Let You Write About The Fish Seller, But You Write About Gao Qiqiang On The Spot?

After all, there are too many adaptations of the theme of the rise of the little man.

Not to mention the old routine, the audience is tired of watching it.

It's really hard to get people interested.

Unless Lu Chen's next plot is exceptionally well written.

That's another matter.

so……

At least for now.

Yan Gelin's development of this plot was lower than his expectations...

And at this time...

Liu Heping, who had been silent all this time, also spoke.

"Regional background is the soil for the extension of the plot, different regions produce different stories.

Just like the high slopes of the loess, it is doomed not to have the unique graceful and poetic atmosphere of the Jiangnan water town.

In the same way, in areas where clan culture prevails in Guangdong Province.

Even if it is also about the rise of a small character, the story that happened must be different from other places. "

"Yes, Teacher Liu is right!

It depends on whether Lu Chen can organically combine the two concepts of personal rise and clan.

If you just simply introduce the regional environment.

Introduce the unique cultural environment of Guangdong Province.

Instead of taking advantage of this,

It still focuses on personal development, causing the background design to be blurred.

Then I think the creation of the story on No. 48 will most likely disappoint people. "

Shuping continued to throw out his point of view.

Yan Gelin and Chen Sicheng nodded.

Even Liu Heping nodded slightly, agreeing with Shuping's point of view.

After all, before, everyone saw Lu Chen delimiting the two keywords of clan culture and ancestral hall culture.

Feel bright and fresh.

But now that the plot is unfolding, it is clear that Lu Chen has not made good use of these two keywords for the time being...

certainly!

anyway.

After all, this is just the beginning, and the plot has not yet fully unfolded. It is definitely inappropriate to draw conclusions too early...

But at the beginning of Lu Chen,

To be honest, it's really too standard!

No wonder the judges were slightly disappointed...

………………

And at this time...

Chen Sicheng listened happily.

He has long said that No. 48 is average.

But Liu Heping gave him a high look.

But now it seems.

Lu Chen's performance is clearly moving towards his evaluation...

The theme is the same as most of the other contestants, nothing new, but old-fashioned.

I want to advance to the next round with a story like this.

Let's not talk about idiots and dreams.

But the probability of promotion is really not high.

Anyway, Chen Sicheng didn't care what the other three judges thought.

At least with him.

For such an old-fashioned story, at least two points will be deducted first!

If the plot is not good enough, then deduct even more!

Chen Sicheng has always felt that a good story must have absolute commercial value.

Since he is a judge.

Then don't meddle in this kind of old soup and old rice!

It is impossible for him to recognize it!

Studio.

Listen to the conversation of several judges.

Netizens are also talking about it.

[Yes, the teachers are right, it's a bit tricky to unfold the plot! I thought I was going to write about internal conflicts among sects, but that's the end? 】

[Isn't this story a proper way of writing on the Internet? The key is the old-fashioned way of writing on the Internet more than ten or twenty years ago. So dated! 】

【No. 48 is not as strong as Teacher Liu Heping said. 】

[To be honest, when I first wrote the words [Clan Ancestral Hall Culture] on the 48th, my eyes really shined. I didn't expect it to become vulgar immediately! 】

[Let's take a look again, I hope Mr. Liu Heping won't slap me in the face, if the 48th doesn't advance, it's really embarrassing, fucking open the door for embarrassment! 】

[It's so embarrassing! 】

[Look, he is ready to write again! 】

on screen...

After Lu Chen paced back and forth a few times, he walked to the whiteboard again!

He picked up a black pen and wrote:

"Because Lin Yaodong wandered around the streets all the year round, seeing all kinds of people and listening to him, he found that collecting waste products was very profitable, which was much more profitable than him setting up a stall to make snacks. At that time, it was just the 1990s, coastal trade was developed, and various Foreign gadgets poured into the country, including a lot of foreign garbage and so on.

Dongshan City! (A virtual city in Guangdong Province.)

As a port city, it is also the first city in China to be exposed to this group of outlets.

Lin Yaodong, who learned about the money-making project, immediately decided that he would start a business of selling scraps!

