Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant

Huh, this volume is finally over.

Let's make a summary as usual.

The original goal was to finish it within 70 or 80 chapters, to write a story about a world in ruins, people living in poverty, a little turtle who worked hard to grow up, and finally repaired the sky and saved the world when the Xiaocang world fell.

Well, it's very vulgar, but there's nothing I can do. I'm old and don't have so many ideas.

But in the process of writing, in the process of pushing the outline and the detailed outline, I found that if I only spent 70 or 80 chapters to describe the protagonist's growth from a Yuanying to a giant in the Xiaocang world who was able to repair the sky, it would be extremely unreasonable. (Although it's not too reasonable now)

It feels like it's over for the sake of ending.

I don't want to give people the feeling of a bad ending, so although my ability is limited, I still comb it over and over again.

I wrote tens of thousands of words for the detailed outline of this volume, and I combed it again every time I wrote it until it was barely smooth.

But to be honest, due to my own ability and slow brain speed, I didn't have time to think about it carefully every day. Looking back at many parts, I was actually not very satisfied.

For example, Wang Ba predicted the great catastrophe of Xiaocangjie, and then indulged Han Yanzi in blood sacrifice. If I had time, I should be able to write this part more smoothly so that no one could find fault with it. However, the daily update pressure forced me to choose a short and fast way, which also left some logical problems.

The same situation appeared in the description of the battle scene.

There is no other reason. The battle scene is too laborious. How to write a high-level battle style and write details so that readers can understand it is actually beyond my ability, at least the scope of imagination.

If I spend two or three days, I can't say how good it is, but I should be able to describe a battle scene. It's just that in terms of efficiency, it's not worth it.

Because this book itself is not good at fighting.

So after weighing my energy, ability and many other conditions, I made a strategy of giving up.

This is also a situation that occurs more frequently in the process of writing this volume.

Then there is the second problem, which is dragging and bloating.

This is still an old problem. The emergence of this kind of situation is basically my lack of control over the plot and my excessive inclination towards logic.

The lack of control lies in the simultaneous advancement of multiple clues that I like, and the technique of converging and exploding at the end.

I think the advantage of writing like this is that if the rhythm is steady and neat, then the final explosion will be far more exciting than usual. The disadvantage is... it is too difficult to keep the rhythm steady and it is also difficult to be clean and neat.

So the ending of this volume is actually a failure.

Because it did not achieve the feeling of salvation that I expected.

So the whole volume seems bloated and procrastinated.

Secondly.

In order to achieve the rationality of the final goal, the excitement in the process was sacrificed.

This is also my old problem, and it is really difficult to change it.

These two problems are actually reflected in the previous volumes, and I have noticed them, but unfortunately, seeing the problem and solving the problem are really two different things.

This book may not have much hope, and I can only hope that I will not make the same mistake again in the next one.

- Remember to do subtraction (the next volume may be written in a simpler way).

The other problem is that I am always soft-hearted.

At the beginning of this volume, I wanted to write more cruelly, so that the climax at the end of the volume would be more charming.

But I was soft-hearted and couldn't bear to start.

It was a pity that I didn't achieve the expected effect in the end.

Remember, remember.

There is also the problem of supporting characters.

In fact, I prefer to write supporting characters. The outstanding supporting characters don't need to consider logic. As long as they are cool and memorable, they can satisfy some of my small obsessions.

But this volume, due to lack of energy and fear of redundancy caused by multi-line plots, I dare not write or expand. Naturally, the supporting characters in this volume are not very outstanding, and even become tools and face.

I expected to write more sensational about the return of the teachers, but I was not in good condition during the update days, and the things I wrote were tasteless, and ended in a hurry.

From this experience, I understand why many books explode at the beginning and become weak in the later stage. In fact, in the case of long-term updates, people's state will decline and become numb in the later stage, and naturally they can't write the outstanding words at the beginning.

This is an objective law, which is not subject to human will.

It's not a wash, it can only be regarded as a little experience after entering this industry.

Then, let's talk about the next volume, which should be the last volume of this book if nothing unexpected happens.

Early warning.

Continuing my previous habits, the writing style of this volume may change again.

There is no way, it is willful to fail.

Uh, I wonder if any readers have read zhttty's "The Age of the Great Universe"?

In terms of ideas, it will be similar.

However, the detailed outline has not been fully sorted out yet, and it is hard to say how it will feel when it is really written.

Let's see when the time comes.

As for the length of this volume... it's hard to say, maybe it will be very long, maybe it will end in a hundred chapters.

Although I have thought about the ending when I started the book, I'm sorry, I don't know what will happen in the middle, haha!

Oh, yes, let me talk about the update again. Generally, if I say I will make up for it when I take leave, I will definitely make up for it, but sometimes I don't say it because I consider that I really don't have the ability to make up for it, so I didn't say it.

I am a part-time worker, and I write after I get home at 6 or 7 o'clock every night. I try my best to complete the minimum of 4,000 words every day.

Those who pay attention to the word count should be able to see that I will write more if I can every day, and I will post it as soon as I finish it. There are 5,000 and 6,000 words. According to many authors who write 2,000 words per chapter, I can be considered to have two or three chapters a day. Some readers asked me to update more. If I change to two chapters of 3,000 words, will it be considered as additional updates?

Isn't this treating readers like monkeys?

I don't think it's necessary.

On the other hand, I am sincere and I will definitely update more if I have the ability.

After all, I also want to earn a few dozen more dollars, so when I had more time before, I also tried my best to write.

I hope everyone can understand.

Finally, thank you all for your company along the way. See you in the next volume. Love you, mua! (End of this chapter)