Legend Forever

　　 lags behind in "The Death of Shalai" and suddenly wants to remember an off-topic and talk about some of his thoughts when he wrote this story.

　　 So I started writing.

　　The death chapter of Sha Lai is about thirty chapters in total. When writing, I always wanted to show the scene more meticulously, but on the other hand, it made the plot more compact. For this reason, only a considerable amount of detail can be omitted, and the incident becomes more coherent, in order to express the rush and tension of the time.

　　 These are two very conflicting ways of expression, and I don’t know how they match in this regard. It's like a painter can't rush to the color map he drew. When I look at what I have written, it is actually very difficult to find the problem. I can only explore it a little bit.

　　 And, in the last ten chapters... I always thought that some of the comments I saw before, joked that the other party wrote a battle, and the three chapters were a joke, but I did not expect that I also encountered the same embarrassing situation, even more exaggerated.

　　 The last battle actually wrote more than ten chapters at once.

　　To tell the truth, it is indeed a bit embarrassing to review it now.

However, in the subsequent plot advancement, there should not be such a situation where more than ten chapters are played... Well, it does not seem to involve the spoiler, but it does not appear in that part. So to be determined.

　　Of course, this article can be said to be a relatively important buffer zone in the plot, so it should be given a larger proportion, but the allocation of space is somewhat unreasonable.

　　 Actually wanted to write this way, Shalai appeared, Shalai said a few words left, everyone experienced a period of adventure in Shalai's demigod domain, the strength greatly improved, and finally came to Shalai. Then open the boss.

　　Like a strange adventure story, it only takes two days to fly by plane, but it can become a long journey of up to three months.

　　 Even so, it was surprisingly comfortable to stretch the plot.

　　 Of course, this idea is just a thought. According to the character's settings, Shalai should not make such a low-level mistake, so I thought about it, and directly changed the expected one-month adventure into a plot that continued to rush forward with a big hammer.

　　For this reason, many detailed descriptions have been deleted.

　　 In fact, I have been describing the compression part as much as possible, because I feel that this part, especially the expression of weapon collision and stagger, should not occupy too much weight.

　　 So, most of them are simply talking, and then directly go to the part of the fighter change.

　　In Shalai's battle, there was a problem with this method.

　　Because in the setting, I left a lot of foreshadowing in the front, and I plan to reveal it in this article.

　　 The feeling at the time of writing...... It is probably the same as stabbing the horse honeycomb.

For example, there was a hint left in Athena, some performances of Chalet during the battle in the academy, and the first time everyone went to the Bone Star to encounter the state of the hydra, such as the Anne mode of Ixunyu, such as The hint that Mu Tian left in the core of the previous world...

　　 In order to uncover all of these contents during the battle with Shalai, the contents became bloated. Even afterwards, he continued to delete details and excessive paragraphs, but even if he concatenates every place that needs to be mentioned, he finally wrote ten chapters.

　　 and for the finale, I wanted to make Chalai more angry, as if the world felt negative to me, and then had a certain emotion when he died... but it always felt so bad.

　　Oh, and finally the scene where Ixunyu leaned on a stone and drank cold water on the northwest wind. I felt that there was no such place where people felt silent and bleak.

　　Tu, but I really don't know how to express it further.

　　 sigh,

　　Because I feel that when writing this part, the text may not be able to convey some of the content I want to express well, so I have to open a single chapter and send a part of my summary.

　　 I hope not next time, because I feel this is a denial of my writing.

the above.