I'm The Hard Rice King
Chapter 268 Stir Fry Li Peifeng
Chapter 268 Stir Fry Li Peifeng
At 12:30 noon, Li Peifeng returned home. He received the documents from Lu Jing and Lin Zhihui in his e-mail, but he didn't read them. After finishing it, I sent it to the editor Xia Sheng who had been urging the manuscript.
To this day, he has basically clarified and straightened out the main characters and storyline of the book "Sword and Law". If there is anything left to be done, there are only small details that need to be improved a little bit, but he does not intend to continue to write down the outline in detail, but directly opens the text.
In Li Peifeng's view, making a detailed outline of the plot in each chapter in advance, although it is not easy to get stuck when writing the text, it is easier to restrict the author's improvisation, and the reading is less passionate.
Sometimes, as the author is writing and writing, he suddenly feels that another plot direction is more reasonable and natural, and the original idea is naturally invalid.
And this kind of situation can easily occur in an online novel with two to three million words. Not to mention that some authors just want the dumplings made with vinegar, and when they see that the dumplings are not selling well, they will directly run away in advance of the eunuch, let alone waste time writing a detailed outline.
Therefore, in most cases, writing detailed outlines is a waste of time and puts a seal on yourself.
Many online writers don't know how to write a detailed outline of more than 100,000 words. They just set the tone of the world setting, upgrade system, and plot direction, and then start to write.
Code 18,000 words every day, and think up the plot of the next day in advance, continue to code the next day, think of what to write on the third day before going to bed, and then push it down a little bit.
This is especially true for successful master authors. For them, asking them to write a detailed outline is like asking a chef in a five-star hotel to write out the steps of cooking before cooking.
They have written countless successful works, accumulatively creating tens of millions of words, and their minds are filled with all kinds of familiar ideas for creating online articles, characters, plots, and easy to come by.
Some great masters don't even talk about detailed outlines, they can't even write outlines...
Toad: "I never write an outline!"
Squid: "My settings are extremely detailed, but the plot doesn't do too much preparation."
Tricky: "My outline has determined everything. I think about some pictures I like in advance, and then arrange the plot to collide."
Dance: "It is enough to determine the important main line in the outline, and then think about the real small progress after writing."
One or two winds in the world: "I built a perfect stage, a magnificent and delicate world. I also portrayed the 'characters' with flesh and blood and stories. The 'story' came out naturally, it was not in my mind, It’s just in the character’s mind, it’s vulgar to write it out, it’s better to keep it a bit mysterious, so that I can also have a bit of expectation.”
"Is this your reason?"
Xia Sheng: "(Drip Khan) This is the reason why the document you sent me is only 8,000 words? Is this what you have achieved in more than a month? Apart from the character setting, there are only a few words that really involve the plot. It's less than nine hundred words. With such a big world background, if you do this, are you sure you can write it well?"
One or two winds in the world: "I have written everything I want to talk about in each volume. If it is too detailed, it is unnecessary. Editor, you don't want to be spoiled by me, do you?"
Xia Sheng: "Don't be poor. I just think that this thing is not directly proportional to the 700,000-word world structure you wrote before."
One or two winds in the world: "The 700,000 words are actually an outline. If you think so, do you think I'm not professional enough?"
Xia Sheng: "...It's true."
One or two winds in the world: "So when my book is released, I will give you a few more recommendations, big brother!"
Xia Sheng: "Don't worry, there will be. But you first code out the 30,000-character text. You wrote a female channel for so long and suddenly switched to a male channel. If you can't see the text, I have no idea. I can't fight for resources for you. .And your writing style of "Sword and Law" is quite different from the online writing on the market, I'm really afraid that you won't be able to grasp it."
There is one thing in the world: "I will try my best."
In fact, what Xia Sheng said was right, Li Peifeng's journey of changing his writing style was very difficult. Because he has greater ambitions, not only wanting to make "Sword and Law" a bridge level work between web and tradition, but also want to make a lot of money from it.
Just transferred more than 2 million yuan to his mother Yu Huizhi, and Li suffered a heavy loss in his wallet, and his desire to make money became stronger. Naturally, his attitude towards the creation of this book was extremely serious and cautious.