For him, what business makes money! He does whatever he wants!

Because he is poor and afraid!

The poor boy's desire for money is engraved in his bones.

In order to make money, Lin Yaodong thinks he can do anything! "

write here.

Lu Chen paused again.

But this time, he quickly picked up his pen again and continued writing:

"Because Lin Yaodong is smart and knows what to do, soon he made a lot of achievements in collecting waste products, and in the next few years, he also made his first pot of gold in his life by collecting waste products.

At that time, he was just in his early twenties, because he entered the society early and had contact with many people, his aura was comparable to that of someone 30 years younger.

Also for making money.

Lin Yaodong's life changed dramatically accordingly!

First of all, the family conditions are better, they can eat enough food, and live in a house that does not leak.

Secondly, their family's reputation in the village has gradually increased.

The villagers greet him when they see him.

Such drastic changes in the external environment.

Let Lin Yaodong really feel the charm brought by money!

His desire for money also exploded during this period!

He believes that money can bring him everything!

therefore!

He desperately hopes that he can make more money!

change yourself!

Make a difference!

even!

He wants to change Tazhai!

Change the fate of your own lineage! "

…………

See the last line!

Shu Ping slightly widened his eyes!

"I posted a question with the clan!"

"As expected, it really is the path from advanced personal development to leading the development of the village!"

Chen Sicheng pouted.

This plot is not only reasonable, but also expected.

Yan Gelin also pursed his lips and took a deep breath.

"The character's personality has been established! But... it's still not enough!"

Yan Gelin commented.

Liu Heping continued to watch quietly, without saying a word.

"Teacher Xiao Sa, I think... how about changing the room, and you can't stay in room 48 all the time."

Chen Sicheng suggested.

Xiao Sa checked the time, indeed, she stayed in room 48 for several minutes.

it's been a while...

"Then let's switch rooms, how many judges and teachers?"

In this regard, Shu Pingren naturally has no objection.

As judges, there are so many contestants, it is impossible for them to only look at one person!

What's more, the story of No. 48.

In all fairness, it's really not exciting enough...

At least so far it seems so.

immediately.

Xiao Saqie went to other live broadcast rooms, and the judges continued to comment on other contestants.

…………

【Hey, this story is not very interesting, I will go to other rooms to see it too. 】

【I am coming too. 】

[Everyone can take a look at the No. 4 live broadcast room, which is quite interesting. No. 4 designed a plot similar to a stage play, which is quite interesting. 】

【stage show? Country stage play? Hey, interesting, I'll check it out. 】

【I am coming too! 】

The people in the live broadcast room, like the water at high tide, come and go quickly.

In the blink of an eye, more than half of the 300,000 people had fallen.

Even the number of people is still sharply decreasing.

It soon fell below 100,000.

…………

And at this time.

inside the room.

Lu Chen, who knew nothing about the outside world, continued his deduction.

Write up to this point.

Lin Yaodong's psychological construction has basically taken shape.

values!

Money Concept!

world view!

All have been initially established!

People are only fascinated and eager for something!

Greed will breed!

Breed ambition!

With greed and ambition, people will desperately want more!

It was this kind of mentality and motivation that finally led Lin Yaodong to transform into a big drug lord!

And the next step of the plot is very critical!

It was precisely because of this incident that Lin Yaodong embarked on the road of crime for the first time!

And take this as a turning point and an opportunity.

It has an extremely profound impact on it!

From the inside to the outside, usher in the first transformation in life!

It really laid a solid foundation for later becoming a big drug lord!

This opportunity and turning point is the smuggled car!

Although it was not clearly stated in the original play.

But it's not hard to speculate.

As Lin Yaodong's experience grows, he is gradually dissatisfied with the "small profits" of collecting waste products!

Finally found smuggling, very profitable!

So he took the risk and started a smuggling business.

It also laid an important foreshadowing for his escape to Xiangjiang and exposure to drugs!

so……

The following plot is the beginning of the real climax of this story!

PS: It's already three changes today! There are still two chapters left before the plot explodes!

I beg my brothers to support a wave of data!

This book has applied for a contract and must be put on the shelves!

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