Nine Star Burden

Entering the new volume, the feedback is not good. After thinking about it, Yu also has some conclusions.

Yu strictly followed the outline, the main plot did not deviate, and the context is clear. This is no problem.

The reason,

For one thing, some readers don't like the story of the strange ball.

This book has more than 3 million words written, which are basically all things happening on the earth, but starting from this volume, the protagonist enters a different ball and the environment changes.

Switching on the map and changing the environment led some friends to not adapt. And the point of entry of the plot is not very good. It should not start from the "flat push" atmosphere of the northern three provinces. It should go directly to those strong and uninvolved areas, while enriching the alien species and the world. The foreshadowing spread out.

After Pishen accidentally entered the different ball, as always, he maintained a strong posture. As the quality of the astrology upgrades, these are inevitable products. Therefore, when seeing Xiao Pi still destroying the world in the different ball, some book friends There may be a feeling of fall in my heart, and I feel that the frustrations in imagination have not come, should n’t the different ball? Having said that, the different ball is indeed terrible, but it depends on who is coming ...

Jiang Xiao is obviously the kind of person who places Xueba everywhere. It is different from the second pseudo Xueba in the high school class of Xiaoxiancheng. He is a Xueba in the high school of Xiaoxian and is also a school bull in the Imperial University. ...

Secondly, maybe in the previous chapter, I spent a few days concentrating on improving the astral skills. Some readers don't like the chapter on upgrading the quality of astral technology. After all, most of the qualitative changes of astral technology are in the quality of "platinum" and "diamond."

This is a good change, after all ... most of the star skills have graduated ~

Third, Yu has always tried to maintain his style and write as easily and joyfully as possible. I thought that everyone should feel relaxed and happy while reading, but some readers were not satisfied.

There should be no problem with the skin of the protagonist. Book friends just watched the little poisonous milk all the way up. After all, this is the only "main line" of the book. Those who are unwilling to read also scold a few words. They have already left, and Yu has long been used to it.

Therefore, it should be a problem with the companion.

The role of the blind girl is not pleasing. It can also be seen from the data on the refills of the book pages. If Jiang Xiao's teammates are replaced with Niao or Xia Yan at this time, it may be better.

This is the way to write web articles, real-time feedback from book friends, and real-time improvements from authors. With regard to the issues summarized above, the Education Commission has worked hard to correct them.

The book has written 3.65 million characters so far, and the book has already entered the late stage. It must not be "old and out of touch". The conference will focus more on it. Tighten the strings, hold on to it, write it well, and ensure the style On the basis of the same, strive to improve the quality of the article and close the end of the book.

Well, when there is a climax, there is a trough, and when there is a stimulus, there is dullness.

Uh ... how to say it, the education association will adjust as soon as possible, thanks to the book friends who still persist in the trough (scratching their heads)

? (′ ??? `) Refill

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So, three more tomorrow? (￣.￣)