Let You Write About The Fish Seller, But You Write About Gao Qiqiang On The Spot?

"Mr. Chen, the first reason you said you scored six is ​​because the story is not complete!

So let me ask you, what is considered high integrity? !

Come on, director team, first call out the screen of Lu Chen's live broadcast room for me, and project it on the screen! "

Yan Gelin's domineering side leaked!

Soon, the picture of Lu Chen's live broadcast room was projected on the big screen.

The first thing that catches the eyes of the contestants is the three big whiteboards, densely packed with words!

"I'm going to write so much!"

"I just wrote on a whiteboard."

The players were all stunned!

Yan Gelin pointed to the picture on the screen and said, "Teacher Chen, look for yourself, where is the completeness of this story not high!

The villain Lin Yaodong, the third house in Tazhai, Haoyu Group, and the umbrella design of the dark line.

Zheng Fang Li Weimin, Li Fei, Zhao Jialiang.

The three drew two lines to attack Lin Yaodong together!

If you look at the plots of these fifteen episodes again, the logic is clear, the main line is clear, and the characters are well arranged!

It can be said that this story requires characters to have characters, and a plot to have a plot!

Be intentional and intentional! Be connotative and connotative!

In the end, when you told such a story, it was not complete enough? ! "

"Teacher Yan, I..."

"Listen to me first!"

Yan Gelin interrupted Chen Sicheng again.

"Then let's talk about the second reason!

You say this show is off topic?

I seem to remember that you said at the beginning of the program that if it were you who wrote it, you might write about the theme of the Rural Anti-Japanese War.

Think about it for yourself, you have integrated the two elements of the countryside and the Anti-Japanese War. Why is Lu Chen writing a rural anti-drug is a side topic?

Besides, the story is so clearly designed!

It is to destroy the poisonous village of Tazhai!

Isn't the poisonous village a village?

Why is it off topic?

Speaking of which.

I have to say, [serious homogeneity] this thing.

We have been emphasizing this issue repeatedly during the game.

After this round, we found that too many contestants chose the same theme.

Leading to similar plots, similar designs, and similar central ideas?

Don't you think this is a good thing?

Also, you are always talking about program rules, let me ask you!

What is the ultimate goal of this competition?

Is it for writing stereotyped essays? !

Or to cultivate formulaic writing! ?

Isn't our real purpose to dig out good stories!

In order to allow more excellent screenwriters to enter the public eye? !

I believe that this is the true original intention of this program!

Instead of the left sentence rule in your mouth, the right sentence rule! ! "

Yan Gelin's voice shook the hall!

The blue veins on his face were obviously raised!

Can't help but move people, look sideways!

"Just this point of view can also answer your last point - program creation!

What does it mean to rely on creative minefields to attract people's attention?

You said this more than once in the previous live broadcast.

I refuted you before, and I will refute you now!

I admit that at the beginning, Lu Chen's story did attract attention!

That's because we don't know his story!

Misunderstanding because of ignorance!

but!

This is the creative process!

Look at these whiteboards.

How to deduce the core of his story!

I, I, Teacher Shuping, Teacher Liu Heping!

Including the majority of netizens, they all saw it with their own eyes!

Don't you, as a judge, even understand the creative means of deriving stories? !

Always one rule at a time, one rule at a time!

There are so many rules, so many rules!

I'm going to talk about it today!

I'm here to be a judge!

I want to see a good story!

See great screenwriting talent!

As long as in the end, the creation of this story is reasonable and legal!

Meet the requirements!

Then everything that happened in the middle, I think it is secondary!

As for the commercial value you mentioned!

I don't comment on this.

After all, I'm just a screenwriter, not like you, a billionaire director!

But I personally don't recognize any of the first three points you mentioned!

Even I think your three items are completely nonsense! "

"well said!"

behind...

When Yan Gelin said this!

Shu Ping applauded warmly on the spot!

Even Liu Heping applauded slightly to express his attitude!

I saw the two great mentors applauding.

