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"Fuck! Fuck, fuck!"

At six o'clock in the morning the next morning, Liu Mingyang looked at Zhang Yun's revised script and the outline at the back, shouting a few times in a row.

No way, I was so surprised that I have lost my language ability.

The script written by Zhang Yun before was a thick shit, but the changed script was completely magnificent.

To describe it with the title of a light novel, it is probably: "The new screenwriter who thought to be a rookie unexpectedly turned out to be a master"!

"Alright?" Zhang Yun looked at Liu Mingyang's surprised face, and to be honest, he was quite proud.

This is the pride of my work being recognized, even if it is an old screenwriter, I can't help it.

"It's okay, it's too special!" Liu Mingyang hugged Zhang Yun, excitedly, "I knew that the wine yesterday was not for nothing!"

Zhang Yun smiled slightly, pretending to be a master.

I told Liu Mingyang about the plot yesterday, and Liu Mingyang was so exaggerated that Zhang Yun felt it was a pity for him to be a director.

"Xiao Zhang, if we take photos of this drama later like this, there will definitely be a half of the masterpiece!" Liu Mingyang patted Zhang Yun on the shoulder very excitedly.

At this moment, he had already begun to imagine that after the show was broadcast, he would be seen by insiders, and he began to enter the big screen and embark on the pinnacle of his life.

Then Zhang Yun was mercilessly attacked: "Can you pay me a couple of minutes after the trial? Don't put this half of the work."

"Look forward to it, look forward to it." Liu Mingyang smirked, and quickly published the script so that the protagonists could become familiar with the lines as soon as possible.

"Oh, I was slow to recite the lines originally, but now the play has been changed, it's too embarrassing for me." Wei Yu looked at the script in his hand with a bitter expression on his face.

"It's okay, you just count if you can't memorize it. Anyway, we have dubbing later." Although Liu Mingyang was a director for the first time, he still had some understanding of Xiao Xianrou's business level, so he directly suggested.

In fact, even if Wei Yu reads the lines, he has to be dubbed later.

His original sound is not good.

"Okay, then I will try my best." Maybe the only advantage of Wei Yu is that the traffic is not high, so there is no arrogance.

Encouraging Wei Yu, Liu Mingyang looked back at Lin Xinyao, and asked a little nervously, "Teacher Lin, can you see if there is anything you want to change?"

He couldn't help but be nervous, if Lin Xinyao had another request, this half of the work would be ruined.

In Liu Mingyang's hopeful eyes, Lin Xinyao simply flipped through the script and nodded.

Liu Mingyang breathed a sigh of relief.

...

The previous script and the latter script really don't seem to be written by one person.

After filming a scene, Lin Xinyao returned to her seat and looked at the script, feeling very weird.

In the past month or so, Lin Xinyao’s scripts, especially the lines, always had a sense of shame.

Although she just made her debut, Lin Xinyao is a professional performer after all. She understands that the main reason she feels ashamed is that the lines written by the screenwriter are not grounded.

That is, they don’t speak like normal people.

Usually when people talk, there are very few modal particles. No one would say "Why are you like this" or "It's so weird" when talking.

If someone really talks like that, it would be really weird.

This is probably the case with the script lines written by Zhang Yun before. Although Lin Xinyao didn't follow her lines when she read the lines, she felt strange.

But it's completely different now. Everything has changed since the kiss scene was changed yesterday.

The structure of the script and the trend of the plot have been changed a lot. The second woman has added many scenes out of thin air. The focus of the plot is not on the rough love between the hero and the hero, but the "star road" that truly focuses on the heroine and the second woman. Through the differences between the two "Star Way" shows the positive energy of the protagonist.

In addition to the plot, the following script has changed a lot, as well as the lines.

Clean and neat, there is almost no nonsense.

Whether it is a screenwriter or an author, newcomers always like to use a lot of words to describe a certain scene or plot in detail. Especially for screenwriters, what new screenwriters are most willing to do is to explain everything clearly in lines—after all, they can only use lines to describe everything—to ensure that the audience can more clearly understand the plot and intentions.

This leads to a lot of useless nonsense in the meeting lines.

For example, in a TV series, because the room has cockroaches, the heroine asks the hero to help catch cockroaches. When the camera reaches the instant noodles, the dialogue between the male and female lead is:

Male lead: "Did you eat instant noodles?"

The hostess was surprised: "How do you know?"

Male lead: "You must throw away the instant noodles you have eaten, otherwise it will lead to cockroaches."

Of these three lines, two lines are useless.

First of all, let’s say that the camera has given instant noodles, so the host should omit "Did you eat instant noodles" and directly say to the hostess, "You must throw away the instant noodles you have eaten."

Because the instant noodles lens has already told us that the heroine eats instant noodles, the hero does not have to do it again.

However, even if the camera does not give instant noodles, the lines should not be like this.

The male protagonist can naturally ask "Did you eat instant noodles", but the female protagonist should never say "how do you know" with a surprised expression.

In real life, shouldn't everyone nod and say "um"?

In the same way, the one thing the villain is most willing to say in many film and television works is "how do you know", as if his plan and conspiracy are so seamless.

Although artistic interpretation needs this kind of dramatic effect, superfluous theatrical effect can seem awkward.

In the previous script lines, Zhang Yun committed a similar problem, but in the current script, all such problems are gone!

It's not like what a new screenwriter can write, it's clearly the product of an old screenwriter who is rich in actual combat!

"Yesterday I said that I wanted to change my script a little bit better. How could this be better? It's so much better." Lin Xinyao said to herself, "Since I can write the script so well, why didn't I write it before? Did his dream really improve his screenwriting skills?"

