My Practice Routine With My Confused Female Apprentice

This chapter written in the front is the author's thoughts and disturbances, please be careful

A newcomer's new book has finally written a million words, which feels amazing. It's like climbing a steep and high mountain. When you stand at the foot of the mountain and look at it, you will feel afraid and then shrink back, but you muster up your courage to take a step forward, take a step up the mountain, take one step and take another step, walk and walk, Suddenly, I realized that I had climbed so high and so high. It's that wonderful feeling.

How did this book start? An idea popped into my mind, it must be very interesting to write a story about falling in love in the world of cultivating immortals. Let the cultivators who moved mountains and filled the seas and changed their lives by heaven-defying talk about an ordinary and ordinary love, ordinary cultivators talk about ordinary love, and ordinary survival in the world of cultivating immortals. Then I wrote a beginning and showed it to the editor in charge. The editor said that I had a sense of expectation, so I started writing.

So this book has an idea first, and then slowly adds something to this idea. Ordinary relationships between men and women are not interesting. You have to add some taboos and ethics. It can be brothers and sisters, but it is not necessary. Masters and apprentices are obviously more interesting. ;The hero and heroine can be casual and plain, but not tasteful enough. You must have what you should have in Immortal World, you must have geniuses, you must have mediocrity, you must have the classic Sect competition, you must have the law of the dark jungle, and you must have the dangerous killing and seizing treasures Yes, the male and female protagonists can be quiet for a long time, but there must be major events in the world of cultivating immortals; the male and female protagonists mainly interact with each other, so there are mature and stable black-bellied masters and carefree genius fools.

That's right, it's just like this while writing and adding. If you think it's interesting, you can add it to the book, and if you think it can be added, you can add it. In the end it was written like this.

Most of the plots were enjoyed by everyone, but there were still some plots that made everyone uncomfortable. Especially the section about casting swords. It is roughly estimated that the plot made this book lose one-third of its readers. Here are some thoughts about those that are not there.

In the section of casting swords, there is something to say, and there is nothing to say. What I have nothing to say is that when I looked back at the plot myself, I also felt that the Virgin Mary was a bit rough and the plot was a bit rough. What can be said is, or I can make excuses. One is that when I first wrote this book, I never thought that many people would read it. I thought it would be read by only one friend and one or two new friends. , I didn't expect more than ten people to see this book, so it was written quite casually. Write whatever you find interesting, regardless of whether the plot is reasonable or not. A loli snake in the second grade is interesting, so don't kill it, the protagonist will kill it, but the author said, no, you don't want to kill it. Camping, interesting, let the brother-in-law come to see the misunderstanding, interesting, then don’t think too much, write hard, the protagonist says I am not that kind of person, the author says, no, you are. The heroine yelled "Starlight, flash them", it's funny, the Virgin or something, what is that? The author didn't think much of it.

Another thing that can be said is, (serious expression), this episode is called casting swords, forging the sword in the hand and the sword in the heart for the heroine. The sword in her hand is the sword of her life, a tangible sword; the sword in her heart is an invisible sword for her to learn the way of life in the spiritual world. This is a 15 or 16 years old, pampered young lady. There is a process to turn her into a Sword Qi criss-crossing sword fairy. In other words, what are 15 or 16 years old modern girls doing? In the third year of junior high school and the first year of high school, they are studying. It is not easy for them to kill people with swords.

In addition to this, there are many who call the heroine stupid, like an idiot, and want a male bishop for everything. Regarding this, what I want to say is, if the heroine is scheming, smart, smart, calm enough, and decisive, then what should the heroine do?

There are also those who call the male protagonist sinister and obscene, and who are afraid of heights, so it's a bit...whether it's doggy or steady, it's Li Changshou's meme, while height fear is Song Shuhang's meme. I thought it was fun, so I added it, but readers seriously said it was poisonous, so I don't know what to say. In fact, apart from the obscenity point, which I wrote carefully, the point of fear of heights is purely for fun, and has no effect on the plot at all.

There are also those who scold the male protagonist for licking the dog, and the Virgin Mary female protagonist. There is a place where the comment area is full of this, which makes me feel heartbroken. Starting from the role of Qin Ran, I set up his character. He may never have imagined that he would be scolded and licked like a dog in his life... What I can say is that whether it is this book or my personal experience in life, Never look at what a person does on the surface. Don't listen to what a person says, but look at what he does and what his purpose is. Like Qin Ran, he was kind to Li Shiyin at the beginning, obviously because of impure motives. If, if Li Shiyin does not

It's this kind of naive personality, and I have also hinted at what it would be like if Tian Wenjin worshiped Qin Ran... When Qin Ran killed someone, he never frowned.

There are also some that are replaced by the world view of other worlds... Before the Foundation Establishment, there was Qi Refining, after the Foundation Establishment, there was Lingdong, Bigu, what Indistinguishable Dao, returning to the void, or the status of the pill refining master in the practice world was originally How, what is a qualified sect leader, head, parent, etc., or other.

Of course, in addition to cursing, there are more people who like this book. This surprised me. It is a pleasant surprise and an honor to write something that people like.

Some say the plot logic is good, some say the rhythm is comfortable, some say the story is light and soothing, and some like sweets... In short, you are really kind, and you can always find good points in this story. You really...I cried to death!

In fact, I know that the writing is not good, the writing is immature, and the plot is rough. It is your strong tolerance and excellent reading comprehension ability. I found some highlights and advantages for it, and then read on. I am very touched.

In particular, I read some readers' comments, and I feel that they can be cited as confidantes and teachers. He said that the rhythm of this story is good, it should be flat when it should be dull, and it should be compact when it should be tight; he said that the core of this story is good, and it shows the appearance of ordinary people and ordinary cultivators under the background of the times and natural and man-made disasters; he said that the character creation Well done, there are arrogances fighting for the top, and ordinary cultivators struggling in the practice world; he said he wrote the true mentality of the time traveler; he said he wrote what he should do after time travel, and so on. I have many very good friends.

how to say? I blushed a little. Because I really want to write the things in your comments, but due to poor writing, lack of thought Realm and Life experience, these things are actually not clearly written. In other words, I was just thinking about writing this way, and I was working hard towards it, but I only wrote some hazy things, and your discerning eyes have already seen my little thoughts.

The above are some of the author's answers to the evaluation of this book. In fact, whether it is good or bad, boastful or scolding, I quietly read it. Except for the kind of unreasonable swearing and purely venting emotions, most of the swearing, although I am very upset, actually know that this is the problem of this book. So thanks to them anyway, without them (they, because they probably can't see here) pointing out, I wouldn't know about those problems. It's like I didn't expect that a person like me would write a Madonna and a heroine.

Then, what you need to pay attention to is that this is not a book about fighting monsters and upgrading. It is not about completing the expanded map, and it is not about letting the hero and heroine reach the top of the world. Many friends have said that this is a romance novel. When will the romance end? When the hero and heroine get married. So...you get the idea.

In the end, I am very happy that someone reads this book. I hope you are happy while reading the book, and you are also happy in Life. There is no doubt that I will work hard to make your reading experience positive.

Love you guys! Wishing you an early New Year here! !