Not only for commercial considerations, he completely let go of the idea of self-indulgence, just for the presentation of the dream world. Four beginnings were also invalidated, with a total of 170,000 words. Before "Sword and Law" was officially written, it broke the record for the most number of words in a manuscript so far.
That's right, Li Peifeng has written a lot of beginnings, but after finishing them, he was not satisfied with them, so he discarded them one after another. But this is not in vain. During this process, he has honed his writing skills little by little. Maybe the next time he hits the keyboard, it will be the real beginning of the story of "Sword and Law"...
"But not this time."
Looking at the blank document in front of the screen, Li Peifeng sighed. It was three o'clock in the afternoon, and he sat in front of the screen for more than two hours, without thinking, not making any progress, and dizzy.
Mr. Li wondered if he should drink some perfume at night to find inspiration, but it is still daytime, and daydreaming is not very good, so he simply read the articles sent by the two junior sisters. Looking at it, his head got bigger.
"You two, you should really be a tree in your next life!"
Li Peifeng shook his head, revising and revising, and another two hours passed in a hurry. After revising two articles, and just sending them to Lu Jing and Lin Zhihui, the doorbell rang.
…
"Have you thought about what to cook for me?"
The visitor was none other than Huang Tianxuan, who was here for dinner. He was no longer wearing a white coat, but a camel coat, a pair of black tight jeans, and a pair of black over-the-knee boots.
Huang Tianxuan took off her coat, revealing the white sweater she wore underneath, which made her S-shaped figure even more prominent. Her chest was exposed. Moreover, the shirt was slim and thin, and the underwear buckle was faintly visible.
"You eat what you make."
Li Peifeng took a pair of slippers from the shoe cabinet and gave them to her, and said casually: "I bought some vegetables and lamb chops for lunch, grill some lamb chops, stir-fry some vegetables, and make soup... Do you drink?"
"No more drinking. The driver is on leave today and I will drive by myself."
Huang Tianxuan leaned over and took off her boots. Although the over-the-knee boots looked good and made her legs look longer, their shortcoming was also obvious, that is, they were difficult to take off. There are thin shoelaces at the top, and there is a zipper after untying the shoelaces, which extends from the knees to the ankles. The boots are very tight, and the zipper cannot be opened at once.
Huang Tianxuan bent over and worked for a long time, but only half of one boot was opened, and the zipper was stuck.
"You sit on the sofa and I'll help you."
Li Peifeng couldn't bear it when he saw how hard she was doing it, and his eagerness to help others couldn't be suppressed. However, Huang Tianxuan stood up and smiled half-heartedly: "Are you taking off my shoes for me, or do you want to take advantage of me?"
"I took advantage of you by taking off your shoes? Are you so disgusting?"
Li Peifeng said with a sarcastic face: "Forget it, your big feet will be stifled after wearing these boots for a whole day. They will definitely stink. In order to avoid polluting the air in my house, just don't take them off and just wear them like this."
"You have stinky feet!" Huang Tianxuan rolled her eyes, sat on the sofa and crossed her legs: "Take them off."
[I'm a little panicked. As soon as I walked in, my stinky brother wanted me to take off my shoes. Is it time to take off my clothes next? ! 】
Li Peifeng smiled inwardly and did not want to scare her on purpose. He helped Huang Tianxuan take off her boots neatly, revealing two pairs of feet wearing sports socks. Moreover, with his keen sense of smell, there was not much strange smell...
"I always change into sneakers when I'm working in the lab."
Huang Tianxuan seemed to be explaining. After that, she put on her slippers and stood up and said, "Let's cook. I'll help you. Finish it quickly and eat quickly. I'm really hungry."
"Okay, then you wash the vegetables first, and I'll make the lamb chops."
The two had a clear division of labor and got busy in the kitchen. She washes the vegetables and he cuts the meat, she cooks while he grills the steaks. There is a sense of warmth in the ordinary. Although the two of them are only ambiguous and have no relationship with each other, at this time they are really like a couple living together. couple in.
However, Huang Tianxuan had never cooked much, so she could wash vegetables, but it was difficult to actually help in the kitchen. She couldn't even cut vegetables, so she was a little confused.
