Looking for the lost ship girl
Chapter 960 Kavin
Another sunny morning.
The work was completed successfully, but in fact there was not much work. Su Gu passed by the pavilion on the right side of the dormitory building and saw Dafeng wearing a white lantern sleeve shirt and a short skirt. He was lying on the stone table in the pavilion with his chin on the table. , put his hands straight on the table, like a salted fish, and the kind that is very strong.
Su Gu could deduce from the empty plate on the stone table with only food residue left... Sure enough, it still didn't work. The girl was really a foodie girl and couldn't control her mouth at all. She yelled "the last one" every time. After eating all the snacks, it may not mean that she has encountered a problem and turned her worries into appetite, but in any case, it can be seen from the paper balls lying around her that she has encountered some kind of problem.
"Stupid monkey, stupid monkey." Su Gu sat down next to Dafeng.
Dafeng slowly tilted his head and put his face sideways on the table. When he realized it was Su Gu, he held the pen and threatened: "Try calling me a stupid monkey again, and I'll stab you to death."
"The big mackerel can scream, but I can't?" Su Gu said with a smile.
Dafeng wrinkled her cute nose and said, "You can't bark, she can't bark, and no one can bark."
Dafeng suddenly said in annoyance: "Admiral, it's time to take good care of her. You don't know how naughty the big mackerel is."
Su Gu said: "I can't control her."
"I can't even control the ship girl myself." Dafeng said, "What a mascot admiral. That's not wrong at all."
"You are still a battleship and an armored aircraft carrier, yet you are afraid of a submarine and are bullied every day." Su Gu suddenly reached out and touched Dafeng's head. As expected, the genius girl writer is so cute.
"Don't touch my head." Dafeng slapped Su Gu's hand away, dissatisfied.
Su Gu took back his hand and returned to the topic. He asked, "Is it the deadline again?"
Dafeng turned out to be a talented beautiful girl writer. After returning to the guard house, she had no interest in training. Her level had reached the limit and there was no use in training anymore. She had no interest in being a warehouse manager, maid or chef. The latter was definitely not good. , she only knew how to eat but not cook, and finally chose to return to her old profession as a homemaker.
Although he is not an author, Su Gu still knows this. He also wrote a graduation thesis in college.
Procrastination and laziness are occupational diseases of every author. In fact, they are also common problems of most people. After all, workaholics are in the minority. They keep saying things like "there is still a lot of time to rush for" and "if you touch it again, you will have time." Until the last critical moment, when it is almost too late, I will never write anything.
"Yes." Dafeng nodded and admitted. She thought to herself, if I had known earlier, I would have started writing earlier, finished writing earlier, and started playing earlier. In fact, it is the same, so why bother to delay it until now.
Su Gushun picked up a ball of paper and opened it. He saw only one word written on the crumpled paper. He immediately thought of a picture. Dafeng was holding the pen and couldn't write anything. Finally, he scratched his hair and crumpled the paper in anger. Throwing it away in a ball, he asked: "And it's also stuck?"
Dafeng didn't answer and sighed. This is the last point, and I am going to finish it next, but the problem now is that no matter what routine I have written, I can't think of a new routine at all. In fact, the main reason is that we are too pressed for time. Otherwise, it would be no problem to walk around and relax... Who knows?
Headache.
Dafeng subconsciously reached out and touched the plate again, but he didn't touch anything. This time his heart really died.
Su Gu has also read Dafeng's novels. After all, they are the works of his own ship girl. To be honest, he doesn't like them very much. The reason is not the kind of Long Aotian-like novels, but the pretentious female literature: "Would you like me to help you think of something?" Want a follow-up plot?”
Naturally, Dafeng would not refuse: "Okay."
"I noticed that you always write about the hero and heroine being tired at home, so why can't they go out for a walk?" Su Gu said, "Mountain climbing, diving, exploring, camping, whatever."
Dafeng nodded and she took note of it.
"The heroine is so gentle and beautiful, there is no way that there are no other boys who like her. Logically speaking, behind a good girl, there should be at least a strong man pursuing her." Su Gu said, "So, you can write a few love rivals for the male protagonist. , and it can be written with tens of thousands of words, or hundreds of thousands of words."
"Yes, you must not have read it carefully. Of course the heroine has other suitors. I have written about it." Dafeng explained after retorting, "I just brushed it off because readers don't like this kind of plot."
