Konoha's Super God Hyuga

The first time it was put on the shelves, I really didn’t understand it. I mentioned it to the editor, thinking that there would be some website shortcomings. As a result, I didn’t even have time to write a testimonial for the listing.

Let’s talk about the bad things first.

Some friends read the book from the time they read it. They should have a clearer understanding of the writing style of Luchiji. It was astringent at first, and then slowly became smoother. With more than 100 chapters now, Luchi feels that it is at least ordinary.

The level of online writing is excellent.

Some people may have noticed that Lu Chi was revising the previous chapters on a large scale. The first few chapters were greatly deleted, especially those in the twenty-odd chapters. Lu Chi was correcting a lot of typos. At that time, Lu Chi was quite confused.

At that time, I was just as confused as any other new author: Will anyone read my book? Will anyone subscribe to it? Why are there no comments? It’s okay to criticize. That’s it.

As a newcomer, I made two big mistakes with this book.

First, the system. The initial setting was too complicated for a newbie to control. So in the later stage, Luchiji subconsciously ignored the system. When revising the previous chapters, a large part of Luchiji was fixing the system.

The plot has not been changed, so feel free to read it.

Second, the heroine. The heroine’s presence is so weak that many people ask who the heroine is. There is no way to change this. We can only strengthen and strengthen the heroine’s presence in subsequent chapters. Let’s talk about it here,

The heroine is Gekko Sararo. Please refer to Hashimoto Kanna for her appearance and characteristics.

Of course there are still many shortcomings, but please allow Lu Chi to praise himself.

First, the outline of Lu Chi is very well written. Although the original plan of the book is not too long (a plan of more than one million yuan), because of the outline, the possibility of eunuchs is relatively low, and the plot design is relatively good.

Routines.

Second, although the writing style is not at the highest level yet, Lu Chiji always puts some information into a certain chapter or sentence. I believe that friends who read carefully will see a certain sentence that they like very much.

Third, Luchi Fungus is more logical, so the spells or items in the book all make sense.

For example, the reward for the "barbeque master" is the nail fist in the gourmet anime, and the reward for the immortal duo is the black ghost of the immortal demihuman.

There may be some things that were not considered carefully, but at least they were considered.

Some readers said that the duel with Xiao Li was too much. Lu Chi thought for a while, it was over, and revised it. It would be most reasonable to change the second door. Lu Chi is not the kind of person who is stubborn. But he needs to explain.

, although it is wrong, Lu Chi checked the information. In the animation, Kai said that Xiao Li could drive up to five doors, but in actual combat, Li was able to drive up to four doors. Li's Lotus was indeed learned after graduation.

But the problem is that Li knows neither ninjutsu nor genjutsu. At the beginning, his physical skills were very poor, and even ordinary people couldn't compare with him. How could he graduate from the ninjutsu school if he didn't have any materials?

So it’s not too much to learn some eight arts before graduation. And did Neji learn Rouquan after graduation?

It's wrong, what should I do, change it.

When people make mistakes, they change, and when they change, they become stronger.

I believe that those who follow my book will see a road idiot who is slowly getting stronger.

Thank you to the friends who have been voting for recommendations, friends who have given rewards, and friends who have already voted for the monthly vote today. Thank you for your support.

In the end, Lu Chi probably understood that he would not subscribe too much and would not be discouraged. He only asked for support from capable friends. Lu Chi’s goal was to work at full attendance, so he would use six or seven hours every night to earn enough money for rent.

Bar.

Focus on: perfect attendance, two chapters a day, work hard, don’t dare to risk your life.