Mecha Star Wars

My dears, it's time to pay salaries again!

I made 338.74 last month. Of which, subscriptions alone accounted for 306.89, breaking the 300 mark. Applause! Papapapapa...

In addition, the group channel accounted for 30.34. This should be the support from Xiaoxiang's treasure. mua

Last month, the Queen of the Dead appeared, Ivana. Lin Fan's temperament changed drastically because he was eroded by evil resentment. Brennan knew their alien identities and learned about the deeper background of the Protoss from Miaoge. The Eagle is the son of the Emperor of Heaven. King Mingguang is not dead. His son Evans and Garcia of the Ghost Blade Clan sneaked into the imperial capital with the remains and Irene, and met Lin Fan and others in the old house of King Mingguang. The two sides had a restrained conflict, but were defeated by the people of Noah. Lin Fan finally met Irene, but Irene was unwilling to leave. They split into two groups. Lin Fan found the World Tree and was trying to unlock the world barrier to eliminate the restrictions on civilization machinery. The consciousness of King Mingguang tried to stop him. Evans and others also arrived, but were blocked by the barrier of Yinze and could not enter. When the eagle was about to drag King Mingguang's body out of the world tree, the emperor appeared out of thin air and cut off his wings...

Wow~ Do you think my description of the plot above is clearer than ever before? I was surprised by myself. I could never write these before.

Or it was because on the evening of the 1st, at the request of the editor, I wrote a 2,000-word text outline for the new book. Today, I gave it to her for review by the editor-in-chief. Whether the new book can be signed depends on this time.

So, what you have done will leave traces, and growth is inevitable. It's just whether the result is what you want.

Let's not talk about this for now, let's talk about mecha.

I thought this world would end in October. Well, it's still a little bit short. It should be over in at most half a month... It should be...

I went back to take a look. It's exactly two and a half months, making up for the short gap of the previous planet. Hahaha, not bad.

I won’t spoil the plot of the mecha, because you can’t guess where it’s going anyway, hahaha.

The reason why I got such a high salary this month is that in addition to the usual support from all of you, I also got one boutique recommendation and two smart recommendations. Sure enough, recommendations bring popularity, maybe it’s because they saw that I wrote so many words to encourage me. I hope there will be recommendations every month in the future, hahaha.

Whenever a new baby appears, in addition to bringing me money, they will also give me a lot of lovely comments and encouragement.

This time is no exception. After praising me, they also pointed out my shortcomings, especially the lack of female characters.

This is indeed because of the early structure and my own lack of ability, so in the previous story, women other than the protagonist are not prominent.

On the one hand, it is indeed considering the background of mecha. With the current level of technology, the participation of women in mecha is generally not as high as that of men. I don’t mean to deny the ability of women, otherwise I wouldn’t write that the female protagonist is the most powerful, right? Refer to astronauts, they are all so powerful, but women are still a minority, right? This has to do with physiological characteristics and individual qualities. This is an objective fact, please don't criticize me.

My article is relatively realistic, so there is no plot that forcefully suppresses gender, although it may seem cool, all women are strong.

But I think, what is strong? Is it strong to stand at the starting point at birth and easily kill everything with a flick of the finger? Or is it strong to climb out of the quagmire, overcome various difficulties little by little and climb to the top? Is it strong to be an invincible master, kill everyone you see, come up as a commander, kill decisively, cool and domineering, kill gods when you meet gods, kill all things you don't like, and know at a glance that there will be no suspense at all? Or is it strong to have various weaknesses, make progress in defects, and gradually grow into a towering tree?

Maybe everyone has their own answer, right?

When I started writing this article, I didn't want to write a traditional strong female article. I wanted to write a story about an ordinary woman who struggled in hardship, suddenly encountered opportunities and changes, and became reborn and stronger little by little. The tags say healing and slow heat, haha, this still fits now.

This process of becoming stronger is a bit slow, of course, it has something to do with my poor control of the rhythm. But I still think that after a person gets a huge ability, can he immediately have the corresponding psychological and control ability? Can most people accept overnight wealth? So in the Earth part, I have been building Lin Fan's inner world. Her world was originally barren, but with the help of various friends, it gradually became solid, so that she could survive various unexpected crises in the interstellar.

