Let You Write About The Fish Seller, But You Write About Gao Qiqiang On The Spot?

After all, a contestant who gained people's attention by writing illegal plots!

How can I appreciate it myself! ?

Chen Sicheng coughed and felt that he needed to say a few words!

"Teacher Shuping, I think Lu Chen's description of clan culture is too superficial!

Clan culture has a long history, depth, content, and weight!

But did you find out.

From the beginning to the end, Lu Chen only emphasized the concept of clan culture, and always emphasized how deeply clan culture influenced Lin Yaodong.

But never mentioned the background of the Lin clan, as well as some family training and so on.

Don't you think it's too superficial to write like this? "

As soon as Chen Sicheng said this.

All three judges cast their gazes over.

She looked at him a little strangely.

"Mr. Chen, it's a good thing to be demanding, but isn't it unreasonable to be too demanding? With only three hours of creative time, it's unreasonable to try to cover everything, right?

Besides, Lu Chen only needs to bring out the clan concept now.

If you have time in the future, you can add content to it. It's completely in time. "

Shuping retorted.

With only three hours of creation time, it is very cramped to create a story.

What else do you expect to be impeccable?

Shu Ping just can't tell it face to face, given you three hours, what kind of story can you create?

Perhaps it may not be possible for Lu Chen's current story to be as detailed as it is.

Hearing this, Chen Sicheng was taken aback for a moment, then paused, and said with a sneer: "That's true, after all, time is limited, as long as you can come up with a concept."

Seeing that Chen Sicheng has no hard steel, his attitude is not bad.

Shu Ping also gave him a step up.

"But Mr. Chen, what you said is also reasonable. Regarding clan culture, if there is a chance to write a script later, Lu Chen really needs to think about it, add some content to it, and make it as full as possible."

Chen Sicheng nodded.

Liu Heping and Yan Gelin nodded slightly when they heard this, as a response to their "argument".

Eyes turned to the big screen again...

inside the room.

When Lu Chen wrote this, he stopped writing again.

I stood in front of the whiteboard and thought for a while.

The plot of the ancestral hall.

Lu Chen felt that it was necessary to highlight it.

After all, Lin Yaodong's ultimate goal is not only to lead Tazhai.

During the conversation with Zhao Jialiang on the rooftop.

Lin Yaodong clearly pointed out that his highest personal ideal is to restore the most luxurious, largest and most gorgeous Lin's ancestral hall.

It can be said that for this goal, Lin Yaodong has been preparing for at least ten years!

Just before the plan is implemented!

Tazhai Poison Village is destroyed!

Presumably, this has also become Lin Yaodong's lifelong regret.

In the TV series, Lin's ancestral hall is not only an important filming location.

In the series, it also appeared many times, the scene of Lin Yaodong quietly looking up at the ancestral hall...

so……

Lu Chen felt that it was necessary for him to focus on the part about the ancestral hall.

Explain the section of the ancestral hall clearly and fully render it.

For the audience, understanding the Lin clan is also of great benefit.

Coincidentally, in the original play, there is a very detailed description of Lin's ancestral hall...

Think about it.

Lu Chen took a deep breath and continued to write:

"Leading the rise of Tazhai is Lin Yaodong's spiritual goal!

Then, building the small ancestral hall of this house and repairing the main ancestral hall of the Lin family is Lin Yaodong's real material goal.

It is not difficult for Lin Yaodong to build a small shrine in this house.

As a member of this house, as long as you have money, you can repair it whenever you want!

But repairing Lin's ancestral hall is not so easy!

It must be the people of the clan who are highly respected and well-to-do to do it.

With Lin Yaodong's strength at the time, neither of these two points existed.

Therefore, repairing the ancestral hall has become a lofty goal buried in Lin Yaodong's heart after his gradual development!

(Here, I think it is necessary for me to arrange a background history for the ancestors of the Lin family to highlight the heritage of the Lin family and the historical and cultural background of Tazhai Village.)”

Lu Chen marked it with brackets on purpose.

Firstly, it is to show the mental journey and thinking direction of my own creation!

Ensure that on-site creation is more "authentic"!

Secondly, Lu Chen also had to lay a reasonable groundwork for the background of the subsequent introduction of Lin's family tree.

