Let You Write About The Fish Seller, But You Write About Gao Qiqiang On The Spot?

Lu Chen: "What happened in the middle?

Let you, Tang Xiaolong, Tang Xiaohu, plus a policeman An Xin,

Connecting the four of you...

If I'm not wrong, you should have fought with the Tang brothers, right?"

Gao Qiqiang: "Yes, I did, and it was still on New Year's Eve."

"what's the situation?"

Lu Chen conveniently pulled out a Huazi from the coffee table: "Do you want it?"

Gao Qiqiang: "I don't smoke, and you should smoke less. What kind of cigarettes do you smoke when you are young?"

"Okay, then I won't smoke."

Lu Chen put the cigarette back again.

off screen.

Netizen: ""

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【Is there really someone in front of Lu Chenju?! My fucking hairs are standing on end!】

【Writing like a god! I finally understand the meaning of the name of this competition! It’s so amazing!】

【The screenwriter is so cool! I never thought that the screenwriter is like this! It's so cool!】

【Unprecedented feelings that cannot be described in words!!】

[I’ve watched all four of the next rounds, and even the first round of Fengshen, I’ve never seen a single contestant with such a creative state! What a formidable young man! This young man is really incredible! A blockbuster!]

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Backstage of the program group.

See what's in the comment section.

Hong Tao frowned.

"What's going on, why are there so many trolls all of a sudden?"

"Director, these people are trolls, and many of them have the same IP! Could it be that someone intentionally wants to punish Lu Chen?!"

The manager of the program group checked the background and found clues.

"Forbidden speech, all those who curse people are forbidden to speak!"

"good!"

"What about the same IP?"

"Only one left!"

"clear!"

Navy Company.

Suddenly, an urgent voice came from the intercom: "Brother Hu, batches of our accounts have been blocked!"

Brother Hu continued to cross his legs, chewing betel nuts, and didn't take it seriously at all: "What are you afraid of, flustered, isn't it all expected, start plan No. 2."

"clear!"

Brother Hu threw down the walkie-talkie, with a disdainful expression on his face: "Playing with titles? What are you kidding, are we professional and dedicated!"

While playing King, he looked at Lu Chen's live broadcast room from time to time.

Neuropathy!

This guy is a psycho!

Nagging!

Do you want to dance here?!

Following Hongtao's order, the account was blocked.

The number of people in the live broadcast room suddenly dropped by as much as 200,000,433!

Many netizens were stunned.

what the hell

Could it be that those just now were all sailors?!

And now.

inside the room.

The dialogue between Lu Chen and Gao Qiqiang is still going on.

Gao Qiqiang: Because of the stall, I beg the brothers of the Gao family to let me go.

I know they don't have to line up booths.

It's nothing more than trying to squeeze some more benefits.

I know!

I am a person who deals with people every day, how can I not understand?

as expected.

Tang Xiaolong let go.

He told me that there was something missing in his house. "

Lu Chen: "What?"

Gao Qiqiang: "A TV, to be precise, it's a plasma TV. I guess you haven't heard of such a thing at your age.

In two thousand years, this TV was a treasure. Do you know how much it costs?"

Lu Chen shook his head.

Gao Qiqiang: "More than 20,000!"

Lu Chen: "It's too much. It was more than 20,000 in those days. What kind of concept is that? It only costs a few yuan to sell a fish."

Gao Qiqiang: "Who says it's not? I've calculated that I have to sell at least 6,000 fish to make up for this hole. According to the fact that I sold 200 fish a day at the time, I would have to work for a full month!

Lu Chen: "You didn't send it?"

Gao Qiqiang: "Give it away, can you not give it away, how can I keep this booth if I don't give it away. But I really can't afford a plasma TV, so I bought an ordinary one, and it cost several thousand."

Lu Chen: "The Gao brothers are definitely not satisfied!"

Gao Qiqiang nodded: "Of course! Do you think they really want a plasma TV?

What they want is a heart!

At that time, plasma TV was a thing that rich people could afford, but ordinary people could not afford it.

But people, the poorer they are, the more they want to prove themselves, and the less they have, the more they want to have. It's all human nature.

Lu Chen: "Judging from your tone of voice, I always feel that you don't look like a junior high school graduate."

Gao Qiqiang: "Don't look at me as a low-educated person. In fact, I'm easy to learn. Because I know that people can't be without knowledge. Without knowledge, you can't run a business, at least you can't run a big business.

Lu Chen: "I agree! What happened next?"

Gao Qiqiang: "Later, I sent the TV to their home. Gao Xiaolong saw it, and he was not happy at that time, and he wanted to kick me out of the house. The implication is that the location of this fish stall will not be given to me either.

I'll just say nice things,

He doesn't listen.

I thought to myself, since things have been like this.

Then leave it to fate.

So I carried the TV and planned to go home.

