Millions Of Viewers Are Crying Watching My Anime

At about 11:30 in the evening, Makoto Takagi returned home and just said "I'm back", and then heard Esaka Noe say: "President, the last words of "Charlotte" were scolded badly."

"Oh."

Takagi Makoto responded calmly.

After changing his shoes, he walked towards Esaka Noe on the sofa in the living room and sat down next to Esaka Noe.

"Look at it." Esaka Noe took the tablet computer in his hand to Takagi Makoto and let Makoto Takagi see it for himself.

Takagi Makoto took the tablet and looked at it silently.

"The front is fine, what is this in the last sentence?"

"I knew it must be incomplete, but it was too rushed."

"It's unfinished, alas, I still like it so much before."

"I should only see the twelfth episode. No, it's fine to see the tenth episode. After reading the last three episodes, I feel really blind."

"Trash Xuyuan is accurate, Trash Xinhaixuan!"

"Before many people said that Xu Yuanzhun and Xin Haixuan are the old thief Takagi, but now they are not at all. These two guys are far behind the old thief Takagi, and the old thief Gaomu can't make such an animation of the hips."

"I thought the content of the animation was enough to be melancholic. I didn't expect the animation itself to be even more melancholic. I really regret watching this animation."

A good group of people expressed dissatisfaction on the Internet, and the original statement that "Xu Yuanzhun, Xin Haigen and Hiroyuki Yokoyama are the old thief Takagi" was also denied.

The eleventh and twelfth words were originally not a big problem, but after the last words came out, the problems of those two words were also magnified.

Some people even said "AngelBeat! "The script of the animation itself is not very good, but the animation is relatively small in structure, and the main character's group activities are basically the school in the afterlife world and some surrounding areas, and there are no foreign enemies, so it is not so. It is easy for people to see where the problem lies.

Although some of these bad reviews are full of malice, most of them are justified. In addition, they are psychologically prepared, so Takagi Makoto didn't take it seriously.

Even, there was a bad comment that made his eyes shine: "Recommended by the old thief Takagi. The first ten words are really good. After reading the last three words, I regret it now. I regret it very much. I knew it would be like this. I It's better to go back and do the animations that Old Thief Takagi once did a few more times."

"Very good, what I want is such an effect." Takagi Makoto murmured secretly.

Of course, Takagi Makoto doesn't just look at these bad reviews, he also reads other reviews.

Unsurprisingly, although there are a lot of bad reviews, there are also many people who give good reviews:

"I'm crying. I robbed the world's abilities according to the agreement, but forgot the people I liked, oooooo~"

"Kicking the vocabulary book, regret it in less than a second, crying while protecting the vocabulary book. I can't remember the person I like, but I still use the vocabulary book as my own amulet, which is very touching."

"It doesn't matter what others say, I really like this animation anyway."

"From the first chapter to the twelfth chapter, even if the heroine is bullied by the girls in the school and isolated by her classmates, her heart does not fluctuate. After being confessed, she does not have the slightest reaction that a normal girl should have, but found that the hero obeyed It was promised to complete the almost impossible thing, but when I came back, I forgot her. At this moment, she cried. I didn’t know what was going on and I cried.”

"To be honest, although many people complained, I was touched by the last words, and there was also a touch of shock. The hero is just an ordinary person, with many ordinary people's flaws and problems. It may be early to change to an ordinary person. He has lost himself and wants to be the god of the new world, but he has always been able to stick to the bottom line, which is really amazing."

"Yes, really good."

"I don't know why so many people complain, I think it's pretty good-looking."

With mixed reputations, this is the general situation of the animation "Charlotte".

After checking the relevant comments, Takagi Makoto returned the tablet to Esaka Noe, got up and said, "I'm going to take a bath."

"Hey, President, don't you say anything?" Esaka Noe asked quickly.

Takagi thought slightly, and responded: "Do you want to make up a class? Well, after all, it's still your birthday. If you want to make up a class now, I'm not incapable of satisfying you."

On March 31, Esaka Noe’s birthday. As Esaka Noe’s boyfriend, Makoto Takagi remembered it well, and he said "Happy Birthday" to Esaka Noe at midnight last night and returned it to Esaka Noe. Hui bought a small cake and birthday present.

As for making up lessons, of course Esaka Noe can make up as much as he wants.

Esaka Noe is no longer the original innocent girl. She understood the meaning of Takagi Makoto's words all at once.

She shook her head repeatedly: "I didn't mean that."

"Oh."

Takagi Makoto looked slightly disappointed, and quickly said, "It seems that there is indeed one more thing. I plan to invite Xiaozi to come to our house for a meal tomorrow. Are you against it?"

"Of course not against it, after all, she has been a great help for us all the time..." Esaka Noe responded, and quickly shook her head, "No, I mean, so many bad reviews, is it okay?"

"Well, it doesn't matter, I expected it before I did it, and bad reviews have the benefit of bad reviews."

"So, you did this ending on purpose?"

"Well...I can't say deliberately, anyway, there are various reasons."

"???"

"Anyway, it's not a bad thing. Just remember this."

"Okay... okay."

No more Esaka said.

However, after Makoto Takagi went to the bathroom, she used her tablet to register a few trumpets to give praise to the animation "Charlotte".

Although she can't change anything with her strength alone, it would be nice to have more praises.

...

The next day, Sunday.

