Is this cartoonist mentally ill?

Chapter 404 The 18th Day of the Twelfth Month Plot Criticism (Original)

In addition, Master Jingxin asked Li Huowang to get her a pair of peculiar eyes, so that she could expel the Danyang Zi in Li Huowang.

And what she wants is a kind of evil eyes called the eighteenth day of the twelfth lunar month.

The eighteenth day of the twelfth lunar month has a special ability. It changes every year on the eighteenth day of the twelfth lunar month. Not only does it change its appearance, but its supernatural powers also change. This also leads to Master Jingxin not knowing what it has become now. Remember it's red.

In order to get rid of Danyangzi, Li Huowang no longer cares so much, and Master Jingxin also said that with Daqianlu in his body, it should be easy to deal with the eighteenth lunar month.

Although he didn't know how to deal with the eighteenth lunar month, he turned around and walked out of the room, planning to go find the eighteenth lunar month.

But in the end Master Jingxin asked him to keep the persimmons he bought not long ago. The gold was gone, so the persimmons were nothing, so he put the persimmons down and left.

However, after Li Huowang negotiated with Master Jingxin and left the room, Master Jingxin did something strange.

In the cartoon, after Master Jingxin was the only one left in the room, she stretched out the dark right hand between her fingers and reached into her greasy fat folds.

It seemed like it was a treasure bag for storing things.

In the next cartoon, with a "wave" sound, mixed with rotten liquid, a thin old man with atrophied limbs and a bald head was taken out by Jingxin Master Tai.

The old man looked like his pupils were cloudy, his face was expressionless, and he was completely lifeless.

"Son, did you hear that? Mom found persimmons for you to eat. Hahaha, are you happy? I still remember that you loved to eat persimmons when you were wearing crotchless pants."

Master Jingxin ate the persimmons, mixed them with other chewed food in her mouth, and fed them to the "old man".

The old man didn't make any movement. He didn't vomit the disgusting food, but he didn't swallow it either. It could only fall from the side of his mouth.

Obviously...this is Master Jingxin's son who is also Xinsu.

Looking at the situation now, Master Jingxin's son has gone crazy, and Master Jingxin hid him in her body in order to protect him, and at the same time maintained his life by feeding him in this way.

But from this point of view, it is not only Master Jingxin’s son who is crazy, but also Master Jingxin...

But it’s normal for a mother to go crazy when she sees her child become like this.

Master Jingxin stuffed the food in her mouth into her son's mouth again until it was full. At the same time, she told him that Li Huowang's future ending would be much worse than his own, but he still didn't respond and unconsciously put the food in his mouth. He retched out.

Then, the picture showed the companions accompanying Li Huowang.

It's just... everyone seems to be a little dissatisfied with Li Huowang, because Li Huowang is becoming more and more powerful and self-assertive.

He no longer discussed anything with them, as if he regarded them as a burden, even though Li Huowang was the strongest among them and the savior who helped them escape Qingfengguan.

However, Li Huowang's increasingly aggressive personality made them feel a little uncomfortable.

Especially in order to expel the Danyang Zi from his body, Li Huowang gave all the gold to An Ci'an without any discussion with Bai Lingmiao and Chun Xiaoman.

This made them even more uneasy.

Comic fans also feel a little uncomfortable with Li Huowang's change in character.

But this is a comic, so everyone feels it’s actually okay.

One of the better things about comics compared to novels is that the male protagonist can describe his personality changes and his own growth.

The protagonist of the comic can be accidentally defeated by the enemy or have character flaws, but no one will say anything as long as he grows up later.

But the protagonist of the novel... everyone prefers a protagonist with a sound mind, a strong character from birth, and a perfect personality who will not be timid and will not be deceived.

Li Huowang's personality is actually quite sound, but he still has flaws due to the characteristics of his own mind and what happened to Danyangzi along the way.

Soon, as he led Bai Lingmiao and others to follow Master Jingxin's instructions to find the eighteenth day of the twelfth lunar month, he also noticed changes in his own psychology.

It's just that he also fell into the trap of the eighteenth lunar month, but he didn't expect that the eighteenth lunar month actually created a Wujiacun, and its ability was to fundamentally change cognition and quietly replace a person's identity.