If the gifts are not available, I will leave the TV for my younger siblings to watch.

They have never seen such good TV.

In the new year and new weather, I added a big item to the family, which happened to make them both happy. "

Lu Chen: "You are a really good brother."

Gao Qiqiang: "I only have two relatives, my brother and sister. If I don't treat them well, whoever treats them well."

Lu Chen: "Then how do they treat you?"

Gao Qiqiang: "It's very good. He is obedient and sensible. He has excellent academic performance. I never need to worry about it. This is also the biggest reason why I am willing to sell fish. I have hope! Thinking about the prospects of my younger siblings in the future, as an older brother, I also Can get some light and enjoy some blessings."

Lu Chen: "It's good, I envy you for having such good brothers and sisters. Then, why did you fight?"

Gao Qiqiang: "In the end, I was just about to go downstairs. That boy Tang Xiaohu sneaked up from behind and pushed my new TV down the stairs, smashing it to pieces on the spot.

I was in a rage at the time.

The new TV was smashed without opening the package!

How about a few thousand yuan, can I not get angry?

So without saying a word, I started to fight with Tang Xiaohu!

Of course, there were so many of them, I was beaten up black and blue, my face was broken, and my nose was bleeding.

Lu Chen: "So, An Xin is here?"

Gao Qiqiang: "No, all of us were taken to the police station. I lived in the police station on Chinese New Year's Eve."

Lu Chen: "Didn't anything happen in between? Did An Xin interrogate you?"

Gao Qiqiang: "Yes."

Lu Chen: "Tell me about your first impression of An Xin?"

Gao Qiqiang smacked his lips: "The first impression was nothing, just an ordinary policeman. But the young man looks very energetic, kind-hearted, and friendly. It's not like an old man later on."

Lu Chen: "But as far as I know, when you and An Xin met for the first time, there seems to be a story. It's not as simple as that."

Gao Qiqiang said with a smile: "You already know, why do you still ask me?"

Lu Chen: "I only know a rough idea, and no one else knows.

Gao Qiqiang shook his head and laughed, and pointed at me: "You, you really need to get to the bottom of it, don't you?"

Lu Chen: "Just chatting, besides, I also want to know the specific situation in the middle."

Gao Qiqiang was silent for a while, then spoke again:

"That night, after the interrogation, I was locked in the interrogation room, and I asked An Xin, can I go back early, my younger siblings are still waiting for me to cook.

The police next to me scolded me and said, what am I thinking, this is a fight, I will definitely not go back tonight.

I was in a hurry because my siblings didn't know that I was taken to the police station.

Unexpectedly, my brother and sister actually came to the police station.

Also brought me dumplings.

Just happened to meet An Xin at the door.

An Xin brought them in.

Later, my sister told me that the dumplings she made for me were not in good condition, and the parchment paper was either torn or it was gone.

I think so too.

How could their two brothers and sisters know how to cook?

I never let them do it either.

Gao Qiqiang couldn't laugh or cry.

"After that, An Xin gave me her own dumplings, and also gave a box to my younger siblings.

To be honest, I am very grateful to him.

That Spring Festival, although I spent it in the police station.

But I lived a very solid and comfortable life.

Then I thought, why do I feel that way?

Figured it out, human touch!

From childhood to adulthood, the three of us, brothers and sisters, were bullied by others.

That's why I have a personality that is easy to be wary of outsiders.

But An Xin left a very deep impression in my heart with that dumpling meal.

I just realized that there are people who can be so kind and helpful.

I am very grateful to him.

Until now, I am also grateful to him.

By the way, that night...

Me and him, just like me and you now, face to face.

He sat on the interrogation table and I sat on the interrogation chair.

Eat dumplings together.

There are lively fireworks and firecrackers outside.

(ccbh) I can vaguely hear the Spring Festival Gala next door. "

Lu Chen: "It seems that you really remember clearly."

Gao Qiqiang: "Of course, that meal of dumplings, including the Spring Festival, has a profound meaning to An Xin and me.

I also didn't expect that my relationship with him would last for decades because of this dumpling meal.

He didn't even think of that!"

Gao Qiqiang was a little gloating, but in his eyes, there was a look of reminiscing about the past...

And at this time.

In the live broadcast room.

Shuping took a deep breath, and sighed sincerely: "Lu Chen, this boy, has already gone in, completely gone in!"

Yan Gelin laughed angrily and said: "I just said that this kid retained his strength in the last round, as expected! I envy him in this state. When I wrote Shisanchai, I didn't go so deep!"

Chen Sicheng at the side couldn't believe it, his pupils trembled.

I wipe~

Can the script still be written like this?!

I do not know how?!

As a layman, Xiao Sa became more and more unbelievable the more he looked at it, and he stuttered: "Mr. Shu Ping, Mr. Yan, this... This kind of creative state is too shocking!

