My transformed system is poisonous
Final words
The last chapter is finally over. It took a full thirty hours and many deletions, but it was finally published.
I feel a little delirious as I write this.
This ending took a little too long, I'm really sorry.
This book took more than four years to write, and I have managed to get rid of countless book friends, but there are also many book friends who have stayed. In any case, this book will eventually come to an end.
This is the first book in my life that I have finished writing.
I don’t know if you book friends are satisfied with this ending. Personally, I feel it’s quite satisfactory.
Basically, all the holes that should be filled in have been filled in. Although there is a slight deviation from my original outline and it is not beautiful, it should not be a bad ending. Maybe the pace of the later stage was too fast.
Regarding the overall plot, I made a lot of adjustments in order to speed up the progress. Sometimes in the later stages of writing, it is not an easy task to give a happy ending. The larger the frame, the harder it is to finish, and there are some small pits that are easy to forget. , I hope everyone will bear with me.
My coding skills are quite messy, and I especially struggle in unnecessary places. Sometimes I can struggle for half an hour on a line of words that you just glanced at, especially when writing dialogues.
Careful book lovers may find that the later I write the dialogue, the less content I write. Sometimes I will consider whether it is appropriate for this character to say this sentence and whether it is consistent with the personality I have set for her/him. Later, In order to avoid trouble, I can only try to write as little as possible.
Regarding the plot, I have basically filled in all the big holes that can be filled, but as the plot progresses, the emphasis on the characters will naturally change.
First of all, since this book was blocked for more than half a year, when I started writing it again after it was unblocked, I inevitably made a big mistake and missed several characters.
Shi Feng, Lu Yueqing, and other supporting characters, as well as some foreshadowing left before, were taken back by him in just a few dozen chapters, and then the extraterrestrial world was opened.
From the beginning, my outline was that Shi Lan would become the empress first, and then open up the world line outside the territory. Regarding the imperial capital of Zhongtian Territory, there was originally a plot with the four princes, but it was basically cut off later.
The two characters that had the most scenes cut off were actually Wu Lingkong and Emperor Rakshasa. In my original outline, they would account for a very large proportion of the plot in the mid-term.
The character Qing Lan only came out around the 400th chapter because in my original expectations, this character did not exist at all. She was more like a combination of Wu Lingkong and Emperor Rakshasa.
I originally wanted to recommend Wu Lingkong or Emperor Luosha, so that Shi Lan could have someone walking side by side on the road.
But as the plot developed, I found that it was too difficult to find someone who could walk side by side with Shi Lan. No matter who it was, they couldn't keep up with Shi Lan. She walked too fast and forcibly lifted up the others. The forward speed will only make the plot feel fragmented, which is not realistic at all.
In this case, there is only one choice, and that is to accompany yourself.
In fact, Qinglan's cultivation speed is also very exaggerated. In the setting, the cultivation of immortality is slow, and her realm is still rising like a rocket. It is actually unreasonable.
But because she is Shi Lan's clone, it doesn't seem so strange in comparison.
In addition to these, some plots were cut in the later period, such as the technological galaxy where Shi Lan went, and the various worlds.
After Shi Lan entered the Yuanshen Realm, the process of this book began to speed up. In order to save some time, I cut off the transitional content between the two worlds, which is about 200,000 words of plot.
In fact, in the world that Shi Lan was originally supposed to go to in the reincarnation, he would have gone to see the Lord of Suffering, and at the same time, there would be some plot points because of the golden rainbow that was drawn out.
Later, after Shi Lan became a Taoist, a section of content before she entered the tenth level was cut off, so that section seemed very rushed.
There was originally a lot of content about Heaven and some daily routines, but in order to advance the plot as quickly as possible, basically all of it was cut.
I'm not very good at writing daily content, so reading the whole book will make people feel very tired. Shi Lan keeps moving forward and has almost no time to relax.
I want to write as much about daily life as possible in my next book. I still have to study and improve my skills as much as possible.
If it weren't for the lack of quality, this book would be better. I hope the next book will improve.
Of course, after this book is finished, many book friends will leave. At the same time, when the next new book starts, I will also meet many new book friends.
A person will meet many different people in his life, which is unpredictable, but I feel that between the author and the reader, it is always a process of two-way selection. We are looking for people who can resonate with each other.
I am very grateful to you who have accompanied this book all the way to this point. Meeting you... is so hot!
There is a long way to go, we will meet again when we are destined~
In the early morning of May 16, 2023.
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