Lord of the Mysteries

Hey, if I write the Tarot Club directly at the beginning of the next part, and write that everyone is holding the meeting normally under the gaze of Mr. Fool, but the "world" German Sparo seems to be wearing a monocle, And Mr. Fool ’s posture is more leisurely than usual, his body is slightly tilted, his right elbow is holding the armrest, and he pinches his right eye from time to time ... Will this be drowned by the thrown blade?

Hehe, jokingly, no matter how dramatic the turn has to be in accordance with the Basic Law, no, the basic logic, given the groundwork and clues in the front, I can write as much as I want, and you can rest assured.

In the fifth part, I have already summarized the main problems before, that is, for a long time, Xiaoke is confused and lacks sufficient endogenous motivation, which leads to the gradual decline of the plot tension. After all, it is not the beginning. At this stage, you can follow Xiaoke's little knowledge of this novel world, and there are other things to cultivate and maintain interest. By the middle and late period of a book, everyone must still want to see the development and advancement of the plot, and it must be The kind that can make people look forward to.

However, when I first made this part of the structure, I considered that this change should not be too abrupt, after all, after the impact of the end of the fourth part, Xiaoke must take a lot of time to digest and accept, it takes a lot of Pave the way to slowly find new motivation, you see, the tension of the next episode is now completely unnecessary to worry about.

While writing Xiaoke, I also had to take into account other roles, describing their growth, their obsession, and their internal conflicts, so the rhythm was further slowed down, like a squid, waving his own Many tentacles, from the beginning to control simple two or three lines to the manipulation of seven or eight dozen story lines and character lines, are really getting more and more difficult, and it cannot affect the story structure of this one. It was bulky and staggered.

Unfortunately, for this reason, the plot of some characters can only be suppressed temporarily, and the structure of the story will not be unbalanced.

In addition to the problems summarized above, two more points are now mentioned. One is that the upgrade was completed after almost two hundred chapters. In terms of story structure, it is too slow, but in terms of actual progress, it is too fast. This result seems reasonable, but I still feel that it is too compact. Xiaoke digests promotion for a year or two is more gentle. It should be noted later that this is a problem in the overall story arrangement, and there is not much space for jumping the timeline.

It ’s too fast, and it ’s too slow, I do n’t know if I have summarized it before, anyway, I do n’t remember it well, then say it again, for many authors, the main role of the upgrade is to provide refreshment, I ’m not Exception, but I have other understandings of upgrading, this is my tool and scale to grasp the rhythm of the plot.

Why is this possible? My understanding is the word "change". The story of a stage has been maintained for a long time. Everyone will yearn for the addition of new things. They want something different and do not want to be static. "It is very soft, and it is not just a change in the environment, but also the change of the protagonist itself, from the inside to the outside, both inside and outside.

Therefore, novels that do not directly contain upgrade elements are not impossible to write, but must have a "change" node. In a sense, this is an internalized, softened upgrade, just like some romance novels, men and women The feelings of the protagonist can also be regarded as an upgrade, from less to more, plus retrogression, division, and reconciliation.

The second point to say is that many of the plots in Part Five are gradually getting rid of the extraordinary people at the low and middle levels, and out of the social environment. This is a necessity brought about by the improvement of Xiaoke ’s strength, personality, and level of participation. I hope to find a solution to the problem, because once there is no environment and no sense of reality, the entire story will have no root, and only the drama conflicts will remain, which is why my previous novels developed faster and later, um, martial arts Except, it is because the repetitiveness is too great, and the "change" brought about by the upgrade to the plot is too small.

One of the original intentions of the sequence system and acting method that I came up with was to use the acting method to let the high-ranking people who are out of society re-enter the world, give them life, and return the world to reality.

This point, because of the main tone of the issue, there are some manifestations, but not too much, I hope to strengthen it in the future.

Returning to Part 5, the theme of "Red Priest" is to represent war. There are not many positive descriptions, but throughout the whole text, it is the bright line of the plot. At the same time, the experience in this environment shows the feeling of drowning and struggle. One, Xiaoke is one, those who are struggling to support in front of the torrent of the times are.

I have repeatedly emphasized drowning in order not to mention the last ten chapters, and to create such an atmosphere and feeling through the story itself. I believe that everyone can appreciate it. After seeing Talis saying that, she fell to the mausoleum. When Amon put on a monocle in front of Xiaoke, the feeling of the struggling man finally sinking into the water came out.

The corresponding character image is erected.

Because of the need for such an atmosphere, there are not many drama transitions in this encounter. In my opinion, being attacked by the enemy, being attacked by the enemy, and then being attacked by the enemy may be better than trying to struggle, trying to break through, but cannot find Step by step, the direction is grey and depressed.

But because of the problems summarized above, since the fifth part, the ordering has been falling, and it occasionally rebounds a little, but the trend has not changed, and it has fallen by almost 10,000, so I said that it is necessary to ask that one because It solves the problems of endogenous motivation and plot tension. It is a little harder, but it works very well and has achieved immediate results. Since then, it has stabilized and recovered, and recently reached its peak state. The average price is now 80,000. 9.

The sixth part is called "light chaser", sequence 2 from the "sun" path. In the ancient times, it was called "sun chaser". The specific meaning is literal, but it symbolizes many individuals and many things.

This one is very important to me personally. It is the most important part of the overall story structure. It is the preliminary completion of the world structure and the opening of the situation. It is also the key to the formation of the plot impact. I have friends before Ask me if the mystery is past the peak of the story and it is at the end. I said no, the peak I expected was in the sixth episode.

A little embarrassed, I don't know if I can write it well.

Well, for the next three books, the chapters of each of them must not reach two hundred chapters. I do n’t know how many of them. They may be in their early one hundred, one hundred and forty-five, or less than one. Hundreds, this is mainly because before writing the sixth part, I can not predict how much can be written in the seventh and eighth.

I am a squid with no outline and no outline, only the key points of the plot, the climax picture, the general development, the main structure, so I have to take a long test for nearly an hour before writing each chapter, and sometimes more, Well, it doesn't mean that there is no outline and no detailed outline. It is in my head and is dynamically updated every day. Before, a friend asked me to read the outline, and found out what the ghost thing is. Except for the world setting, character setting, power setting, and historical chronology, the outline is often just a decoration, which is basically not written according to ==

Well, it's time for the much-anticipated link again. The fifth part is over and I have a rest for three and a half days. This time, I have to get a more detailed outline of the sixth part. Otherwise, it ’s more difficult to do it in my brain. It needs to be considered too much.

Well, half a day counts from noon on Saturday, and the last chapter is changed in advance, that is to say, rest on Saturday and half a day, Sunday, Monday and Tuesday, Wednesday and resume at 12.30 noon.

Also, at the beginning of the month, do n’t forget to buy the end-of-month pass and write me the motivation for Part VI ~

I will offer the first change in November monthly ticket at the critical moment of the plot!

Ask for a monthly pass Ask for a monthly pass, say the important thing three times ~