LOL: Summoner of Goddess Janna
Asking for some more days off and some reflections
Sorry_(:з ∠)_
Originally, I planned to finish introducing Riven's situation on the mountain, and then detail what happened to Feia after she came down from the mountain, and then introduce more heroes of Ionia.
As a result, the old problem came back again, and I accidentally wrote "awkward".
There will be no more complaints this time. Everyone seems to know what my problem is along the way. No matter how much I talk about it, I will become a nagging and complaining Mrs. Xianglin, which is just in vain and annoying people.
By the way, I would like to talk about a question that many book friends mentioned during the series:
It’s just that the struggle process described in this book is too smooth, always without death or sacrifice, and is unrealistic.
I actually answered this question at the beginning. This book is a pure utopian fantasy story with almost no realistic guidance. To put it more directly, it is YY novels. From the beginning, I just wanted to have a pure and beautiful dream. So I won’t write anything too heavy or too realistic.
But actually, the most critical problem is that I really don’t have that ability.
If possible, which author wouldn't want to write a monumental work with practical significance? But ordinary people don't have that level.
I lack both writing skills and experience.
I am too far away from that era of darkness and turmoil, and also from those years of burning passion.
So before I wrote about Zeli’s farewell to her mother, I was stuck.
Now I am stuck in writing about Feiya’s experiences after going down the mountain.
Because I simply cannot imagine what kind of pain ordinary people must have endured in the context of the invasion of the Noxus Empire. This cannot be understood by looking up cold historical information or watching a few old movies.
You see, I just wanted to describe the suffering of the masses in a little depth and write something so-called "realistic", but I was already a little unable to control it, and I struggled with my writing intermittently.
Death and sacrifice are undoubtedly a more serious and heavy subject than suffering.
I really can't write well.
If you can’t write well, you might as well not write at all, because:
Everyone may be moved by the apple in "Shangganling", but no one will cry emotionally because of the sacrifice of the character in "The Anti-Japanese Heroes", right?
no, I can not. Everyone will just find it awkward and funny.
As for my level, this book is, to put it bluntly, at the level of "The Anti-Japanese Heroes".
In fact, in this era, not many people will be moved by "Shangganling".
well...
That's it, I'll think about it more.
Will definitely resume updating tomorrow.
If it doesn't work, change the plot and think about how to make the story more relaxed. After all, that's what I'm good at.
Speaking of which, I found that the important reason why I failed at this book is that I, a second-rate writer with a background in comedy, chose a serious subject that is incompatible with my writing style.
Although I tried hard to write in a light and funny way, when writing about this subject, it is inevitable to write some serious and heavy passages.
So, every time I write about such a passage, I start to frantically struggle with Kavin like I am constipated.
All I can say about this is...
The writing process of this book was really painful. But I don't regret it.
This subject matter is difficult to write about and it is not suitable for me. But I really wanted to write from the bottom of my heart.
You can do what you want to do, get recognition from others, and even make money. This is actually a luxury for most people in reality.
Compared with this, what is Kavin's little suffering?
From now on, I won’t be pretentious or talk about hardship.
But you still have to take the leave you need, haha.
(Also, in the past few days, all Qidian’s comments have not been displayed. It’s not because something happened to this book, or because I banned everyone... I can still see the comments in the author’s backend. Please don’t make any further guesses. The more outrageous it is_(:з ∠)_)
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