Can a virtual character really talk to me? How do I feel like..."

"Same as schizophrenia, isn't it?"

Shu Ping smiled: "Screenwriters are like this, if you don't go crazy, you won't survive."

"Well, I really learned a lot today." Xiao Sa sighed again and again.

"Teacher Shu Ping, what do you think of Gao Qiqiang's character?" Yan Gelin asked suddenly.

"At present, it is almost certain. Gao Qiqiang's design ideas should be the same as Lin Yaodong, the villain of this story.

Yan Gelin nodded.

"But it's different from the last round.

In the last round, Lu Chen used a subjective deduction method to deduce Lin Yaodong.

But this round, Lu Chen used the way of dialogue to help us better understand the role of Gao Qiqiang, and the character image is fuller.

It depends on whether Lu Chen can gain a firm foothold in the core conflict and the key person setting.

If you can do both, do it at the same time!

Then the character really comes alive!

So I personally feel that the charm of the character Gao Qiqiang may not be much worse than that of Lin Yaodong.

But from the current point of view, Gao Qiqiang's character tension is still much weaker than that of Lin Yaodong. "

"Yes!" Yan Gelin deeply agreed: "Lin Yaodong has the addition of the theme and conception of clan culture.

Gao Qiqiang did not!

As a result, he was not as eye-catching as Lin Yaodong.

Although we already know that Gao Qiqiang will eventually become a big shot in the local area.

But as audiences, we actually already have character expectations.

In addition, with Lin Yaodong in front of him, Lu Chen wants to create the same type of villain again. …

The difficulty will naturally increase!

I think this is also the sequelae left after his amazing performance in the last round.

In short, let's watch the next plot.

Let's see what Lu Chen plans to write?

How to make the middle part of the story fascinating!

Stand up the character!

That's the key!

See if there is any chance to overtake on a curve!"

Shuping nodded.

Xiao Sa, who was on the side, listened to the two judges talking at length.

In order to facilitate the audience's understanding, I summarized it and asked:

"Two teachers, can I understand that...

In terms of creative techniques, contestant Lu Chen has a very amazing performance.

But at present, Gao Qiqiang, a key figure, is not performing as well as the two teachers expected?

Because before, Lu Chen has written a similar theme "Icebreaker"?

Created such a classic villain as Lin Yaodong!

Compared with Lin Yaodong, this Gao Qiqiang is relatively mediocre?

Is that what you mean, teachers?"

"Roughly the same."

The two nodded.

"So can it be said that this story is not as exciting as the last round?"

"You can't say that, Teacher Xiao Sa!" Shu Ping shook his head: "The above comparisons are only for the protagonists, that is, Gao Qiqiang and Lin Yaodong.

But don't forget, Lu Chen's current state of creation is generally used for story creation of group portraits!

In other words, not only Gao Qiqiang has bright spots.

In this story, other characters should also have bright spots.

If this requirement can be achieved.

I dare not say whether this story is more exciting than "Breaking the Ice".

But its upper limit must be higher than "Breaking the Ice"!

There is no doubt about this"

Why!"

"Because of "Break the Ice", it is not a story of group portrait love!

It's a dramatic story!

Its upper limit is relatively limited!

Like I said before, would "Break the Ice" really be this exciting without the role of Lin Yaodong?

not necessarily!

That's the beauty of characters!

A good character can raise the height of the whole work!

We randomly pick out an excellent work, and you can always remember the key characters in it!

For example, Yu Mo and the doctor in "Thirteen Hairpins".

Another example is Hai Rui, Guest, Yan Song in "The Ming Dynasty".

This is the blessing of characters to a work!"

Yan Gelin said with a smile: "There are also Zhang Mazi, the master, Huang Silang in "Let the Bullets Fly", and the sixth child who is willing to have his belly cut for a bowl of noodles.

Shu Ping also smiled.

Chen Sicheng on the side has a black line on his forehead.

I dare you three to take the stage, it is really addictive...

"So, you can imagine, when there are multiple impressive characters in a work, how high will its upper limit be?

Almost infinite height!

Therefore, for Lu Chen's propositional story this round, we must pay attention to his character design!

Especially in the design of group portraits!

For me.

Since he adopted this creative method.

Then this round, I will not judge it according to the standard of a [plot story].

I must judge it according to the standard of [group portrait story].

If the group portrait design is successful! Lu Chen is successful!

Failed! He failed!

There is no third way!"

With Shuping throwing out such a loud and heavy comment!

In the jury room, the atmosphere suddenly exploded!

Xiao Sa took the lead in applauding.

Yan Gelin and Liu Heping also applauded.

Agree.

As for Chen Sicheng in the corner, although he was also applauding.

But one head and two big.

My heart is a little broken!

Damn, I'm a judge, how come the more I listen to it, the more I don't understand?!

Please, I am a reviewer!.