And also transfer various identities of other people to that person.

This ability is so hard to guard against, even Li Huowang was attacked.

However, on the eighteenth day of the twelfth lunar month, Li Huowang's identity was stolen and Li Huowang and others were trapped...

However, Li Huowang once again activated his "Xin Su" ability and traveled back to the modern world...

Because of this, he immediately regained his awareness of his identity.

However, he did not go back in time to deal with the eighteenth day of the twelfth lunar month.

"I can't just wait now. Maybe after the hallucination subsides, my cognition will be revised again on the 18th of the twelfth lunar month. I must influence the other side by acting under the hallucination."

Li Huowang thought of such a method and was ready to take action at any time.

However... the plot of "The Strange Fairy" ends here, and Lin Qingshan did not continue to complete the subsequent plot.

Comic fans have no choice but to retain suspense and leave their curiosity until next week.

But they didn't know that the next plot... would be extremely explosive!

However, the popularity of "Dao Wei Yi Xian" has also increased a lot recently, and it is still in the third place, although it is not as good as the two comics "Shen Zu" and "True Dragon God Selection".

But its popularity is much higher than the following comics.

The most important thing is that "Dao Wei Yi Xian" is very popular. Under the stimulation of such tense, exciting and eye-catching plot, its discussion on the Internet has never decreased.

But that's all. After all, most comic fans still don't fully understand the plot and settings of "Dao Wei Yi Xian".

What is the cultivation system of this world? It seems that there is no realm division?

And what happened to this world, why did it become so weird.

What's the matter with Li Huowang's time travel? He is Xinsu... What kind of physique is this, and what is its use?

Unlike previous comic works that threw out most of the settings at the beginning, so that comic fans have a 70% understanding, "Dao Wei Yi Xian" has been serialized to the 31st episode, and everyone is still a little confused.

In addition, there are no key and exciting plots, so the popularity can only be maintained here.

While the popularity of "Dao Weiyixian" remains at this level, "The Gods" has caused even more heated discussions.

After Yang Mingfei discovered that his "memory" was different from that of other people in Casar College, he went to find Chen Nuonuo for help.

But he didn't know that Casar College was suspecting him of a series of recent attacks. Just when he and Chen Nuonuo were in danger, the useless senior brother came to find him.

He and Fingel and Chen Nuonuo decided to return to BJ, Chu Zihan's hometown, to find traces left by Chu Zihan, but accidentally broke into Nibelungen with Chen Nuonuo, where Chu Zihan had encountered that year...

However, it was these plots that made the fans of "The Gods" dissatisfied.

Because... the protagonist Yang Mingfei actually liked the appearance of the "female protagonist" Chen Nuonuo in the plot of the fourth part.

Although in a work, the male and female protagonists are usually a standard match, but...

The male and female protagonists of "Gods" are really not compatible...

The most important thing is that after experiencing the plot of the Black Moon Tide chapter, everyone thought that because of Eri's relationship and the loyalty between Eri and his senior brother Xisa.

Eri should no longer be reluctant to part with the female protagonist Chen Nuonuo.

Especially in the beginning of Odin's Abyss, Xisa really had nothing to say to Eri, handed the student union to him, helped him build momentum and transformed his clothes, and turned from a useless "S"-level hybrid who was questioned and ridiculed in the academy to a real "S"-level hybrid admired by his juniors.

So based on the "brotherhood" that everyone believes in, isn't it a bit inhuman for you to still think about your sister-in-law?

Secondly, although Eri died, "Gods" doesn't seem to have a resurrection match, but isn't it a bit disgusting that you think about other women after Eri's death?

In fact, this is just a little annoying for the fans who don't like Eri. After all, Eri is dead, so it's understandable that the protagonist has found another female character he likes.

It could be Ling, Mai, Su Enxi, or even the little goddess Su Xiaoqiang who appeared again in the fourth part...

But why is it the sister-in-law Chen Nuonuo?

Eri "mentally cheated" as soon as she left the plot, and seduced the sister-in-law...

These two plots together are like you said you had a stomachache a few seconds ago, and then others saw a yellow unknown object in your crotch.

