Lost Narrative Poetry

"To actually do something like this while a girl is sleeping... It's really disrespectful."

Looking at the photos taken by the mobile phone in his hand, Yukinoshita said calmly and pressed the delete button. She didn't seem to be angry, but it was just so plain that it was scary.

In fact, you could have said it more clearly. This kind of statement is a bit misleading... Although he thought so, Xia Ran, who knew that he was in the wrong, sat upright, not squinting, and had no intention of arguing out loud. .

What else can be said? After all, he was caught while preparing to take screenshots... Destiny turned out to be such a terrible thing. He just wanted to grab Destiny's throat, but Destiny in turn beat his head off.

"Classmate Xia Ran, don't you have anything to say?"

Yukinoshita looked at the silent client. Although the voice was calm, it sounded as clear as ice and exuded an overly sharp aura.

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Hikigaya Hachiman and Yuigahama Yui were sitting on the other side. They seemed to have developed a great interest in the novel manuscript in their hands at the same time. They were immersed in reading and studying hard, not listening to what was going on outside the window.

Without even raising their heads, they clearly expressed that they and others wanted to stay out of the incident.

"Um... Yukinoshita, aren't you angry?" After Xia Ran thought for a while, he asked the question that he was most concerned about at the moment with a little caution.

"I'm not angry." Yukinoshita said calmly.

Ah, as expected, it was this sentence. Xia Ran had heard it countless times, and it was said by all kinds of people. The only thing they have in common is that they are both angry.

Just like the sentence "I won't be angry if you tell the truth", anyone who believes it is an idiot.

Of course Xia Ran is not an idiot, but now he is willing to believe this statement and is busy preparing to promote this established matter: "That's great, Yukinoshita-san, thank you for being so..."

"Hey! Is it 110..."

"Please stop! Don't call the police-!!"

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The farce didn't last long before it was interrupted.

Because someone knocked on the door of the activity room rudely, attracting everyone's attention, and then Zaimokuza Yoshiki walked in from the outside in a hurry.

To be honest, after yesterday's blow, he actually dared to come to ask for death today, which actually made Xia Rangao look at him. Coupled with the fact that the other party's time was stuck in such a standard door-to-door visit, his crisis was resolved very well.

So Xia Ran felt that maybe she needed to reciprocate the favor and try her best to talk about the advantages of the other person's novel later. After all, after everyone else gave him severe criticism that could lead to death, he had to consider Zaimokuza Yoshiki's ability to bear it and give him a hope of survival, right?

He thought as he stared at the burly boy who moved a chair and sat in front of everyone.

"Then, let me hear your thoughts——"

At this time, Zaimokuza Yoshiki sat down on the chair, causing the chair to make a painful creaking sound. He crossed his hands on his chest unconsciously, with a face full of confidence and a sense of superiority that came from nowhere.

Wait, is this guy a fish? Do you only have seven seconds of memory? Did you forget yesterday’s painful experience so quickly? !

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Hikigaya Hachiman and Yuigahama Yui looked at each other in disbelief. They couldn't figure out whether this guy's mental endurance was very strong, reaching the level of trembling, or whether there was something wrong with their memory.

"Eh? Wait, classmate Xia Ran, why are you looking at me with such sympathetic eyes, as if you were looking at a corpse..."

Zaimokuza Yoshiki also felt that something was wrong, and subconsciously looked in the direction of the source of the strange feeling. As a result, he happened to see a certain devil classmate looking at him with a look of sympathy and pity.

He never knew that not only would such emotional gazes not make people feel at ease subconsciously, but it could actually make people's hair stand on end and make them stand on end!

——The only difference lies in whose gaze it is.

Thinking of what happened yesterday, Zaimokuza Yoshiki's heart suddenly trembled, and he quickly said: "By the way, please don't be too harsh, classmate Xia Ran... otherwise, I will really die!"

"Don't worry, I will try my best to pick out the advantages of your novel..." Xia Ran said with a serious and reliable expression, "But you'd better be mentally prepared. After all, there are still three judges, especially Yukinoshita, she I will kill you with words..."

"...Xia Ran, you are absolutely sure that I will forgive you today, right?" Yukinoshita Yukino glared at him and interrupted him rudely.

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"Ahem, since Yukinoshita you are so considerate, that's great." The young man once again resumed his posture of sitting upright and looking straight ahead, just like a debtor who always behaves naturally when facing his creditor. It's like he's a bit weaker, as long as he's not an old guy.

The same is true for him. When he did bad things, he was caught by the person who happened to be on the spot and got the stolen goods. Now it is naturally impossible for him to act more righteously than the other person.

