My Online Dating Partner Is a Celebrity
Chapter 4: Narrative plot
Seeing Zhang Yun gradually walking away, Lin Xinyao had a thought that she couldn't believe she herself.
Z is a screenwriter. He is writing a third-rate internet drama. Just now, the heroine was not satisfied with the plot of the kiss scene and asked to change the script...
This seems to be easy to put on yourself!
No, it can't be such a coincidence, how can there be such a coincidence.
Lin Xinyao shook her head, trying to get rid of this absurd idea.
But...however you think it is very possible!
How to do? Why don't you try it out?
Lin Xinyao was vacillating, and finally sent a message: That heroine is such a big name, you're not writing a script for a popular star, are you?
As soon as the news came out, Lin Xinyao focused on Zhang Yun, who was about to disappear from sight.
I don't know if I am looking forward to it or not, when he sees Zhang Yun taking out his mobile phone while walking, Lin Xinyao's heartbeat speeds up.
"Ding Dong!"
The message was replied instantly.
Z: There is no such thing as a third-rate internet drama, but our heroine is the daughter of the boss of Hua Yao! Great!
The daughter of the boss of Huayao, my dad is the only daughter of me!
Isn't that me!
At this time, there is no need to guess, Lin Xinyao immediately confirmed it!
The man who talked to her for a month is really the screenwriter of "Star Way", Zhang Yun!
But, how could he know that my father is Lin Guangyao?
Immediately, new doubts flooded Lin Xinyao's mind, and she had a bad premonition.
Only two sleeps in three days: "Impossible, how could the daughter of the boss of Huayao make a third-rate internet drama?"
Z: "Our director said that her dad would not let her act, let her make a third-rate internet drama, and naturally gave up filming if she didn't have much success. You said, the investment of 3 million is just to make her daughter give up acting, rich people We really don’t understand her life..."
"Patter!"
With a clear sound, the phone fell to the ground.
But Lin Xinyao, who knew all this, was sluggish in place.
...
"Your girlfriend?"
Liu Mingyang saw Zhang Yun happily replying to the news, and couldn't help joking.
Zhang Yun smiled and shook his head, and said, "It's just a netizen."
"It's quite fashionable. I am engaged in online dating." Liu Mingyang winked, "Are there any pictures of the other party? Does she look good? What does she do for work?"
"No, we are just chatting, and we haven't developed further." Zhang Yun said helplessly.
Liu Mingyang immediately put on an expression of "You treat me as an idiot": "You seem to treat me as a fool."
"Really, just talk casually, I'm a serious person." Zhang Yun said affirmatively.
"Well, good, decent man." Liu Mingyang didn't want to say more when he saw Zhang Yun, and he didn't force it. "Let's talk, what do you want to eat?"
"I can do it." Zhang Yun said indifferently, "I'm more curious, you suddenly want to invite me to dinner, why do you intend to?"
"Then eat barbecue, how about three thousand miles in the moonlight?" Liu Mingyang did not answer Zhang Yun's question.
Zhang Yun curled his lips: "I'm still 5,000 years old, and I can cook a few whole dishes."
"Shen special is a day for five thousand years!" Liu Mingyang laughed at Zhang Yun's complaints, "I remember you are from the Northeast? That's fine, I'll treat you to a Northeastern dish today!"
——
Northeastern Restaurant.
Speaking of Northeastern cuisine, it seems that in addition to Baobao Rou is Baobao Rou. But in fact, there are many more delicious things in the Northeast than Baobao Rou.
For example, blood sausage, dipped in soy sauce with minced garlic, is very tender.
For example, sauerkraut boiled meat, the meat is big flesh, sauerkraut is Northeast sauerkraut. The sauerkraut in the Northeast is different from other places. The sauerkraut in the Laotan Sauerkraut Beef Noodle is the sauerkraut from the south. The sauerkraut in the Northeast is actually made from pickled Chinese cabbage.
For example, meat slices, fatty intestines, snow-covered bean paste, etc., are all delicious.
Therefore, facing a table of authentic Northeastern cuisine, Zhang Yun has already moved his index finger.
"Come on, make a toast to the fate of us two!" Liu Mingyang poured a glass of Luzhou Laojiao and clinked with Zhang Yun.
Zhang Yun took a sip and asked Liu Mingyang to toast by himself.
"Heh~~ha!" Liu Mingyang naturally did not toast, took a sip, hoarsely.
"I still don't understand, why did you invite me to dinner suddenly, Director Liu." Zhang Yun sandwiched a piece of meat and asked as he ate, "You don't have any special hobbies, do you?"
"Fuck off, my child is one year old and has a special hobby of farts!" Liu Mingyang glared at Zhang Yun and said, "Didn't I say that, I want to discuss the plot later with you."
"There's nothing to discuss, I almost think about it, and I will make it up for you when I go back. Don't worry, it won't delay the progress of tomorrow's shooting." Zhang Yun said.
"Hey, the lines will be ready by the time, I am not worried about this." Liu Mingyang looked at Zhang Yun, "I am worried about the future development of the plot. Tell me, how do you plan to change it?"
Zhang Yun said: "Since the kiss scene is gone, many of the subsequent plots are also useless. For example, the blackening of the female second has lost the original motivation. In this way, although my workload has increased, it is It gave me a chance to reform."