Esaka Noe stayed at home, and Takagi Makoto naturally did not go to the company.

On the one hand, H.A., who finished "Charlotte", was given a short vacation for a few days, so I don’t have to go to H.A. for a few days. On the other hand, Azusa Ikeda is coming over, of course, he has to stay at home.

At ten o'clock in the morning, the doorbell rang.

Takagi Makoto opened the door.

"Brother Cheng."

Ikeda Azusa wears a white short sleeve with a print, and the lower body is a black short skirt and a pair of sandals. Although light makeup is on, it still gives people a very refreshing feeling.

She carried a bag of things in her hand, which looked like fruit.

"I'm here, I actually brought things." Takagi Makoto took the bag of things, and then said jokingly: "Remember to bring more next time."

"Fruit is expensive." Ikeda murmured as he entered the house.

"I know it's expensive, so I asked you to bring more."

"Then what if it's a cheap thing?"

"Very cheap things, then you won't use them next time."

"..."

Ikeda Azusa was speechless, but she also knew that Makoto Takagi was joking, so she didn't take it seriously.

At this moment, Esaka Noe poked his head out of the kitchen and took a look. After seeing Azusa Ikeda, he said quickly, "Xiao Azusa, welcome."

"Sister-in-law, excuse me." Ikeda Azusa said, going into the kitchen to help with cooking.

However, Esaka Noe refused.

On the one hand, Azusa Ikeda is a guest, and it is not easy to ask the guests to help. On the other hand, preparing meals for three people, not many people, is nothing to Esaka Noe.

Moreover, Esaka Noe also wanted Azusa Ikeda to eat meals purely made by her.

Ikeda Azusa did not insist.

She sat down on the sofa in the living room and chatted with Makoto Takagi while watching TV, and then naturally chatted about the animation "Charlotte".

"Brother Cheng, I think many people on the Internet are scolding you, expressing dissatisfaction with the ending...Did you deliberately?"

"How to say?"

"At your level, I think I should be able to write a better script, so I won't write such an ending."

"It's hard to say."

"Isn't it on purpose?"

"..."

Takagi shook his head slightly without explaining.

With a thought, he glanced at Ikeda Azusa and asked, "Xiao Azusa, you should have finished watching the animation. If you want to change it now, how do you think you can change this script to the point where the audience is satisfied?"

"Let me change?" Ikeda Azusa frowned, and began to think silently.

After a while she said: "First of all, I think the content of the last sentence has to be removed. Although it is very touching, the existence of this sentence destroys the overall structure of the story."

"Then what?"

"Then comes the eleventh episode. Although the last episode has been complained the most, the plot has collapsed since the eleventh episode."

"It makes sense."

"If it were for me to write, I would treat the villains in episode 11 as the final boss. Of course, we have to start with the first few episodes. Chapter 10 saves my sister, and then the boss in episode 11 comes out, Xiong Er And the heroine was arrested. In the twelfth chapter, the hero and brother went to save people, just to find that the second man and the second woman who were arrested by the heroine were also there..."

"Yes, it should be."

"In the thirteenth chapter, a group of people showed their magical powers and experienced a great battle. They successfully defeated the villain and rescued the heroine and Xiong'er. Then, in this process, it is best that something can happen to make the heroine fall in love with the hero. In the end, the two people got together smoothly and became lovers, but to be honest, I couldn't think of what the male lead could do to make the female lead like him. This is a big difficulty."

“It’s a bit difficult, but, in fact, it’s not necessary to be a lover. It’s enough to let the heroine have a good impression of the male lead, and leave the rest blank to give the audience room for imagination. As for how to make the female lead like the male lead, This is actually not that difficult. As long as the male protagonist shows a very powerful and handsome side and comes to a hero to save the beauty, it will probably produce a certain degree of goodwill."

"What, Brother Cheng, don't you still know how to write it? It was deliberate, right? I deliberately wrote the last three words like this, but...I don't understand why you did it."

Ikeda Azusa was puzzled, and quickly said: “As long as the details can be handled well, I think it’s okay to write in my way, but there is one problem. After all, it’s not only the adolescents on the neon side. Superpowers, but people in adolescence all over the world may have superpowers. Even if the villain in Chapter 11 is defeated, the story will not be complete..."

After a pause, she asked: "How can this problem be solved?"

"This is actually not difficult to solve. Tell everyone that this animation has a second season, or that it will be released after a while." Takagi Makoto replied.

In fact, on this issue, Puella Magi Madoka Magica is similar to Charlotte.

In "Magic Circle", there are more than just the place where the protagonist is, there are magical girls, and there are enemies that need to be solved. Other places also have magical girls and enemies. However, the "Magic Circle" did not change the map at the last episode, but gave out a rumor. , Tell the story of magical girls and enemies in other places.

The last three episodes, do as Ikeda Azusa said. For worldview issues, learn from "Magic Circle" or tell everyone that there is a second season, let everyone wait slowly, this is the correct opening of the last three episodes of "Charlotte" Way.

However, even if the general direction can be determined, it is a question of whether the details can be well controlled.

And even if the details can be controlled, the reputation of "Charlotte" should not be bad. Although the sales volume will definitely increase, it is not necessarily a good thing that Takagi cannot make a comeback.

Therefore, it would be nice to have a mixed ending like this now, so that there is room for manipulation.

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