Lord of Secrets

The second volume is over. I feel that the arrangement is not well handled. For example, the character "Yifedes" was given a new setting while writing.

In fact, at the beginning, she was a character used to introduce the organization behind Sgullen, the Wings of Freedom, and then she was given the identity of "Ossannie".

Until the Rose Castle, a plot was suddenly arranged for this character, and then the interest and emotion arose, and finally it was felt that the other party must show a weak heart, that is, the hug of Ubermo.

In the end, you know, it was out of control.

It's not that this is bad, but the strength of Yifedes was set a little higher, which made it a little difficult to handle later.

So, in the final plot of the Tower of Melis, I originally wanted to design Ubermo to win with difficulty, and then oh yeah, set off fireworks, express a sigh, and finally the secret medicine was digested.

And a "Chaldean Order" logo was left at the scene to make this organization appear in the eyes of others.

However, this sense of picture was instantly broken.

In short, even if the setting is out of this world, we should still do it as we should. The next volume will speed up the plot, referring to the cool novel. (The process of the first few volumes was a bit dull, and I will let myself go next. Of course, I still can't be brainless.)

(One of the reasons for speeding up the plot is that it has already been a million words. Another core of this article, miracle, has no news, and Ubemo has two ways. If I really write slowly, the length will be too long. I feel like vomiting blood.)

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This volume has a lot of space for many characters, such as Desuosi, Ourabo, Tamaya and others. It seems cumbersome to describe too many characters in this way.

So, in Chapter 294, Desuosi's neighbor, the girl Soinna, did not choose to continue describing it. The dialogue has been released. Let you think about their story yourself.

There is another character, the old man Lake who said that he could make a deal with the devil, his daughter Vezina and the seven rabbits Solawa. This part was also chosen not to be written, after all, it is an insignificant character. (Whisper, if I really want to write, the following will be about their awesome background, such as involving Rhinesos, but writing too much will make it messy, and I am afraid that I can't control it in the end, so forget it.)

Another character, Tamaya, is a somewhat contradictory character, which is described later, but because of the crystal slipper, she made a choice.

I am thinking that instead of writing all the stories, it is better to only write part of it and let you imagine the rest. But, I have some obsessive-compulsive disorder in this regard, and I always feel that you can't understand the stories behind, such as the unicorn and Mages.

I have been nagging over and over again through... For example, Ubermo's psychological description to let you understand the stories behind - similar to the Nine-Colored Deer.

That seems too stiff sometimes.

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In fact, there is another thing that I am not very satisfied with these two volumes - the time arrangement, in summary, is like a diary, without too much time jump.

For example, today, tomorrow, the day after tomorrow, one day after another.

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The other is the incident of the Tower of Melis, which I always feel is a bit sudden and not handled well.

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In short, it is a bit unsatisfactory, but I think it is written by me after all, so I still have to praise it. I will write more freely in the future and try to write in a cool way. (After all, the tone of this book is to imitate the mystery, and many frameworks are fixed for me. So... let's practice writing first!)