Li Peifeng looked at the unevenly sized potato pieces on the cutting board and commented: "The pieces are a bit too big, and your technique of holding the knife is also wrong."
"You come?"
"I teach you."
So, Li Peifeng stood behind Huang Tianxuan, hugging her by the ears and temples, and started to teach her how to chop vegetables.
"When holding a knife, your index finger and thumb are on both sides and heel of the knife respectively, and the other three fingers naturally hold the handle. Do you understand?"
"Um."
"Come on, follow my strength and try it."
Li Peifeng put his chin on Huang Tianxuan's shoulder and whispered in her ear: "Relax your hands, yes."
"duo~duo~"
In winter, the days are short and the nights are long. Outside the kitchen window, the world is no longer clear, and the sun and moon are no longer shining.
A man and a woman jointly pressed the potato to pieces on the cutting board. If it could speak, its first sentence would be: 'You two bitches, please give me a good time! '
Perhaps God couldn't bear that Tudou was physically injured and at the same time mentally tortured, an accident happened!
"Dingling bell~~"
"Your cell phone is ringing..."
Panting slightly, Huang Tianxuan pushed Li Peifeng away: "Pick up the phone first."
I don’t want to pick it up!
Although Li Peifeng hadn't seen who the caller was yet, he had a hunch that something might happen if he answered the call, but he still took out his phone and took a look, and sure enough, the caller was Zhao Qingge.
"Your mentor?"
Huang Tianxuan said in a subtle tone: "Aren't you going to answer?"
Li Peifeng made a silent gesture, and then chose to connect through hesitation.
"Are you at home?"
Hearing the first question from the guide, Li's heart tightened again: "Yes, at home."
"have you eaten?"
"...cooking."
"I still want to talk to you about the project. Shall I go to your house?"
Li Peifeng glanced at the girl who was staring at him in the kitchen. He had thousands of thoughts in his mind, and finally said: "Okay, you can come, but Huang Tianxuan is also here. She came here to discuss with me... the progress of drug research and development." , so I will eat here too.”
It is completely undesirable to lie that you are not at home or to go out to eat with Lao Zhao. Li Peifeng is also tired of it. After all, he is a man who wants to have a dream. He has been avoiding meeting several girls. He is covering his ears and pretending to be an ostrich. He has not faced the problem head-on. Of course, there is no way to solve the problem.
But for Huang Tianxuan to be at her own home, she always had to find a reason to talk about the past. It shouldn't be too straightforward, and the two sides would have no way to go down...
Perhaps Li Peifeng made a good excuse. Zhao Qingge was silent for a moment, not angry, but asked: "What kind of drug research and development? Is it the one you gave me before?"
"right."
"I'll be there in a moment."
The call was hung up, and Li Peifeng felt a little entangled in his heart. This seemed to be the first meeting between Zhao Qingge and Huang Tianxuan after the five of them woke up from a dream. He didn't know if there would be any sparks from the friction.
"You still have that medicine? And you gave it to her?"
Huang Tianxuan's eyes widened, and she subconsciously stepped back half a step to distance herself from Li Peifeng. She said in a puzzled and disdainful tone: "You actually gave your mentor a meal?"
Li Peifeng wasted a lot of words before Huang Tianxuan understood that [Jiujiu Guiyuan Gujing Strengthening Pills] and [Peiyuan Pill] are not the same medicine. Fortunately, Li Peifeng divided [Peiyuan Pill] into three The girl saved some, and even these days I take it occasionally, but there are still about 100 pills left.
"I'll give you all this medicine. Take it and take it. It can beautify your skin, strengthen your body, cleanse your marrow and cut your bones. Treat the sick and strengthen your body. Alas, I made another decision that went against my ancestors..."
Huang Tianxuan didn't listen to Li Peifeng's nagging. She took the transparent plastic bottle, put it in front of her eyes and looked at the black pills inside, and asked hesitantly: "Where did you get all these weird pills?"
"Don't ask. If you ask, it will be given by the gods."
"Then this god is really blind!"
Huang Tianxuan muttered, and understood the true meaning of what Li Peifeng had just said to Zhao Qingge. He said that he came to his house to discuss drug development, which was just a lame excuse to cover up, but this drug...