"What opportunity?" Liu Mingyang asked.
"When I wrote before, I didn’t have much experience, but during this time I also learned a lot. It seems that I suddenly opened the Ren Du Ermai. Looking at the previous scripts, I feel that the writing is really rubbish. Our "Star Way" The script of "I am watching now, the plot arrangement is really unsightly."
Liu Mingyang smiled: "You know too."
"I know for sure. It's a pity that I can't change it after the previous filming, but from today's scene, I plan to make a big change." Zhang Yun briefly described the trend of the plot he was going to write next.
In the plot, it was naturally arranged after the scene of determining the relationship between the male and female main elevators after the accident. The original plot was that the male and female protagonist accidentally kissed in front of the media. In public opinion, the two expressed their intentions to formally announce the official announcement, and the second female protagonist who liked the male protagonist became blackened.
But because Lin Xinyao changed the kiss scene, this story can no longer be used.
But it also happens that the original plot is really bad, and now let Zhang Yun rearrange it, and he can play freely.
The original plot is very simple, the second female loves the male lead, so she is jealous of the female lead and starts to stumble upon the female lead.
And now, Zhang Yun changed the motive of the black female lead from liking the male lead to being jealous of the female lead.
The plot of this episode becomes: After the male and female protagonist has determined the relationship, the male protagonist wins the female protagonist's status as the third female in his play (the production of this play is quite large). Just as the heroine was preparing to audition, another crew sent an invitation, inviting the heroine to audition for the female lead.
Between the female number three and the female number one, the heroine chose the female number one. Coincidentally, the second girl also received an invitation for this play. So the two met together.
The heroine originally wanted to compete fairly with the second female second, but the second female second played tricks and made some ulterior deals with the deputy director to let the deputy director release her during the audition.
However, what the second girl did not expect was that the director, who did not intend to participate in the audition, suddenly appeared in the sight glass that day and caught the heroine with a glance.
As soon as the female failed to become a female, the assistant director could only arrange a small role for the female second. When the heroine is surrounded by everyone and everyone is watching, the second woman looks at the heroine and feels that she has paid so much, but not as much as the heroine, and thus becomes hateful because of jealousy.
Later, the second woman accidentally discovered the relationship between the male lead and the female lead, and deliberately sold the news to the paparazzi, regardless of how the male lead she liked would be hit by the incident.
The love affair between the male and female protagonist was exposed, causing a great uproar. The male protagonist's movie was forced to stop filming, and the female protagonist was also besieged by the male protagonist's fans for "the pheasant wants to be a phoenix".
At this moment of crisis, the male protagonist stepped forward and recorded a video with the female protagonist, telling the heroine's efforts. Fans and passers-by actually recognized the heroine after understanding it.
This romance crisis not only turned the crisis into peace, but also allowed the heroine to gain more attention.
At the same time, because of that unspoken rule, the second female can never look back...
Probably this is the way of thinking. In the finale, it was to fight the sub-directors who engaged in unspoken rules. The second woman stood up to report and disappeared. Those who engaged in unspoken rules were brought to justice. The male and female protagonists lived sweetly. together.
To be honest, these plots are not very new, but based on the development of the first half of the plot, it can only be pulled to this extent.
However, it is much better than what the original owner wrote.
The female number two written by the original owner was purely used as a tool. The second female loves the male lead, but the male lead never looked at her with a straight eye; the second female lead messes up no matter what she does and shoots, but the female lead can solve the problem immediately when the female lead appears. The hostess learns from the teacher, and the second female learns from the security guard at the door.
The focus of the plot in the second half of the original host’s arrangement was originally put in the hostess’s house, where he did not agree, and the host tried to seek approval, but the host’s mother did not agree, and the host tried to seek approval.
That is to say, from the star road inexplicably turned into a pure Mary Su, in the end the heroine made a scene with great success, and it ended in a scribbled way.
Xingtu eventually became Aitu, which was quite outrageous.
Now the plot written by Zhang Yun can only be considered a pass, but in the end he still pays attention to the word "Xingtu", and also shows the diligent and hard-working character of the heroine.
The most important thing is to enrich the image of the second female.
The heroine and the second female are good friends. They entered the company at the same time, debuted at the same time, and at the same starting line, but they ran out of two completely different paths.
When writing scripts, many screenwriters are willing to arrange such a female/male second. This person does not exist to steal a wife or husband from the protagonist, but to compare it with the protagonist.
In the same environment, two people with different pros and cons can be produced. This approach can more easily plump the character image of the protagonist, reflect the glory of the protagonist’s human nature, and can also fully present the plot that should not be presented in the protagonist. (In fact, it is used to write the dark side).
If you give an example, "Secret and Great", which has been on fire this time around, is a good example.
Zhang Yun feels that the plots he currently writes and the plots to be written later can only be regarded as average, and there is still a certain gap in comparison with those masterpieces that can be famous in history.
But after listening to Zhang Yun's narration, Liu Mingyang didn't say a word for a long time.
"What's the matter, Director Liu, is this plot not good?" Zhang Yun saw Liu Mingyang's silence, and thought that his plot was not good.
Liu Mingyang shook his head and didn't speak. Instead, he took a sip of white wine and sighed for a long time. He asked in a daze, "Do you know what I did before?"
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