PS: Because of the previous evaluation of the great god, saying that I have a good idea of writing a book, more than innovative, and the plot and description are passable, but the feelings are insufficient, and the narrative is too rigid… To this end, I also asked this great god to modify the plot of a chapter I wrote earlier for me to compare.

I really don’t know if I don’t see it, I was shocked when I saw it, originally the same plot, but in a different way, I feel that the gap is infinite, and there is no comparison at all…. The difference between the Great God and the new scum is here….

Therefore, in order to make this writing better and let everyone have a better reading experience, I saved the plot that this great god gave me modified, and then I was describing any plot only, I will compare this plot, and I ,,,believe that it will not be long before the madman’s writing skills will be better and better, and the plot written will be more and more exciting, so please continue to support the madman!!!

This chapter is written by the madman with reference to the revised plot of the great god and imitating its style, which can be regarded as a preliminary attempt by the madman, and I hope you like it….

The following text:

“I didn’t expect that the situation in the current Wuyin Village has reached such a critical point, even such a strong character of Meiyu can’t help but ask me for help, it seems…. I really need to go to Wuyin Village! However, before I go to Wuyin Village, I still need to find someone who is”….

Between words, Jun Tianlin’s lazy black pupils gradually exuded a fierceness, his cheeks were full of murderous aura, and the evil smile at the corners of his mouth looked extremely hideous at this moment!

“Bang”

In the next second, only a soft sound was heard, and there was no figure of Jun Tianlin in the room, leaving only the door that was still swinging, indicating the departure of Jun Tianlin…

After a few turns, Jun Tianlin appeared in front of a black gate again, quickly took a step forward, and after knocking on the black gate at random, Jun Tianlin opened his mouth and shouted loudly into the door: “Big brother, open the door quickly, I have something to find you”!

“Crunch”

With a light sound, the black gate was opened, and a young man who was five points similar to Jun Tianlin walked out, the two red jade on his eyebrows, and the white hair, all proved the identity of this person— Kaguya Junmaru!

“Heaven Come, are you looking for me for something?” Seeing his own brother, whom he hadn’t seen for a long time, come to him, Junmaru was also extremely happy in his heart, and a happy smile appeared on his handsome little face without concealment.

“Big brother, you seem to be ruthless, can’t I come to you if I have nothing to do? Both of us: But brothers”! Hearing Jun Mariu’s words, Jun Tianlin also raised his eyebrows a little dissatisfied, and refuted unpleasantly.

“Alayala, that’s what I said, we brothers don’t distinguish each other, so why should we care so much? But ah, I still know a little about your nature, there is nothing important, you will definitely not come to me! Say, this time there is some trouble, I want big brother I will help you solve it?”

Jun Mariu smiled at Jun Tianlin, his eyes flashed slightly, revealing a wise light, and he looked like I had already seen through you, and asked Jun Tianlin unceremoniously.

Seeing Jun Mariu so witty, Jun Tianlin was also embarrassed and smiled: “As you said, big brother, I really have something to find you, but it’s not me who really has something, but your younger brother and sister”!

“Huh? Wait, God’s Come, you just .. What did you just say? Siblings? Good boy, when did you get so fast and take advantage of my slight inattention to hook me. Took a sibling back? Could it be that this happened during the time you went out and went to Konoha?”

At first, Jun Mariu didn’t pay attention to what Jun Tianlin said, and after Jun Mariu reacted, his eyes widened, and he was very surprised to Jun Tianlin, and said with a bad smile.

Hearing that his eldest brother was also a ba mother, Jun Tianlin’s forehead dripped cold sweat, and he hurriedly waved his hand to interrupt Junmaru’s continued desire to find out, and quickly opened his mouth to say the purpose of his coming here

“Big brother, are you paying attention to the wrong point? Now the point is not how I soaked in Meiyu, but I came to you to help, so that I can help Meiyu solve the trouble drop”!

However, Jun Mariu, who had already set up a circle to wait for Jun Tianlin to drill into, after hearing what Jun Tianlin said, the bad smile on his face not only did not converge, but became more serious

“Naninani? It turns out that my brother and sister’s name is Meiyu, gee, this name is really good, it seems that your vision is still quite clever, little brother!

Not bad, this spirit is worth carrying forward, little brother, you have to continue to work hard!

Moreover, my Kaguya clan is only the two of us left now, but the eldest brother and I are not close to women, so the heavy responsibility for my Kaguya family inheritance will all fall on your head, little brother, you have to work hard, bring back a few more younger brothers and sisters to the eldest brother, let me hold my nephew soon!”

“Big brother”!

Hearing Junmaru, the more he said, the more he said, the more revealing he became. Bone, the more he said the fire, Jun Tianlin, who was really a little overwhelmed, had to shout in dissatisfaction, trying to stop Junmaru from tuning himself. Drama Career…

“Okay, okay, I can’t say it anymore”! Feeling that his little brother was really a little angry, Junmaru was also decisively relieved, and did not dare to continue to use words to stimulate Jun Tianlin, otherwise, once Jun Tianlin was really angry, then Junmaru, as the eldest brother, would really not end well.

On the other side, seeing Junmaru give up the heart of ridiculing gossip, he couldn’t help but breathe a sigh of relief in his heart, and couldn’t help but secretly think in his heart: “It is said that the interests of women gossiping and mapo… But now it seems that once this man is up, he is ten times more powerful than a woman!”

Jun Tianlin, who was speechless and complained in his heart, collected his chaotic thoughts, this was a light breath, and said to Jun Mariu with a serious face

“Big brother, when I came this time, I did have something important to come to you, that is, what I just said, it was about my wife Meiyu.

Speaking of this, it has a lot to do with the two of us, because ah, this wife of mine is now the fifth generation of Water Shadow heir of Wuyin Village, and the leader of the new political faction in her village!

Because of the brutal rule of the fourth generation of Mizukage Yakura, coupled with the tragedy caused by the village of Mist Yin where he was located in previous years— the massacre of the ‘Blood Mist Age’. Killing, so that some other families in Wuyin Village have a heart of resistance, and there is also the new policy faction of Wuyin Village led by Meiyu now!

And now, this new political faction is about to be ruthlessly strangled by Yakura, because of its lack of high-end combat power, Miyu also sent me a letter of help, wanting me to go to the village of Mist to wish her a hand.

The reason why I came here to find you eldest brother is also to let you go to Wuyin Village with me to help Meiyu once…. After all, helping Meiyu can be regarded as indirectly helping ourselves!

I won’t forget, Mist Hidden Village, no, it should be those four generations of Water Shadow Yakura, but they still owe us a blood sea feud that has not been paid off!”

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