I also know that you want to see the heroine's heroic and heroic figure, killing all around, but I still have to say sorry, this must be with the plot. Although my Lin Fan has changed his temperament now, there are still problems with the eroded character. He is decisive, but there will be many problems later, which will be specifically reflected on the next planet.

It will be better to integrate it later. What I want to express is that human growth, whether physical or mental, takes time. Sudden changes may look good, but they will bring unexpected consequences.

Growth is a long process. Just like me, I have been writing and trying to change, but I have been crawling in the same place... It is not easy to change...

I have gone off topic, let's talk about female characters.

In fact, in the early days, I also established many female characters, such as the neighbor aunt at the beginning, Grandma Pei, and of course, the most annoying mother Lin, right? Everyone doesn't like them, right? But because they have nothing to do with mecha, everyone subconsciously ignores them.

There is also Sister Xu, the first person I met when I entered the Special Affairs Office, the ghost catcher, Doctor Xue of 800, Jiang You, an excellent exoskeleton mecha pilot, Wu Yi, the nurse who took the Noah later, Shi Miao, Li Chunhua's wife, Xiaoyu, their problem child, Sun Mo, the grocery store owner, including the female clown, and Mi Jiao who appeared later...

In fact, I created a lot of female characters. Of course, most of them only appear in non-combat life, and there is no conflict with mechas, so maybe because of this, they are ignored by everyone, just like the women who are always ignored in our daily lives.

I originally planned to write about Sister Xu, but the editor said that this is a mecha article and can't write about the supernatural, so I still gave her a role later to make up for my own regret.

Jiang You is already an excellent mecha pilot. She could have applied to drive a mecha, but because of her sense of responsibility, she stuck to her exoskeleton camp. I think this is also a noble virtue. And at that time, there were enough people in the protagonist group, and adding someone in the middle of the road would not make much sense.

As the only female boss in the Special Affairs Office, I also spent a lot of time describing Mi Jiao. I didn't write about Director Zhu Cunjun's abilities in detail, I just talked about him as a leader, right? She has a battle plot, but no mecha.

The last biological mecha actually only has Lin Fan and Antonio, these two are natural, and Song Ren who was rescued the day after tomorrow. Lanxing has already formed a mecha corps, so there will definitely be a lot of female pilots in the later stage, but at this time, we all flew out, so this part was not written...

In short, it may be a problem of my concept. I don't think that fighting in the battlefield is strong. It is certainly a strong performance to crush men in strength, but women have more beautiful qualities, such as tenacity, self-reliance, responsibility, tolerance, etc., which are all easily overlooked and precious qualities that are dispensable.

Including now, many opinions are to suppress men and step on men to show the strength of women. But I also think that using men to highlight women, and having to pull down men to show the strength of women, is it not actually emphasizing the indispensability of men's status?

Women can't be strong, she is strong, and it has nothing to do with any man. Men don't even come close to her. When she stands there, others know she's strong? Just like the ugly woman. Just like Nuwa. Just like the current Lin Fan who has taken shape.

I don't fight. The men and women in my articles all have their own problems. Their excellence or lack thereof is not shown by comparison or exaggeration by others.

The above views are purely personal opinions. If you don't like them, please don't criticize me. If you really want to criticize me, please do it gently.

Of course, this is a mecha article...

So I'm back to the beginning again. I named it wrong! Alas!

So in terms of mecha battles, there are indeed more male characters. The reason has been mentioned above. This is indeed the case.

The past cannot be pursued. Later, depending on the different situations in each world, the frequency of male and female characters will be different. In highly civilized societies, the difference in status between men and women is not that great, and the status of women is naturally equal. There are also low-civilized societies, like this one now, where women are not treated as human beings. Of course, there are also Annie Demon planets that don't treat people as humans, they are all animals...

If I can write smoothly to the end, there will be a planet with advanced mechas. By then, whether it is fighting or fighting, there will be more female characters than now. I counted on my fingers... Can I finish it next year?

In short, this is the situation with female characters. By the way, a spoiler, the little nurse Wu Yi and the chef Guan Ying who appeared before will appear on the next planet.     I said that I have difficulty naming, right? So as long as the character has a name, there will be a role. This is not because of Baozi's urging, I have already arranged it. It's just that it is relatively late, because the first few planets are not suitable for people to come down. Did you notice that there are only a few people who come out in total, so it is normal that no women appear.