After the players lost their minds in astonishment.

Also began to applaud in twos and threes!

In the end, it turned into a piece of raging applause!

Studio.

Countless netizens are crazy at this moment, tears in their eyes!

[Ms. Yan's wave is too popular! 】

[I'm crying! Teacher Yan is too rigid, Thai pants are hot! 】

[It's so cool, slapping my face in front of Chen Sicheng! I love Teacher Yan! 】

[Call for Teacher Yan! ! 】

[Thanks to Mr. Yan for speaking up and rectifying Lu Chen's name! 】

…………

on the stage.

The little man was also stupid!

Unexpectedly, the two mentors openly "fighted" on stage because of Lu Chen!

this……

Eighteen bends of the mountain road in Xiao Sa Xin's heart!

Of course, Chen Sicheng's comments were unexpected.

But Yan Gelin's aggressiveness is even more unexpected!

Look at this posture!

If nothing unexpected happens.

Today's Douyin, Bibo and other major social media headlines are hotly searched, and there is a high probability that "Xiabi" will dominate the list!

…………

At this time, the one with the ugliest face was undoubtedly Chen Sicheng!

He never expected that Yan Gelin would openly sing the opposite in his comment session!

The key is still so "arrogant"!

moment.

Feeling that he was seriously offended, Chen Sicheng's expression darkened.

"Mr. Yan, have you said enough? Can I say a few words?"

Yan Gelin did not speak, expressing his acquiescence.

Chen Sicheng snorted coldly: "You can disagree with me, but I don't think you have the right to interfere with my grading!"

"Wrong, Teacher Chen, I didn't interfere with your grading, and I never thought of interfering.

Whether you give six points or five points, even if you give zero points today, I will never interfere with you.

But I want to warn you!

Although you have the power to score!

But as judges, we have the right to supervise each other.

If you are right today!

I will never stand up and refute any of your sentences!

But your comments are too outrageous!

I think I am obliged to make some comments on your speech! "

"Giving six points is my evaluation!"

"Okay, then you continue to maintain your point of view, I don't want you to change your score.

But you also cannot deprive me of the right to express my opinion on your remarks! "

"you!"

Chen Sicheng's chest heaved violently!

"Okay! I won't refute you! But don't worry, I won't be affected by you! My evaluation of Lu Chen is all my sincere evaluation! If he is willing to listen, he will listen, and if he is not willing to listen , I will never force it!"

"Come on, I think it's better not to listen to your opinion!"

Yan Gelin is too sassy!

Say what's on your mind!

She changed the subject and suddenly looked at Lu Chen in the audience.

"Lu Chen!"

"Yes, Teacher Yan!"

"Don't affect your own confidence and judgment because of someone's evaluation!

At least I, Teacher Shuping and Teacher Liu Heping, all agree with your creative style very much!

In the next round of 16 promotion, I hope you can show your full strength!

Write better stories!

You know, a screenwriter's best weapon is his story!

You have to use your story to stop the mouths of those who question you!

Did you hear that? ! "

"I heard it, Teacher Yan!"

Under the stage, Lu Chen nodded heavily and bowed down to express his thanks!

In the face of Yan Gelin's disregard for face and image, he has to speak for himself!

In Lu Chen's heart, he was naturally very grateful!

In the next round of promotion, he is going to give full play, and he must win the first round of the next round!

Otherwise, I'm sorry Yan Gelin, Shu Ping, Teacher Liu Heping...

Open support for yourself today!

"Okay, come on! I like you!"

After finishing speaking, Yan Gelin ignored Chen Sicheng, stuffed the microphone heavily into Xiao Sa's arms, and returned to the team.

Chen Sicheng's face sank like water, almost on the verge of losing control!

But for the sake of the live broadcast on the whole network.

He still suppressed the fire and returned to the team without saying a word.

Looking at the extremely awkward atmosphere of the scene, Xiao Sa was under a lot of pressure!

Helpless, I can only use my best to mediate!

He smiled and said, "Everyone! Although the discussions between the two judges were very intense!

