei knew how many strokes there were in the word "diligence" without editing. When Shengxia finished reviewing the manuscript and called him, he was sitting in front of the computer typing words, pausing often while thinking about it. Seven days had passed since the ban on Baoyu Community

, if nothing unexpected happens, there will be at least half of the seven-day lockdown period. Many residents in the community cannot bear the joy of being banned, and have also signed up to serve as volunteers. It is not excluded that they have a spirit of dedication, but it is mostly because they have been at home for so long.

Really, I wanted to take advantage of the convenience of work to go downstairs. Therefore, there were more and more volunteers in Zhou Yu's community, but the workload was only so small. Everyone was rushing to do it. Wu Wenyue also had more time to code in the attic at home.

Besides, except for necessary meals, he rarely went downstairs. He spent more time with the three girls, and they got along more harmoniously. They were not as troubled as they had been in the past few days, or had cold wars with Wu Wenyue at all times, and Wu Wenyue was more focused on it.

, concentrate on creating, and when inspiration is lacking, ideas gradually arise from what happened in the dream world at the dinner table with three girls. In this state, Zhou Yumei feels that being banned may not be of any benefit. Today is five o'clock.

Zhong and Wu were dizzy when they asked about the digits of the moon code. When they looked at the time, they went downstairs to prepare for cooking. They found that Xu Ning and Huang Tian were busy in the kitchen, and Zhao Qingge was sitting at the dining table picking vegetables. "I won't be needed today."

Stir-fried vegetables?”

Wu Wenyue asked casually, Xu Ning waved her hand: "You go and code, Sister Tian and I will speculate."

, I can live a comfortable life like this, surrounded by beautiful people at home and having nothing to eat but my mouth to eat, for the rest of my life!

Zhou Yumei smiled in her heart, looked around, then sat next to Zhao Qingge and helped her pick vegetables. After dinner, everyone put away the tableware together. Wu Wenyue finished washing the dishes and planned to go upstairs. Just as he sat down in front of the computer, his cell phone rang.

A three-person WeChat group called Jixiang Sanbao popped up on the screen. Li Peifeng initiated a video call. The members of the group include Wu Wenyue, Xu Ning, and Zhou Yumei. This is the Zi Huan Le Le family, the Happy family and other three groups.

After being disbanded, the xth three-person WeChat group established by President Xu in recent days was used to provide three people with free time, or phonesex...

As for the group name, it was naturally Li Peifeng who came up with it. Wu Wenyue suggested changing it several times, but gave up without getting approval. "Ning?!"

"You're back! Didn't you say two days ago that you might have to return to Beijing a few days late?"

During the video call, Xu Ning and Wu Wenyue were restrained in their bedrooms, their expressions a little startled, because Li Peifeng seemed to be outside the Capital Airport and made the call to them, "The matter was resolved smoothly, and we will return as scheduled!" Li Peifeng's tired face showed

With a depressed smile, Xu Ning hesitated: "But do you also want to..."

Li Peifeng's face immediately dropped: "Yes, like you, I also need to be quarantined at home!"

The two laughed when they heard this, and each said something to comfort Li Peifeng. Even if Li Peifeng returned to Beijing, she would not be able to visit them in Baoyu Community, which was under lockdown, because she would also have to undergo a fourteen-day quarantine. The three of them would not be able to meet each other until Baoyu Community was lifted.

It is possible that the return of Miss Xu did not affect the lives of the four people in Baoyu Community. The days passed wonderfully day by day. He Yimeng often sent WeChat messages to Zhou Yumei, saying, "Yesterday, I was an emotional trash can for another day."

I'm under a lot of psychological pressure." Come here quickly. Someone gave me a box of soda. I wonder if I want it. Wu Wenyue's answer is of course no!

At the beginning of the ban, supplies were relatively scarce. For the sake of his family and the happy life of the three women, he had no choice but to exchange work for things. He Yimeng got some fruits from his hands. Now that the ban is halfway over, the supplies provided by the community have stopped.

When they come up, they often give out some snacks, fruits and the like. No one in the community is short of surplus food. Wu Wenyue will naturally not sell her body for mere supplies!