Well, that's it, I hope Baozi will be satisfied with my explanation.

I'm done talking about mechas, let's talk about the new article.

Oh my god, one chapter has been written... Forget it, let's talk about it, I've been holding it back for a long time.

The new article is about realistic female emotions. I actually had the inspiration last year, but I didn't want to start writing because I was tired of writing here. Although one chapter a day is not much, it is also very tiring to write every day without interruption. My dears can also see my plot. It is not the kind of routine writing. I am bald from thinking about it. Now my hair is pulled out, but it is not as thick as the water from my faucet. Crying

Why did I suddenly want to write? I forgot. Anyway, one day at the end of July, I suddenly had a seizure. Then there was a writing contest. The first prize was 100,000 yuan. I was probably short of money and obsessed with money. I wanted to spend a few months to try it out. What if the bicycle turned into a motorcycle?

Then I started writing the outline on August 1st. I started writing after three days of rough outline. But something happened later, which caused me to stop writing. I wanted to continue on September 1st, but was delayed by the sudden hat design order. I spent a long time on the hat design. I had to catch up with the order meeting in October. I still wanted to make money. But this hat seemed to have sunk, alas...

So I really started writing on the 19th. I originally planned to write for three months, fearing that it would not be successful, and I also wanted to ensure that I could sign the contract and keep my full attendance for three months. After writing for three months, there would only be two more months to finish, so there would be no pressure to update, and it would be easy.

So from the end of September to October, I was really busy and worked hard. I used to complain about writing 2,000 words a day, but since October, I started writing 10,000 words a day. I had to write two new chapters, fill in the two missing chapters, and update one more chapter. But I had to take a break for two or three days because of something. So in order to rest at the end of the month, I increased the pressure in the last week. I wrote more than 20,000 words on two days and went to bed at 1 o'clock in the morning at the latest. I finally got two days off on the 30th and 31st.

I really have never worked so hard. In fact, after I finished writing the outline and started writing, I felt that it was unlikely to win the award, so I just wanted to get a full attendance award and earn 4,500 hard-earned money. I never thought that I might not even be able to sign a contract.

After I sent out the mecha article, when it was 20,000 or 30,000 words, the editor contacted me to sign a contract. Later, it was successfully put on the shelves. Although the performance was not good, I can be regarded as a contracted author.

I have been writing for two years now. I think the subject matter, structure, rhythm and writing style of my new work are much better than those of Mecha. I never expected that I would not be able to sign a contract.

I overestimated myself.

Now the work is more than half done, 400,000, and I will definitely continue to write. I have put so much effort into it. Although I thought, forget it, no money, no money... but I am still a little confused these two days. By the way, I would like to advertise my new book "Walking from the Heart". I hope you like it.

I have thought about it these two days. I may not be suitable for writing, or not suitable for commercial creation, writing for the purpose of making money.

In fact, I know what is popular in the market, but I just want to write what I want to write. I probably just want to express and share, and I am not suitable for this as a career to support myself.

Well, okay, when the editor goes to work, I will send the outline over, and I can only hope for a good result. I have made mental preparations. The passion for the new work is actually not that high, but now my mind is full of the plot of the new work, and I will write it well whether the result is good or not. I have to finish it soon, because writing two books at the same time is very divisive. On one hand, I am scheming and fighting, and on the other hand, I am cheating and divorcing Xiao Tiantian. Last month, I thought I was going crazy.

Double-updating is not something a human can do.

I probably won't write any more after writing these two articles, or I won't write for the purpose of making money. It's too tiring. Of course, it's my own ability.

Okay, don't say discouraging words, maybe there will be a good result today? It's sunny today. Haha

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I would like to thank Yuan Yuanyuan for your generous reward, and thank you for your warm comments.

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Most of them are familiar treasures, and there are also new treasures. Oh, thank you for your support. Bow, kiss.

Today's summary is so long that it can be equivalent to two chapters. But I am happiest when chatting. I am happiest on this day of every month because I get paid and I can chat with you. I feel that my mood is better for no reason.

Okay, I will continue today's work after a break. Everyone is busy, right? The weather is cold, so you should pay attention to adding clothes, take care of your body, and don't catch a cold.

Love you.

Chen Xiaokun

Morning on November 4, 2024