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After sighing, Yang Qiming came to Lipa's office again.

"Lao Li, how do you feel about this chapter?" Yang Qiming asked.

Li Bo nodded and said: "Yes, very good, even Genghis Khan appeared, Gu Yong really dared to think and write, and he had enough pen power. Before this, I was very worried that he would collapse later, but after reading the third chapter After that, my worries lessened."

Hearing Li Bo's words, Yang Qiming had a smug look on his face. His previous feeling was indeed correct.

Just as he was about to say something, he heard Li Bo continue: "However, I found another problem."

"Another question?" Yang Qiming gave Li Bo a puzzled look and said, "What is the problem? Lao Li, let's hear it."

Li Bo said: "This work is a martial arts work, but from the first three chapters, it seems that there are less martial arts elements. Except for the description of Qiu Chuji and the seven monsters of Jiangnan, there are not many martial arts elements.

This third chapter is almost all about the description of the war between the various Mongolian tribes, as well as the contradictions and frictions between the Temujin tribe and the envoys of the Jin Kingdom, and there are very few martial arts elements.

Moreover, the protagonist Guo Jing looked like he was going to grow up in Temujin's army. Then, what he has come into contact with and learned should mainly be the way of marching and fighting in the desert, and it seems that there is no martial arts element.

Of course, I'm not saying that it's not good to write like this. In fact, with Gu Yong's writing power, it's bound to be very wonderful to write like this.

But this is a martial arts novel after all, and the martial arts elements are the most important. Otherwise, it's more of a historical novel. "

After listening to Li Bo, Yang Qiming nodded, did not refute, but said with a smile: "I said Lao Li, but you can ask questions. As far as the first three chapters are concerned, this is indeed a problem. However, this It's just the third chapter, don't worry, I believe this will be a genuine martial arts novel."

Lippo also smiled and said, "I didn't mean to pick on faults, but our requirements must be strict. You are right, this is only the third chapter, and I hope the next thing can be as you said."

Yang Qiming nodded and said, "After a few days, look at the situation of Chapter 4. To be honest, I am looking forward to it. I am liking this work more and more."

Li Bo added: "To be honest, I am also looking forward to it. I like this work a little bit now."

"Oh, is that so?" Yang Qiming laughed, then went out, feeling very good.

After Yang Qiming went out, Li Bo smiled and shook his head, and he seemed to be in a good mood.

...

Judging from the first three chapters of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", its martial arts elements seem to be somewhat lacking, especially from the third chapter and the development trend of the latter chapter. \u003c\u003e

And the people who noticed this were not only Li Bo, but also Wang Yang, the editor-in-chief of the Great Martial Arts Magazine, as well as martial arts writers Silent Ye, Wolong, and others who were good at thinking and had vicious eyes.

Great Martial Arts Magazine.

Jian Yishen said excitedly: "Editor-in-chief, as expected, throughout the first three chapters, there are really not many martial arts elements. If you don't say it, I haven't noticed it yet."

Wang Yang smiled and said, "I didn't notice it before. This was all I discovered suddenly after reading the third chapter, almost all the descriptions of wars between Mongolian tribes."

Jian Yi Shendao: "I hope Gu Yong didn't find it himself. After he unknowingly makes this work more like a historical novel, if he wants to focus on 'martial arts', the transition will definitely be It's very stiff and unnatural. Then, of course, the work is over."

Wang Yang nodded and said, "That's true. Moreover, he also brought in Genghis Khan and Mongolia, and the pattern has become larger, and it will undoubtedly become more difficult to control. Therefore, this work of his seems to be beautiful now. Infinite, but in fact buried these two hidden dangers,

It could roll over at any time. "

"Indeed." Jian Yishen said, the more he thought about it, the more excited he became.

...

In the exchange group of Silent Leaves, Vigorously Brush, Meniscus, and Qin Sheng.

Fallen Leaf said silently: "As soon as the third chapter comes out, first of all, it must be very exciting. But it seems that there is another hidden danger. What do you think?"

With a vigorous stroke, he said: "The hidden danger is indeed a hidden danger, but it is still too early to say anything. This is only the third chapter, and we must read a few more chapters before we can draw a conclusion."

Meniscus said: "It's true that I can't come to a conclusion yet. Let's look at the next chapter. However, I, Guyong, shouldn't make such a mistake."

Qin Sheng said: "Let's not talk about the rest, the rating list is updated this afternoon. I hope this hidden danger can make the rating of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" stop rising, so that we can bring the rating closer."

"I hope so." The leaves silently, with a big stroke, and the crescent moon, said at the same time.

...

Not just a few Silent Leaves, but in fact almost all of them are waiting for the update of the score list in the afternoon.

Of course, in addition to the most concerned about the ratings of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", everyone is also concerned about the ratings of the works of Dali Yiyi, Meniscus, Qin Sheng, Shang Buer and others.

Martial arts fans are still very happy after seeing the update of several people's works today. \u003c\u003eAlthough it is not as exciting and exciting as "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", it is already very good.

Put it before, only get one, everyone will be very excited.

The official rating list update did not make everyone wait too long.

However, all the martial arts fans were stunned after seeing the latest rating list.

The score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" has not changed, it is still 7.3 points in the previous issue.

what's going on? The third chapter, which is so burning and exciting, even the third chapter that Genghis Khan summoned, did not improve the score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes".

Wuxia fans couldn't believe it.

"Isn't the rating list updated yet?" someone asked.

"No, it has indeed been updated. You can see that "Blood Wind Chime", which is a big stroke, has increased from 6.7 points in the previous issue to 6.8 points now. In addition, the works of Meniscus and Qin Sheng have also increased by 0.1 points each. Minute."

The rating list is indeed updated, but why hasn't the rating of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" changed?

No one doubts whether the system is faulty, and no one doubts that "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" has suffered injustice.

After all, that is the jury of the Times Literature Award, and the outside world absolutely believes in its fairness and notarization.

The only explanation is that the jury of the Times Literature Award believes that the serialization of this issue of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is not enough to improve its rating.

But why? Is the vision of the Times Literature Award jury so "unique"?

Many martial arts fans do not understand the situation.

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