My Senior Brother is Too Steady

Damn, there are so many problems with this Fengshen Yanyi.

The more I dissect and analyze, the more I feel that it is not just a matter of fatalism, but something that is distorted relative to today's mainstream thinking.

Many readers may also feel that under the shadow of Fengshen Yanyi, the words that should have been relaxing have become a little breathless.

I have put a lot of effort into the current Fengshen script. For example, I have taken great pains to prevent Nezha from being tragic, but the result is not satisfactory, because the core of Nezha, which was born out of the Fengshen script, is not as appealing as the Demon Boy script. happiness.

I originally thought that my writing skills were not good enough, but looking back, I realized that it was not just my ability, but the core issue of why Fengshenyan cannot be compared with the four famous works.

He has the distortion of human nature caused by feudal Neo-Confucianism, but he has lost the extension of the arc of human nature and his resistance to feudal thought.

I actually don’t want to write the original story nodes of Fengshen, but if several nodes are not connected in series, it will be something else entirely. This is what I hesitate the most.

That is - should we retain respect for the original work of Fengshen Romance while changing the movie into Fengshen?

For example, if Taiyi kills Shi Ji, the image that Taiyi has created before will be destroyed. However, if he does not kill Shi Ji, it is impossible for Taozu to let Taiyi go. From the perspective of rationality and story logic, this is the dark side that Taiyi must reveal. , which is seriously inconsistent with the relaxed writing style we pursue, forming a strong sense of fragmentation, and I can't dig deeper into the character on this basis.

Really, this thing made me sleep poorly for several nights, and my hair fell out in handfuls.

I looked backwards at the subsequent plot. If I followed the script that I had worked hard on for several months, the distortion of the characters would be even stronger.

This kind of creation feels very painful, but I chose this path and can only keep struggling and trying new things.

What is the core of the Fengshen system?

The presupposed justice is the so-called destiny.

This is the beginning of the ideological trend of the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods, which promoted Zhou and demoted Zhou, and things were constantly distorted layer by layer.

It was only yesterday that I gritted my teeth and decided to break the original barriers.

——Those dozen souls who should have died in the Ten Thousand Immortals Formation, but now appeared in the Conferred God Platform.

In the last chapter, Li Changshou closed the door to his heart, which represented another direction.

From now on, Fengshen will no longer have any shadow of the original work. It’s not that I don’t respect the original work of Fengshen Yanyi, it’s just because the original work has too many flaws and not many positive things can be praised by today’s society.

The author Jun really tried his best and was almost driven crazy by Fengshenyan.

My original plan was to start the final chapter from the end of Fengshen, but now, the final chapter, which was originally over 100,000 words, may be longer and focus on the process of transforming Hu into a Buddha to make up for the thickness of the plot, but it will not delay the plot. .

The follow-up Tribulation of the Gods will use three climax plots as a series to dig into some of the more popular characters and avoid introducing more unimportant characters.

The script of Little Nezha lacks tragedy and is not very touching in itself. This is the most troublesome thing, but I must respect the writing style and not write tragedy.

A reader's chapter said that it said, "You have read the author correctly." It really made me almost cry.

In fact, I have always been stuck in a weird thinking circle and wanted to re-edit Fengshen. In fact, the re-editing did not break away from the framework of Fengshen, so now I am in a huge creative dilemma.

Now I think about it, there is no need for the word "re-editing" at all. What I wrote was "Senior Brother", not "Feng Shen Yan Yi".

Learn from experience and lessons, this is also a test on the way to writing, right?

Brother, this book actually not only improves my writing skills, but also improves my grasp of the core of the story. I will summarize it repeatedly and continue to work hard forward.

However, the Fengshen plot has little impact on the overall story. Li Changshou is now in a situation of confrontation with the sky (I can only say that fortunately I added the main plot to the Fengshen script).

The break behind Changshou will be in a way that no one can imagine, if anyone can guess it.

Then I will eat the keyboard on the spot! (Just kidding, just kidding, there are only a dozen possibilities in total)

Let’s continue typing. The next chapter should be late in the morning because no one is fighting for the apartment with me. (no)