Su Gushen agreed. He didn't like similar plots either. He thought again: "How about writing about a crisis? It's not like someone gets a car accident or cancer. Let me give you an example. The heroine is kidnapped by a bad guy. Why do you want to be stripped of your clothes? It's done tonight. The hero arrived in time and punched and kicked the hero to save the beauty."
"I thought you had some great ideas, Admiral, but it turns out that's the case." Dafeng curled his lips.
"It's super stupid. This kind of plot is super stupid." Dafeng said, "How can there be such a coincidence in the world? Just when the bad guy is about to do something, the hero arrives. Generally speaking, the heroine is kidnapped by the bad guy. By the time the hero learns the news and kills the bad guys, the bad guys have already eaten the heroine and wiped her clean and sat next to her smoking. The heroine is in ragged clothes and is kneeling on the ground crying. This is normal."
"You're right." Su Gu said, "But it's just a coincidence."
"I still feel that this kind of plot is too silly and I don't want it." Dafeng paused and then said, "Even if it is just a coincidence, the heroine was kidnapped by the bad guy. Since she is a bad guy, she will definitely not abide by the integrity of a gentleman. Even if the last step is too late, Don’t you know how to move your hands and feet along the way? Kiss on the mouth, rub your chest, touch your thighs and so on.”
Su Gu said: "It seems to be the case. It's scary to think about it carefully."
Dafeng said: "It is."
Su Gu said: "But instead of the heroine being kidnapped, it would be okay if the hero is kidnapped by a female gangster."
Dafeng frowned and was shocked. Why did he feel that he could accept it all at once? She suddenly thought of something again, raised her head, and took a deep look at Su Gu.
"Otherwise, there is something else..." Su Gu said, "Isn't the male protagonist the president of a large company? It seems that I have never seen him working hard. Can you describe it a little bit?"
"Of course the male protagonist has a good job, but he still let me take care of it." Dafeng said, "Otherwise it will become a hegemony or workplace story. Do you want to read it?"
"Conflict, I think it's okay to have a little conflict when appropriate." Su Gu said, "For example, if the government is looking for trouble, or if it's vicious competition among peers, or scammers are defrauding..."
"Not very good. I'm afraid that if I write it, it will become the emperor's golden pole." Dafeng took the pen and knocked it on the stone table. "And no one likes to read it. Although some readers want to read it, most people I’m not here for this. I wrote it once before, and the response was really bad.”
"All right."
Dafeng said: "The most important thing is that it's almost over, so there won't be any more trouble."
Su Gu hesitated for a moment, he couldn't think of any plot, so he gave up and asked casually: "This book is finished, what are you going to write in the new one?"
Dafeng suddenly became excited and regained his energy: "I want to write about the wasteland."
Su Gu said: "This is not easy to write, you are not taking this route."
"I don't write about fighting and killing, struggling to survive, or killing and destroying things."
Dafeng continued: "A road story. The hero holds the heroine's hand and walks through the wasteland, chatting around a campfire under the starry sky. Walking on the road, watching huge humpback whales and jellyfish swimming in the sky, passing by In a village where the dead gather, there is a lonely gravekeeper living outside the village, and you meet a girl who wants to build a world where everyone is equal because she read a book... Isn't it great?"
Su Gu didn't understand it at all, but just nodded.
Dafeng said: "But I also really want to write novels with fantasy backgrounds, such as swords and magic, dragons and elves."
Dafeng’s vision: “It’s about how a gentle and lovely princess turned into a murderous princess and then a blood queen step by step. It’s about how the great sword master who likes to decapitate his enemies with a sword is actually a lolita. After the decline of the empire, the prince He became an emperor to revitalize the empire, and led the black knights to conquer countless lands. In the end, the entire empire fell into the quagmire of war, and the people were in dire straits..."
Su Gu said: "Write this, I want to read it."
"But fantasy novels are rarely read by anyone, so it's better in the city." Dafeng said, "After graduating from college, the male protagonist spent the summer at his uncle's house in the countryside. By chance, he met a girl on the mountain, an elf or a mountain ghost, no matter what they were called. Well, she has beautiful white hair and a charming face, but her figure is very poor..."
"Wait a minute, why do I feel that the character of the heroine you mentioned is a bit familiar?" Su Gu pursed his lips and suddenly realized, "Isn't that the character of Fortress Ji?"
Dafeng asked: "Isn't it good?"
Su Gu resisted the urge to give a thumbs up: "It's better to say it's awesome. I like Fortress Ji."