Lu Chen took a pen and paced back and forth in the room.

jury room.

See Lu Chen write this paragraph.

Yan Gelin laughed on the spot: "It's true that Cao Cao is here. We just discussed that the concept of clan is not clear. Lu Chen plans to add story content to the Lin family."

Shu Ping also immediately turned his head to look at Chen Sicheng, and said with a smile: "Mr. Chen, it seems that you asked a question a step too early. It is obvious that Lu Chen has already considered the question you thought of."

Chen Sicheng's smile was a little stiff, saying no, no saying no.

I could only forcefully laugh a few times, prevaricating.

I thought: What the hell, I just asked a question, and Lu Chen considered it?

…………

Lu Chen paced back and forth a dozen times in the room.

Suddenly stopped.

Between his brows and eyes, there was a sudden look.

Then, he hurried to the whiteboard and wrote a paragraph.

An answer so soon?

The judges and netizens all stared intently, wondering what Lu Chen would write.

I saw a line of text as follows:

"Ancestral genealogy records that in the fourth year of Jiatai in the Southern Song Dynasty, Shi Yinggong moved here from Fujian Anxi, bought acres of land, built thatched cottages, and settled down here.

Later, when his children became prosperous, they changed the thatched shed into an ancestral hall. This was the first time in history that Lin's ancestral hall was built.

Later, during the Qianlong and Jiaqing years, thanks to the development of the sugar industry and the prosperity of Jiazigang, the Lin clan repaired the Lin ancestral hall for the second time.

Then during the period of the Republic of China, the army was in turmoil, soldiers and ruffians became popular, and the clan forces that kept the place safe were able to grow stronger! The strength of the Lin family once reached its peak. The renovated Lin's ancestral hall is also magnificent and magnificent. "

? Wow!

See this description.

Liu Heping, Shuping and others all felt a thump in their hearts!

Rao is a giant of historical drama like Liu Heping!

After reading this description, I didn't feel my eyes brighten up, and there was a gleam in my eyes!

Shu Ping and Yan Gelin couldn't stop nodding, full of praise.

"This description is powerful and profound! It is quite well written!"

"Spanning three periods of history, the style of writing is fresh and concise. I never thought that Lu Chen still has the potential to write historical dramas. Teacher Liu, what do you think?"

Yan Gelin looked at Liu Heping.

The latter smiled slightly, nodded and said: "This background is well added. It echoes the two themes of clan culture and ancestral hall culture. It has depth, history, and breadth. It is worthy of recognition to be able to perform on the spot and perform like this!"

Seeing that all three judges gave high praise.

Chen Sicheng on the side blushed even more.

But there is only one word in my heart: Damn!

Unexpectedly, on the 48th, there are really two tricks!

He surreptitiously read the passage again.

Discover……

If I write this text myself, I'm afraid I won't be able to write it well...

…………

The jury is still like this.

Naturally, the live broadcast room exploded even more!

[Good guy, I didn't expect that the ancestors of the Lin family can be traced back to the Southern Song Dynasty! This description is so touching! 】

[Is this the strength of the number one in the divisional competition? Niubi! Breaking sound! 】

[Based on this description alone, number 48 is enough to be a god! Properly advance to the next round! 】

[Unexpectedly, during the period of the Republic of China, the ancestors of the Lin family were still local elites, and they were able to keep one party safe! Amazing! 】

[With such a historical background, it is no wonder that the clan culture of Tazhai is so strong. 】

[With this background, I can understand more and more that Lin Yaodong is going to lead Tazhai to rise. This is not a rise, it is clearly a revival! 】

[Doing things that violate the law and discipline, just to repair the ancestral hall. Before, I thought this paragraph was too bloody, but looking at it now, I'm being superficial! 】

[Brother Dong is so down-to-earth! A person who wholeheartedly wants to lead the tribe to rise up and build ancestral halls, what bad thoughts can he have (dog head to save his life). 】

[Suddenly think Lin Yaodong is so cute! Working hard to make money is to obtain the qualification to repair Lin's ancestral hall! Bull pen No. 48! Was this plot really conceived on the spot? The cow pen exploded! 】

[This plot is really awesome! It makes one's scalp tingle! 】

[Looking forward to it, looking forward to the next plot even more! ! ! ! ! 】

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