Yukinoshita snorted slightly and ignored him. Instead, she unconsciously turned over the brand new copy in her hand, seeming to be thinking about something.

Speaking of which, both parties had a tacit understanding today and did not talk about the phone call last night, as if that incident had never happened at all. There might have been some unavoidable awkwardness during the meeting, but it was completely eliminated because of Xia Ran's attempt to forcefully collect the CG.

She was a little confused as to whether this guy did this on purpose, but out of her keen intuition, she felt that it was probably like this.

"That... Yukinoshita-san?" Zaimokuza Yoshiki asked tentatively, not knowing whether to believe what Xia Ran just said.

Taking a gentle breath, the girl quickly gathered her thoughts and raised her eyes to look at Zaimokuza Yoshiki in front of her who was being judged by everyone:

"I'm sorry, I'm not familiar with this type of work... Strictly speaking, I've only read one person's work before. It's not a complete light novel, but more like a story like a game script."

As she said this, she turned her head and glanced at someone beside her.

That script really left a deep impression on her, but apart from the sidelines that were not in line with the core values ​​of a harmonious society, the meaning it contained was really profound.

The girl also admitted that the heavy criticism and shocking impact made her a little curious about the related ACG field. Although it was only a little curious, she still had not taken the initiative to learn about various light novels and novels on the market. Anime or something.

But it did make her subconsciously feel that maybe this type of works are of this type with profound meaning and profound connotation.

What she didn't expect was that... Zaimokuza Yoshiteru's novel was very successful in disappointing her. It was really a mistake to stay up late to read it. Although she decided to stay up late not for this reason, it was just that she couldn't sleep last night.

"Hahahahaha... It doesn't matter, I just want to listen to the opinions of the world, you can just say it." Zaimokuza Yoshiki seemed to be relieved all of a sudden, laughed pretending to be heroic, and then said this.

And he seemed to be relieved in his heart, as if the difficulty suddenly dropped a lot.

If you have never seen this type of subject matter, you must not have been influenced by too many works, and your vision and taste may not be so picky? It's like an old bookworm dislikes this and that, and doesn't like anything, but a person who has just started reading novels finds even the novels very exciting.

This is indeed the truth, and theoretically it is indeed possible for the plot to unfold like this.

However……

"Then let me tell you straight. It's very boring to read, even painful. This work is disappointing beyond imagination." The girl closed the copy in her hand and killed the person with a single sentence.

Zaimuzhao was severely injured in an instant, his face turned pale, his whole body leaned back greatly, and the chair made a "click-click" sound.

This is not over yet. Yukinoshita is a very serious and direct person. Now that he has made up his mind to speak, naturally he will not brush it off like this. Instead, he lists out reasons one after another very seriously to explain his feelings. .

From grammatical pronunciation to plot development, Zaimokuza Yoshiki is criticized for being useless.

The latter was so shocked that he subconsciously looked to the people next to him for help, with tears still in his eyes.

then--

"I, I think... you, you know a lot of difficult vocabulary." by Yuigahama Yui.

"The illustrations are the main point anyway, so don't worry too much about the story." by Hikigaya Hachiman.

A minute later, Zaimokuza Yoshiki lay on the ground with his back stretched out, his eyes turned white and looking at the ceiling... He felt that he was going to die, and now there was only one person left who could save his life, which was like a candle in the wind.

Under the gaze of everyone, Xia Ran thought about it very seriously, picked out the advantages of the novel as much as possible, organized the words and said carefully:

"It's very royal to use the last paragraph to confess. It's also in line with industry rules. It gives an open ending. In this way, even if the first volume is cut in half, it won't be said to be a bad ending... Hmm , Zaimuzhao did a pretty good job at this point.”

"puff--!!"

"Didn't you say that you would try your best to pick out the good points? Why did you have to give him a fatal blow?" Yukinoshita looked at him in surprise as he was brutally finishing the attack, and asked the question in confusion.

"But... I have tried my best to find the advantages. In other aspects, it is really..." Xia Ran looked at Zaimuzuo's body in surprise. This surprise did not seem to be fake, he really felt that he Try to tactfully state the advantages and praise them.

"That's right...that's true..."

While listening to his explanation, Yukinoshita let her eyes wander back and forth between the copy in her hand and Zaimokuza's body not far away, and then nodded in understanding.

Even she had to admit that it was difficult to pick out the merits of Zaimokuza Yoshiki's works and praise them... beyond imagination.

"Um... something like mochi slipped out of this person's mouth. Is it really okay?"