"The Guanling Bureau is responsible for researching and recording weird things. Weird things are monsters, and by extension, it might as well be anything that is not supernatural." Dafeng said, "The second female is the local person in charge of the Guanling Bureau. She looks powerful and majestic on the surface. The royal sister and queen is secretly a nerdy girl who likes sleeping, eating, and reading comics most."
Su Gu said, "Isn't that Beizhai?"
"It's a little different from Beizhai." Dafeng said, "Then the third female lead is the sister of the second female lead, a soldier, so Bismarck. I originally thought the male protagonist was too weak, but I got to know him step by step, and after working side by side again and again Fighting, and finally fell in love with the male protagonist unknowingly..."
Consultant Su: "What about Lexington?"
As a Japanese, Dafeng didn't like Lexington: "What about the big boss of the Guanling Bureau? In fact, he is a bad guy who tries to control the male protagonist with unlimited potential."
"The first girl again, the second girl again, and the third girl..." Su Gu said, "It's become a harem story."
"There are also girls four, five, six, and seven." Dafeng said, "I'm good at harem writing. Don't tell me you don't like it. Just look at how many weddings you've had?"
"Seventeen or eighteen, that's not much."
"Isn't that much?" Dafeng said, "There will be more in the future, at least more than thirty."
Su Gu laughed, stretched out his hand and spread his fingers: "At least it should start with five characters."
"Just kidding." Su Gu waved his hand, and then said, "You haven't finished this book yet, and you're just thinking about the next one. Is that really okay?"
"Just think about it, I didn't say write it now." Dafeng said, "I'll finish writing this book first, and then I'll do some research to see what the readers' response is before I'm sure. After I finish writing this book, I'll have to rest for two days. Months, think about it slowly then.”
It wasn't until Su Gu left that Dafeng realized it after a while. She realized that a morning had passed and she hadn't written a single word. How could she fix it?
"Silly monkey."
"You also called me a stupid monkey, do you want to be beaten again?" Soon it was lunch time, and in the cafeteria, Dafeng was holding a large bowl of rice bowl and glaring at Bu Ting.
Bu Nuo sat down opposite Dafeng and said with a smile: "I wanted to chat with you in the morning and found you and the admiral sitting in the pavilion talking happily. I didn't dare to go over and disturb you. If I disturb your good deeds, That’s not good. To be honest, let’s try hard, and our Dafeng should be at least in the top twenty.”
"You are only in the top twenty..." Dafeng nodded, "Yeah, I noticed that the admiral often stares at you, you can do it."
Bu Tiao lifted up a bunch of long hair and let it fall little by little to her shoulders. She said, "Admiral likes to stare at me. It's understandable. Everyone has a love for beauty, otherwise it would be like you..."
Bu Tiao remembered it and did not continue to speak. He must have a venomous tongue.
Dafeng looks indomitable, with long, silky black hair, a delicate face, and a tear mole in the corner of the eye that is just right and the finishing touch. It makes me design the heroine and always think about whether to add a tear mole. Her breasts are quite big, much bigger than me anyway... but she still has one weakness: "short and thick elephant legs."
"Say one more thing!" After all, Bu Tiao is a girl, and she still cares about it. Her legs are certainly not short and thick elephant legs, but they are definitely not long legs, but no matter how hard she exercises, it doesn't work. In anger, he stretched out his hands and tore Dafeng's face into a flat cake.
"Let go..." Dafeng's voice was strange.
Bu Tiao finally let go of Dafeng and asked curiously: "Seriously, what are you talking about there?"
Dafeng rubbed her face and explained.
"Are you ready to finish the novel?" Bu Nao said, "The hero and heroine haven't gotten married yet. Are you treating marriage as the finale?"
"right."
"Why don't you write something about your happy life after marriage?" Bu Nao said, "As a postscript."
"It seems like I can write something down." Dafeng nodded thoughtfully.
Bu Tiao said: "So you should get married as soon as possible, otherwise it will be very different when written."
"Are you a matchmaker?" Dafeng said, "Whether I want to get married or not is my business. Why are you urging me? I'm eating your rice?"
Dafeng lowered his head and poked the bottom of the bowl with the tip of his chopsticks. I thought about it too.
Anyway, Dafeng's novel has been delayed until the end of June. She made up her mind to write some sequel, but only a little.
Until early July, the heavy cruiser Baltimore was not the last to return to the garrison. The ones behind her...
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