(Sorry everyone, because it has not been modified, so there is still no change, first post, and then added later, because after release, it cannot be deleted, it can only be modified, so you don't have to be afraid of my account.)
In addition, report the content of today's changes.
Today's main revision chapter is the content of the first ten chapters, which are revised, but they can't be connected in series, so wait until the whole text is revised and then send them together.
The modification is mainly in terms of system functions, but also in terms of the protagonist's abilities.
The protagonist's ability is modified, naturally it is still twelve charm abilities, now the article is that the charms are slowly unsealed one by one, and after the modification, the power of the spells is activated at the beginning, but it is very weak, and the system rewards become upgrade points, which can increase the level of the spell, improve the strength, and increase the power of the spell.
As for why it was modified, because I read the article and found that many charms seemed to be useless after they were unsealed, and when writing some battle scenes, they were modified because the spells were not all unsealed.
The second modification is the system function
, the original text: it is to complete the task to get the reward, and the task will be released when the appropriate target is met.
After modification: As long as the protagonist and the love object, such as Gwen, Carla, Diana, etc., intimate interaction, such as holding hands, hugging, touching the head, etc., can generate system currency, and then can exchange various props from the system, which can also be regarded as the most common function of system people.
In addition, the task system is retained and becomes a random release task.
Modify the reason, looked at their previous content, found that has been using tasks to promote the plot, so that it seems that the protagonist seems to be being led by the system, in addition, sometimes want to improve the strength of the protagonist, it is also very troublesome, to find a suitable reason, release a suitable task, and then let the protagonist complete, so that more love daily plots will be written, resulting in very few battle plots, before asking some readers, everyone feels that they should reduce daily life and increase fighting, so they modified.
In addition, the battle plot of Lizard and Gwen has been optimized, and the battle plot between the protagonist and Gwen has been increased and optimized.
Increase the description of the protagonist's ability to display the spell lest it seem that there are spells and not.
OK, this is today's revision, it is not released at present, and when the full text is revised, it will be released together.
In addition, if you have any opinions, you can also mention them, and if I see what is appropriate, I will revise them together.
Thank you all for your support)
At this time, located on a tall building in the city, Lynn and Gwen are watching the two green giants fighting fiercely below.
It was the Hulk Hulk and Abomination.
"See, this battle is not for you to participate in, you go in, only to die in vain."
Lynn said to Gwen without turning her head back.
The one who fell from the military plane before was Dr. Banner, the "human body" of the Hulk Hulk.
Fortunately, at the last moment when he fell to the ground, he successfully transformed into the Hulk.
If he was really thrown to death, it is estimated that he would be the most humiliated Hulk in the multiverse, and he would be directly disgraced.
At the moment of Hulk's appearance, Abomination, which had originally recovered a trace of sanity, was once again covered by negative emotions, and the same was true of the Hulk Hulk.
Between the two, it is like "a sharp point to a wheat, and it is about to be triggered".
At this time, the battle between the two did not have any skills, nor any dodging, only a fierce battle from fist to flesh.
You punch me, you punch you, you smash me, I knock you off.
In an instant, many buildings in the area where the two fought were reduced to ruins.
Fortunately, when Lynn and Gwen fought before, the police had moved out of the residents, and the abomination had been controlled in one area, and the casualties were not very large.
You must know that in the original work, because there is no control of other superheroes, only the military, its bullets and shells are simply abhorrent, so that it ran into the crowd, with at least a large number of casualties.
This is not the case with the plot line of this world, because with the addition of Spider-Woman Gwen and his joining, the world has entered a different trajectory.
Seeing that Gwen had not replied, Lynn couldn't help but turn to look.
I saw that Gwen was sitting on the edge of the rooftop at this time, bending forward, supporting his legs with his hands, holding his little face, and his two little feet were swinging in the air, not knowing what he was thinking.
Seeing her like this, Lynn seemed to think that she had just hit her by speaking, and comforted.
"Uh..., how to say, at least you have just saved many people and saved many families from the destruction of their families, which is still very admirable."
It seemed that hearing Lynn's praise made Gwen very happy, and at this time she tilted her head slightly, looked at Lynn, and asked.
"Really, then I'm not a qualified superhero."
Hearing Gwen's slightly delighted, but somewhat nervous, inquiry.
Although Lynn wanted to give him a little encouragement, thinking of what she did today, for the sake of the future, she could only be ruthless and criticized.
"What do you think? Combat experience is completely unqualified, only relying on the instinct of their own ability to fight, against ordinary people, but against extraordinary people, let alone the same level, even if the ability is weaker than you, with combat experience can defeat you. In
fact, Gwen is not so unbearable, but in order to avoid encountering such things in the future, he can only say the worst.
It would be best if it could dispel her fantasy of being a superhero.
Just to see the Hulk and Hulk battle below reach its peak, Lynn also used this as an example.
"Take the following two big men who are fighting fiercely, their strength in this world, are not top-notch, and they have similar strength, not even a few, right, just want to be like this, a palm wind, directly extinguish the flame of a burning fighter, can you deal with it."
As for firing, according to previous intelligence, this Spider-Woman does not seem to have the ability to defend against bullets, but in the firefight just now, this monster has.
If you fire at this time, not only will it not cause damage to the monster, but it will also anger him and hinder the Spider-Woman.
After thinking for a moment, Officer George figured it out and ordered.
"Don't fire yet, but let everyone get ready, wait for this spider......... Uh......, only when Spider-Woman was defeated, did she open fire.
Although he had already chanted this name more than once, every time he chanted, George was still slightly embarrassed and felt a little ashamed.
I don't know what kind of quirks these extraordinary people are, all of them take some inexplicable names.
George couldn't help but think in his heart that he was a serious person, obviously unable to understand these superheroes, and slightly had a fetish for middle two.
"Yes."
Hearing George's orders, the officer immediately left and told the other officers around him to tell him to go.
After the police left, Officer George wanted to continue watching the situation on the field, but suddenly the whole person was stunned in place.
Without him, many other police officers around him at this time were looking around with a guarded face.
"Who, who are you, what is the purpose."
Officer George shouted as he looked around warily.
"Don't worry, I have no malice, just a reminder, there will be a big war here soon, if you don't want your police officers to suffer casualties, order them to retreat."
At this time it was far from Officer George
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