"Are you sure you can eat it? What are its specific effects?"
"Just try it and you'll know. In fact, the specific effect is similar to what I just said."
After Huang Tianxuan asked about the dosage, she took a glass of water and took one pill immediately. Her face suddenly became rosy and radiant, but her expression was one of shock. Her open mouth could probably fit a small apple...
"Is there caffeine? Epinephrine? Modafinil? What are the side effects?"
"No side effects. I don't know the specific ingredients. You can test it yourself."
Li Peifeng waved his hand and said, "But keep it secret, it's best if it's mass-produced, and remember to give me a share of it."
Huang Tianxuan was not too happy, so she poured another pill from the bottle, put it on the tip of her nose and sniffed it carefully, then frowned: "Is it still a Chinese patent medicine? It is difficult to develop."
"Regarding the research and development of that Dali Pill, do you know how much manpower and material resources I have invested now? At least 8 million, but it is still in the process research stage. My brother and my father asked about this matter and politely suggested that I put this project Stop it, because it is really a bottomless pit and more difficult than innovating Western medicine.”
Li Peifeng sighed: "It's a pity that my medicine was wasted and was cut into pieces and sacrificed in vain... If it really doesn't work, don't try the Peiyuan Dan. Keep it for yourself. It can really beautify and delay aging."
Huang Tianxuan nodded noncommittally, looked at the pills with less than a fifth left, and asked, "Did you also give this medicine to Zhao Qingge? How much did you give her?"
"As many as you. These are all specially reserved for you."
Huang Tianxuan curled her lips secretly: "Where are Wenyue and Man Ning? Did you give them to them too?"
"you guess?"
"I knew it wasn't just for me!"
Li Peifeng retorted: "I gave you a chance, but you didn't use it. I only gave you one pill to strengthen your body. Have you come up with something? Are you still reasonable now?"
Huang Tianxuan looked sullen: "Drug research and development takes time. One or two years is a short time. I told you before, do you remember?"
"Remember, remember...go pick up the dishes and chopsticks, they are for three people."
"I won't help you, you can do it yourself."
Huang Tianxuan folded her arms in front of her chest, with an unhappy look on her face: "We agreed that the two of us would have dinner, and you invited Zhao Qingge to come. It would be magnanimous of me not to leave directly now."
"Then I really want to thank you sister."
Li Peifeng was defeated and stopped arguing with her. He picked up the bowl and served it to the table. Huang Tianxuan kept her promise and stopped helping the cook. She turned around and walked to the sofa in the living room to sit down.
[So angry, really angry, I want to hit someone! Even if I did all kinds of evil in my previous life, I should pay off my debt when I meet this kind of dog man! ! 】
【no! I want to cause trouble! ! 】
Li Peifeng put down the tableware and felt something in his heart. He subconsciously looked at Huang Tianxuan and saw that she was picking up her mobile phone to make a call, and the call seemed to have been connected...
"Yueyue, what are you busy with?"
Huang Tianxuan acted as if there was no one around, sitting on the sofa with her legs crossed elegantly, her tone was very casual: "Oh, we just finished shooting the video? Didn't you have dinner?!"
"..."
"Come to Peifeng's house for dinner. I'm here too. Professor Zhao will be here soon."
"..."
"What's the matter? It's fine. We just want to eat and chat together. Are you coming?"
"..."
"Ok, I will wait for you."
"..."
After hanging up the phone, Huang Tianxuan looked at Li Peifeng with a slightly apologetic smile: "I still need to trouble you to pick up the dishes and chopsticks for four people."
Li Peifeng's face was expressionless: "What do you mean? Do you think it's not fun enough for three people to eat?"
"I think four people is a bit small."
Huang Tianxuan fiddled with her phone and chuckled: "If Man Ning hadn't gone on a business trip, I would have called her."
Li Peifeng frowned and stood there as if thinking.
"What are you doing standing still?"
Huang Tianxuan reminded her thoughtfully: "Hurry up and pick up the bowls. We need to make more dishes. There are two more people. If there is a quarrel because there is not enough food, and Yueyue picks up the kitchen knife and wants to eat the stir-fried Li Peifeng, then I won't stop it. Come on~"
(End of chapter)
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