It's hard not to think that you really pooped your crotch.

So the fans began to be dissatisfied and felt that the comic author Itchy Mouse was disgusting.

Many negative comments began to appear on the Internet.

"As soon as Eri left, you continued to miss your senior sister... Akaashi is really a dog that can't change."

"It's so disgusting. I feel sorry for Eri for liking such a person."

"Do you think Caesar has done anything wrong to you? Caesar gave you the position of student union president against all odds, gave you a gun, and bought you clothes.

In the Black Moon Tide chapter, he really treated you as his younger brother and risked his life to protect you. When you were underwater, he and Senior Brother Chu risked their lives to go out and protect you. Is this how you treat him?"

"The recent plot is really disgusting. Not only is the protagonist still as irresponsible as the loser, he also has no moral values. How can you pretend?"

"It's said that Yanyangshu is treating himself as the protagonist. He did study abroad and has a senior sister..."

"Is this why you can't forget your senior sister?"

"The senior sister is also miserable. She was originally fine with her original husband, but she was She is drawn as the heroine of a comic, but she is still scolded. "

"Honestly, why scold the senior sister? The senior sister didn't give the loser any hints. She just saved the situation once with good intentions and recorded a birthday blessing for the loser. She was blamed. This is really miserable. "

"If I meet such a person, I will really vomit. I was kind enough to help, but he imagined a love drama out of nothing. "

"If the senior sister in the comic is a little tea, I will scold her instead of scolding this tough protagonist. What you said is really outrageous. The senior sister hasn't contacted the loser for more than a year, but she can still come to her door. "

"Yang Mingfei is too outrageous... He hasn't grown up in four years of college - I mean his personality and psychology. I thought he had grown a little, but he immediately withered before he showed much. He also sticks to others like a dog-skin plaster, disgusting..."

"Alas... I'm thinking now that it might be a good thing if "Protoss" ends after this part of the plot."

"Wrong, it would be best if "Protoss" ends with the Black Moon Tide. I really don't think the sequel of "Protoss" will be good now. If it continues like this, the reputation may drop to the bottom."

"Yanyangshu will never be as good as Qingshan Laozei in his life just because of this. The protagonist of Qingshan Laozei is not so unlucky and mean."

...

Yang Shuzhun saw these bad comments online at this time. Some comic fans even ran to his Weibo account to make comments.

As a Weibo expert, he felt extremely bad after seeing these comments.

Because... these comic fans who spoke really touched his pain point.

He did have a senior sister who he liked very much when he was studying abroad.

And the last sentence above, "I will never be as good as Qingshan in my life", made Yang Shuzhun even more angry.

But he would not admit that he was not as good as others, nor would he admit that there was a problem with his plot.

This is also a common problem for most creators. They think that the plot they created from their own perspective is fine.

Just saying he is not as good as Lin Qingshan...

He was somewhat powerless to refute, although the popularity of "God Clan" still suppressed Lin Qingshan's new work "Dao Weiyi Xian" as always, and it was also the same when Lin Qingshan serialized "Parasyte".

Even in the previous annual total popularity ranking, "God Clan" still led Lin Qingshan's "Chainsaw Man" with a slightly obvious advantage.

Only in terms of the current weekly popularity and total popularity of the comics, he can say that he has surpassed Lin Qingshan.

But in terms of animation, film and television adaptation and influence, he is far inferior to Lin Qingshan.

Because the first season of "God Clan" animation was bad, no matter how many reasons he had, "God Clan" animation was bad, but Lin Qingshan's comic-adapted animations "Edge Walker" and "Chainsaw Man" were very popular.

The most powerful cyberpunk comic theme ancestor "Edge Walker" was even adapted into a movie, and the global box office exceeded 3 billion.

With this achievement, ten Yang Shuzhun can't compare to Lin Qingshan.

But...

"I won't lose. Even if the haters don't support it anymore, "Gods" will still be a super popular phenomenon. It's not impossible to be as successful as the Harry series in the future!"

Yang Shuzhun said firmly, and then...

He took a photo of the workbench and posted it on Weibo with the caption -

"Although we don't have the body of a real god, we have a strong heart to slay gods and demons! I'll do my best, God Eggs!"

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