Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant
Summary of this volume (be careful with long articles!)
The end of this volume is the plot I've always wanted to write.
So I know that the plot of the final chapter of this volume will be very controversial, but considering that the further I go, the less I dare to write willfully, so I still choose to write it in my own direction.
Of course I know there will be some people who won't accept it.
Of course I know that when I write like this, according to popular sayings, I am screening readers... even though I don't have many readers to begin with.
According to the editor's words, it went further and further away from the readers' expectations of the inherent routine.
When I write this, I will most likely dig a hole for myself, and when I’m done, I’ll step on the dirt bag to make it firmer.
But when I think that I can write something that makes me happy and that some readers are willing to read, I think... just write it!
No regrets.
Regardless of whether the grades are good or bad.
Reading a book is a two-way journey between the reader and the author.
In the process of rushing there, I saw clearly that the author was a nose-picking man with pimples on his face, so he chose to curse and then turned around and left. It was only natural.
Of course, the failure of expectations is not very beautiful, and it cannot cover up the emotional value generated in the process... So it is okay to apologize, but it is impossible to ask me to refund my money!
The above are just some personal thoughts.
Then it’s time to review this volume.
This volume is the volume with the most chapters in the book so far, and it is also the most important development period of the entire book in the setting of Fish Head.
Throughout the volume, the protagonist completes the transformation in terms of strength, status, and state of mind.
He was finally no longer just a spectator on the sidelines, but stepped onto the stage.
Of course, the reason why the Huashen collective was taken offline was not simply to make way for Wang Ba, but to reasonably... No spoilers for now, everyone will read slowly.
In order to prevent everyone from being too uncomfortable, Yutou tried his best to restrain many sensational parts, and many places were also brushed aside.
But if you take it completely, you won’t have the feeling that Yutou wants.
So if you still can't accept it, I'm sorry and hold my fist.
Let’s talk about the problem again.
After the previous two million words, some new problems still emerged after entering this volume.
There is not enough connection between this volume and the previous volume, and there is a situation where there is no content to write after entering the new volume.
I originally thought about it when I was making the outline, but because the last volume was all about portraying Yao Wudi, I ended up neglecting to set up some foreshadowing.
In the absence of foreshadowing, I had no choice but to bite the bullet and write awkwardly. In addition, I was not in a good state at the time. At the beginning of this volume, there were unconvincing contents. The most obvious one was that the protagonist relied on Skills in auditing gained status within the clan.
Originally, the setting had other abilities, but at the time I was worried that it would be too complicated, so I deleted some branches. The end result was that the basis for improving the protagonist's status was too thin, and some friends just couldn't stand it.
After finishing writing this part of Yutou, I realized that it was a done deal and I had no extra energy to revise it, so I had to give it up.
Fortunately, after this plot ended, the foreshadowing began to be laid in one after another, and I had a little feeling again. Starting from going to Chen State, the plot returned to the direction I expected.
Of course, there will be some details that are not handled well, but this should be considered a limitation of personal ability.
Posting articles at a very fast pace every day, there is indeed no time to elaborate on many aspects. Once written, it is very difficult to change it.
Then there is the usual old problem. I am not very good at making small climaxes, so this volume may not have many exciting points overall, and is only supported by some small plots and twists. It is a bit boring and gentle until the end. Suddenly raised.
This question is not only related to the tone of this book, but also to my personal ability. I want to exercise it, but the next volume may not be very suitable. Let’s take a look first. If I have the opportunity, I will do it without affecting the quality. Try it.
Oh yes, I just happened to see a long comment.
This is probably where many readers are confused.
Please answer them all together, I will not reply separately.
first question:
Is Huashen offline to highlight the protagonist? The knife is unbearable.
Answer: It is true that part of it is to highlight the protagonist, but it is also to pave the way for the next long-term direction of the book. It is not a knife for the sake of the knife, so please be patient.
second question:
Isn't the fatal thunder disaster set by the author unreasonable? There is no need for Ogura Kai to prevent the monks from ascending.
Answer: One of the previous clues, "The monk who transforms into gods dies, and the membrane eye is restored" and the setting that Taoji can mend the sky, actually implies a logic, that is, the monk's Taoji and cultivation are originally a part of the Ogura world. An important part of.
The monk left Ogurakai. If it was in the past, the Ogurakai family's great career would not matter, but now we are very poor. If you want to take away all the pots, pans, firewood, rice, oil and salt from my house, then I will definitely risk my life to get it. The general logic of attacking you is this.
Of course, if you want me to explain the details of the principle, this can only be explained after I have mastered the power of overcoming tribulations.
Third question:
The Sanzhou monks invaded Feng Linzhou, why didn't they join forces with Feng Linzhou's big guys to solve the problem? As a result, sacrifices have now begun to mend the sky.
Answer: 1. Each force has a different position, different interests and different levels of information control, making it difficult for them to make consistent decisions. It’s hard for me to write all this, but I can write it, but you will definitely scold me; 2. The actions and results of the ancestors of the Ye family in Huangjizhou were not within their expectations; 3. I don’t want to spoil anything, But let’s talk about it, among the three continents, I only mentioned that sacrifices are being made in Xituo Island;
Fourth question:
Is the appearance of the ancestor of Huangjizhou a deus ex machina?
Answer: Everyone’s judgment criteria are different. I have hinted about it three times before. According to my standards, the foreshadowing has been completed, so it does not count.
The fifth question:…
I won’t answer the rest one by one. This does take a lot of time. Yutou should just go ahead and code.
Please take your time and read it. If you have any questions, they will be explained later. (This is also a shortcoming. I like to put phenomena in the front and explanations in the back. It is easy to drive people away. Keep this in mind)
Then here’s the spoiler: Yuntian Realm will appear, but it will appear in other ways. I can’t say too much about the specifics. There are too many smart people, and it would be boring to guess.
Finally, let me say it. As an author, writing a book that is not good-looking is the biggest original sin. This goes without saying.
Yutou asks himself that he is still doing his job, but now because he needs to clarify the context in the middle and late stages of writing, he can't update too much. Sometimes the update will be interrupted if the state is not good, but basically all his free time has been spent on this book. It's in the book.
Think about how it can be fun, logical, story-telling, interesting, and consistent.
I have written about 80,000 to 90,000 words in terms of outline and details.
Sometimes when loopholes appear, it may not be because the author is smart, but because he really fails to take it into consideration, or he has no choice but to sacrifice part of it after weighing it.
After all, making up a world that barely has a hint of logic, and then tampering with the logic is really endless. The ability is limited and can only ensure that the story is generally reasonable.
As for updates.
Of course Yutou also wants to be able to make more updates and make more money.
But really you can't.
So there is really no way to update.
As you can see now, you can tell that I am basically too embarrassed to ask for a monthly pass.
I hope everyone can understand it more.
Please also ask the bosses to be gentler when they see something they are dissatisfied with...
In addition, I would like to thank the readers who tipped this book and all the gentlemen who supported this book.
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There are still some that I can’t post, so I apologize deeply and can only kowtow to express my gratitude.
Today is the Lantern Festival, and the journey of the new year is finally officially starting. Thank you for your support last year, so that Yutou can reach this point.
I wish all readers good luck and good luck in the Year of the Dragon!
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