But I believe that they are all expressing their personal opinions based on the attitude of being responsible to the players and the game.

As a player, I think everyone should be grateful!

Fortunately, the judges can be so responsible!

here……

Please let us give applause to the two teachers! "

Xiao Sa took the lead in applauding!

The audience applauded everywhere!

Seeing that the atmosphere is finally getting better.

Xiao Sa didn't dare to delay, and went straight to the topic:

"Then next, I will officially announce the final score of this round for Lu Chen.

Network score 8.4.

Score by the judges group, 9 points, 9 points, 10 points, 6 points, overall score: 8.5 points.

Therefore, the final score of Lu Chen is: 8.45 points! "

Another burst of applause...

"So far, the top 32 of this round have all been born!

Next, please see the big screen! "

on the screen.

Ranked by performance, top 32, officially ranked!

Surprisingly, Lu Chen actually ranked fourth!

[I laughed out of anger. The most popular work in this round, which has set many records, is only ranked fourth! If you tell this, who will believe it, family members! 】

[It's really far from the big score, and it didn't even make the top three! 】

[Scumbag Chen personally destroyed an originally perfect result! ! 】

[Don't worry, there must be a lot of scolding Chen Sicheng under the hot search tonight! 】

[It's useless to scold, my judge! 】

[The Internet will put pressure on him! 】

【I really want to fuck Wang Chen! He is jealous of Lu Chen, jealous! ! 】

【envy? Don't be so narcissistic, he is a director of tens of billions! Your Lu Chen, what do you have? 】

[Hehe, don't be weird! It's only the top 32 now, and there's still a long way to go! 】

[Stop pretending, you're so awesome, if you have the ability to write a Tang Detective? Or Northern Ireland. 】

[Don't worry, "Breaking the Ice" is definitely better than "Northern Love" by your scumbag Chen! I leave the word here! 】

[Hehe, die of laughter! Who can pretend to be better~]

[That's right, don't just get kicked out of the top 16 promotion competition, then you'll die laughing! 】

Studio.

Lu Chen's fans and Chen Sicheng's fans got into a fight unexpectedly!

The two sides fought fiercely with each other!

But in the end it is based on Lu Chen's huge number of fans!

Chen Sicheng's side was defeated steadily.

…………

And with the top 32 list, fully announced!

This round of competition is officially coming to an end!

Xiao Sa is standing in the middle of the stage!

Holding the microphone, he said loudly: "Everyone, this round of competition is over!

Ten days later, we will start the second round, the round of 16 promotion!

You can take the time to pay attention to the Douyin and Bibo accounts of "Writing like a God Conference"!

Get the latest on the show!

Finally, thank you for your company for nearly five hours!

Audiences, let's meet again in "Xianbi" in ten days' time! "

Following Xiao Sa's preview of the next round of competition time!

The game is officially over!

Contestants and judges left the hall one after another.

The live broadcast is also stopped~

…………

ten minutes later!

Chief Director's Office.

"Boom boom boom!"

"Come in!"

"Director, are you looking for me?"

Lu Chen pushed the door open and entered with a bewildered expression.

After the game, Lu Chen, like other contestants, was ready to pack up and go home.

Unexpectedly, the staff told him.

Chief director Hong Tao wants to see him.

Then, Lu Chen came.

"Come, come, sit down."

Hong Tao pointed to the stool in front of him.

Lu Chen sat down.

Hongtao couldn't laugh or cry, and poured bitter water when he came up: "Lu Chen, I asked you to write about the countryside, what the hell is this tower village?"

Lu Chen: "..."

"Director, the anti-drug campaign in the countryside is also a village, so why don't you say I'm not checking the question?!"

"All right, all right, I'm just complaining."

Hong Tao smiled and waved his hands: "Actually, I came to you to discuss with you about the collective bidding meeting at two o'clock tomorrow afternoon."

"Collective bidding? Tomorrow afternoon?"

"What, are you okay?" Hong Tao asked.

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