Lu Mingfei, the Martial Saint of the Dragon Clan

This volume is over.

The structure is different from the first volume. There is no long foreshadowing. This volume is basically written in one line.

It's a pity that I didn't write a summary in the previous volume, but I want to write a good summary in this volume.

In retrospect, it was probably divided into two parts, one was Lu Mingfei in Kassel, and the other was the trial of the Iron Throne.

Since I'm a fan, I probably won't give the orange hair knife in the original work.

Old Tang is not dead. It should have been clicked at the end of this volume. This is also the drawback of serialization. It is impossible to pursue perfection.

And now that I have written almost one million words, I gradually realized that the storytelling of online articles is far more important than the writing style and visual sense. There should be another one million words, about four to five volumes, Looks like, hope to make some progress.

Talk about your feelings about this volume.

There seems to be no reason given in the original book why the twins must devour each other. In order to gain stronger power to deal with unknown crises, this is my understanding, but this is a colleague, and everyone who can read this should also read it. After it came out, I changed a lot.

A pit was also dug in the dialogue between Lu Mingfei and Constantine, which will probably be used in the fourth or fifth volume.

Let’s talk about this volume next.

What I am more satisfied with are a few fights. Xia Mao has rarely written about fights in such detail before. To be honest, I don’t even know how to write them, so I had to write down the title of Lu Mingfei’s fight against Luo Nu, one by one. Reporting the moves and describing the scene, I was prepared to be scolded, but I didn't expect the feedback to be quite good.

To the cat's surprise.

Later, Lu Mingfei was very satisfied with the battle against Bronze Subject. Thanks to the Chinese teacher in the middle school, he finally didn't give back all the classical Chinese he had learned.

As I write this, I suddenly think of the book Guanwen Guanzhi that I bought with great interest. I have a dream that Xia Mao will definitely become a great writer in the future, but I haven’t finished the last ancient article.

As lazy as I am.

Hhh.

There are many problems with this volume. The most annoying thing is that there is no detailed outline. I probably decided on the beginning and ending before starting to write the second volume, and then determined a few key nodes. Everything else depends on the writing of the day. state.

This writing mode has made me suffer a lot, and I will definitely not be able to do this in the next volume.

But the amazing thing is that I can still remember many of the plots vividly when I look back now, and it doesn’t look as bad as I imagined.

The main stage of the next volume will be in Kassel, and I am still hesitating whether to place Natsumi in the third or fourth volume.

But Eri Yi will definitely be in the third volume, that is, she will appear next.

Thinking about it, it actually went by very quickly. Xia Mi, the eight Sheqi families, the fierce ghosts, and the Arctic all passed one by one, and it was almost the end.

By the way, I think Lu Mingfei, who practices martial arts, is super handsome, hhh.

Finally, no more updates today, volume 3, "My Girl" will start tomorrow.

It seems that the names of these three volumes are: Your Name, The King's Trial, and My Girl.

Please forgive the persistence of a late-stage obsessive-compulsive disorder, hhh.

my girl.

"Brother, have you seen McDull?"

"This is fate."

"You told me this thing is also called a dragon!"

"Remember, brother, I promised you on the night we first met."

"Actually, I was just casually... Well, you guy, thanks."

"Are you going to kiss me? No, don't try to lie to me. This is a vulgar plot. Do you think I'm a pervert for secretly kissing a sleeping girl?"

"Okay... okay, I'll try."

"Can't you talk? It's really rare for a girl to carry a notebook with her. She's just like someone from an anime."

"Let me see what's written..."

"It's our first time meeting you. Hello, my name is Eri Uesugi. Please give me your advice."

"Isn't this just saying your real name? Originally you could just call yourself a little monster, but now there's nothing you can do about it."

The young man scratched his head in distress and sighed.

He said to the red-haired girl in miko uniform.

"You can call me Lu Mingfei."

"Please give me more advice."