Although the things He Yimeng had given him before were all converted into amounts by the system, which was helpful for obtaining lottery opportunities, Wu Wenyue was rich and powerful, and Wu Wenyue was mighty and unyielding, so they were definitely not affected by He Yimeng's or...

“No, keep it for yourself and drink it!

Wu Wenyue couldn't help but type one more line: "It's broad daylight and I just had breakfast, please be more restrained, even if it's at night?!

He Yimeng: "I'm looking for you at night, and you can't even come out. It just so happened that the fifth round of supplies arrived, and each group of volunteers had to go out to work. You also have an excuse. Wu Wenyue: "I won't go, the work is over.

I still have to go home and code.”

He Yimeng: "It's just God, nothing else. Yesterday I adopted a ragdoll cat from a visitor. It was born well and is only a few months old. Why don't you come and take a look?"

Wu Wenyue: "You can't accept gifts from visitors, right? Can you do this?"

He Yimeng: "It's not a gift. Come over and I'll explain it to you in detail."

"Ding~"

The WeChat group of volunteers in the community was calling for people to gather again. Wu Wenyue replied "Let's meet at the property management office." Then she hurriedly changed her clothes and went downstairs to work for twenty minutes. The volunteers in Wu's group put the clothes in the car away.

Unloading materials and sending them to the residents of each unit building has more people and strength, and everyone's experience is much more proficient than before. This kind of routine work is done very quickly. Wu Wenyue is done with her work, and she takes her share of the preparations.

He went home, but when he passed by Building No. 1, he saw He Yimeng and said hello to him, "Let's go to my house."

Wu Wenyue stopped, thinking about the WeChat chat with the other party just now, and frowned: "What kind of cat do you have in this situation? Is it free? Do you have cat food or anything?"

"Then you don't have to worry about it." He Yi Meng said with a smile in his eyes, "I just want to ask, don't you miss the cat?"

Most people can't control their fondness for small furry animals like cats, especially the ragdoll cat known as the Fairy among Cats, which is responsible for its good looks!

It is strange to say that since ancient times, both domestic and foreign literati have a unique preference for cats. There are countless senior cat lovers who are also writers, such as Hemingway, Bosch, Kerouac, and Hesse.

Wait, Qian Zhongshu and Lin Yin also had conflicts because of fights between their own cats. Nowadays, there are not many Internet article authors who keep cats. Perhaps it is because of the cats’ cold, arrogant but naturally cute personality, which makes them

Many literary and artistic creators have found resonance or inspiration in cats. Wu Wenyue originally wanted to raise one, but after thinking about it again, it was too troublesome. She believed that small things like cats and dogs are always abominations to other people's homes. uu Read the book

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"It's the sky, look at the cat?"

Zhou Yumei was a little moved, but she was obviously worried. After all, Xu Ning and the others were in the same community. If she communicated with He Yimeng, sooner or later her secret would be revealed, and then she would have to worry about "whether love will come or not."

He Yimeng rolled his eyes and seemed too lazy to speak. He turned around and left, "Then just look at the cat. I'll leave after a while."

Zhou Yumei thought for a moment and decided to take a few steps to keep up. After a dozen steps, the two entered the corridor and arrived at He Yimeng's home. Zhou Yumei put down the supply box in her hand and looked around the unchanged living room. She suddenly felt something was wrong. "Where is the cat? Not even a cat food."

There is no pot, where did you raise it?"

He Yimeng also put down the supplies in her hands, shook her head slightly, took off her mask, her white hair was floating gently, she stared at Wu Wenyue with a smile, and softly uttered: 6 Jiaojiao, softly.

Wu Wenyue's expression was stiff, as if she had touched a ten-amp switch socket, and her eyebrows were twitching: "Mengmeng, what the hell are you doing..."

He understood, where is the cat? Or maybe the woman in front of him is a cat?!

He Yimeng smiled even more and walked closer to Wu Wenyue. His hands were shining with a warm and thin light. He placed the fingers of his hands in front of his mouth as if they were like cat's whiskers. Then he puffed his mouth and made a hateful gesture: "?!~"

Seeing Wu Wenyue motionless, He Yimeng was a little dissatisfied. She stretched out her hand and lightly touched his face with her fingertips, and ordered: "Hurry up, Cat,~"