"Ms. Lin, what are you talking about?" Seeing Lin Xinyao muttering to herself while holding the script, the assistant who stood aside asked curiously.

"Nothing." Lin Xinyao recovered and smiled.

Suddenly there was an idea.

Why don't you ask Zhang Yun in person?

Lin Xinyao rolled her eyes, her thoughts turned into words: "Ker, you ask Teacher Zhang to come over, I want to ask him some questions on the script."

"Okay." The little assistant named Kerr agreed and immediately called Zhang Yun over.

"Teacher Lin, do you have any questions on the script?" Zhang Yun was puzzled and came to Lin Xinyao.

Before the filming today, Liu Mingyang had already confirmed the script with Lin Xinyao, and she agreed. There was another problem at this time, and Zhang Yun would inevitably feel a little confused.

Is this going to be changed again?

Zhang Yun secretly guessed.

If you change the game, just change it. It's just a matter of increasing your workload, so you just need to add more money.

Zhang Yun didn't care, but he was staring at Liu Mingyang here, so scared that he forgot to drink the water.

Is there really anyone in this world who is studying in a dream? How hard is that?

Lin Xinyao looked at Zhang Yun, recalling what she had talked with Z before.

Z once said that he had a long dream. In the dream, he was a screenwriter who had struggled for more than ten years. Although he was not top-notch, he was still famous. However, after returning to reality, he became a newcomer screenwriter, writing scripts for third-level dramas.

The reality is really cruel.

"I read the script, it's pretty good." Lin Xinyao thought, and said to Zhang Yun, "but I'm more curious, why is there such a big gap between the script you wrote before and the one you write now?"

Oh, eldest lady, you can even see the difference before and after the script.

Zhang Yun raised his eyebrows and casually made up a reason: "I haven't found the trick before, but after studying, I suddenly realized the trick."

Learn the trick through learning? I think it's through dreaming, right?

"Really through learning?" Lin Xinyao asked with a smile.

"Well, just studying, what's the problem?" Zhang Yun said strangely.

"It's nothing, I thought you were a genius screenwriter, and suddenly you became awakened, or you woke up after a night of sleep and a dream." Lin Xinyao said.

I did say that with only two sleeps in three days, but the reason can also be said on the Internet.

Zhang Yun couldn't help thinking.

Seeing Zhang Yun's silence, Lin Xinyao was secretly overjoyed. She thought that her pretending words had just poke the truth hidden by Zhang Yun.

"What's wrong? You didn't really wake up after a dream, did you?" Lin Xinyao asked.

"No, no, I'm just thinking about how I should thank you." Zhang Yun took back the distracting thoughts and said.

"Oh? Why thank me?"

"Because you gave me the opportunity to change the script. When I really know how to write the script, the script has been handed in and officially started shooting. If it weren't for Teacher Lin's temporary change, I really wouldn't have a chance to make up for my fault." Zhang Yun Dao.

"So, I changed the play or did you fulfill you?" Lin Xinyao said with some joy.

"Of course." Zhang Yun said with a smile.

Lin Xinyao nodded in satisfaction, and took the opportunity to look at Zhang Yun's face seriously for the first time.

Compared with the popular traffic stars, Zhang Yun's face is not handsome, because the faces of the traffic people follow Han Fan, which is softer, and Zhang Yun's face is not at all soft.

But this is not to say that Zhang Yun is not handsome, on the contrary, he has a masculine handsomeness, which we generally call a "tough guy"!

Unexpectedly, Z, who chats with me every day, looks quite handsome...

Lin Xinyao didn't even notice it, a smile appeared on the corner of her mouth and a flush of flush appeared on her face.

"Ms. Lin? What's wrong with you...?" Zhang Yun looked at Lin Xinyao, smiling and blushing, asking strangely.

Lin Xinyao's appearance is like a little girl who thinks and springs.

I remember Teacher Lin is twenty-seven, how can you still look like a child who has never been in love?

Zhang Yun couldn't help thinking.

"Huh?" Lin Xinyao was yelled by Zhang Yun, woke up, and quickly said, "I'm fine, I'm fine, you can go back and take care of you."

"Then if there are any questions on the script, you call me again?"

"All right."

Zhang Yun left without thinking. And watching Zhang Yun walk away, Lin Xinyao was stunned, and suddenly realized that she seemed to be a little gagged just now.

She quickly took out her mobile phone and looked at her face. As expected, her face flushed.

What a shame! What am I blushing in front of him, like a guilty conscience!

Lin Xinyao blamed herself and thought with shame.

"Ding Dong!"

At this time, the phone rang.

Z: "Tell you one thing, but I am so funny. Just now I was talking about the script with the eldest lady of our crew, and she blushed, just like Sichun. I know I'm handsome, but also She's not handsome enough to let the eldest lady fall over. I heard that the eldest lady is twenty-seven. How come you look like a little girl who has never been in a relationship?"

Looking at this message, Lin Xinyao's shameful eyes suddenly became fierce.

What's wrong with my blushing? Where do you see me thinking and springing up? Even if you think, spring, so what! Twenty-seven I haven't talked about love, what's wrong with you!

Zhang Yun!

I'm furious!

Lin Xinyao, who was immersed in the friendly conversation with Zhang Yun, was defeated on the spot by this message. The shyness that seemed to be pierced by someone's heart, lit her fire in an instant.

She didn't care about Zhang Yun because she didn't know that she only slept twice in three days, so she made trouble with her!

Anyway, she became angry from embarrassment!