Ninja Realm Correction Belt

One month later, in the country of Sichuan, in a hotel.

Zhengdai knocked on the door lightly, pushed it in, and said with a smile: "Jiraiya-sama, are you busy creating? You are not feeling well but you insist on creating. You are really a great educator. But go out for a walk more, there are It’s good for your health. I’ve come up with a new method, and I guarantee success this time!”

"Seventh time."

"……ah?"

"This is the seventh time you are guaranteed to succeed." Jiraiya turned his head, with a pale face as if he was seriously injured, and said quietly: "Let me go, if this continues, I will be beaten to death by Tsunade."

Zheng Dai blinked and muttered: "Accident, it was all an accident before. Besides...it's your fault too.

Let's just say the day before yesterday, we made an appointment for you to pretend to chat with another girl, to test whether Tsunade-sama would be jealous, and to see if she would be hot enough to propose. But you, chatting and laughing, almost even grabbed someone's hand, aren't you looking for death? "

'Not like last time, you asked me to peek into the women's bathroom to test Tsunade. I happened to see that girl, and when I saw it again, all I could think about was...'

Jiraiya's expression changed, and he suddenly realized that he seemed to be unreasonable, so he reluctantly said: "I'm just acting, basic ninja skills, do you understand?"

"I understand, I understand." Zhengdai nodded repeatedly.

"This time it's time for you to show your basic skills. Let's do this..."

As he spoke, Zhengdai's voice gradually became quieter, because Jiraiya had covered his ears, as if he didn't want to listen to the bastard chanting sutras.

Seeing Zheng Dai closing his mouth, Jiraiya took his hand away again, waved and said, "Are you done? Just go out after you finish speaking, and don't disturb my creation."

"Jiraiya-sama, what about the trust between us?" Zhengdai said sadly.

Jiraiya shook his head: "No. And if I don't hurry up and create new works, my wallet will not be able to support Tsunade who loses in gambling every day."

Still want to be able to support her? Who gave you the courage... Zhengdai turned his eyes and said, "Then Master Jiraiya, let me teach you a way to make your new book more popular."

"roll!"

"okay."

Zhengdai nodded and stepped back out. After thinking about it, he laughed twice and returned to the room.

…

Early the next morning, Jiraiya came out of Tsunade's room yawning and smacking his lips.

"Listening to that brat's bad idea and being injured by Tsunade, Tsunade will be gentler afterwards. This is quite good...that's weird."

Shaking his head and throwing away the messy associations, he went back to his room to wash up, and then sat back at his desk to prepare for creation.

At this time, he suddenly frowned.

"Huh? Who has touched my manuscript?"

"It must be Zhengdai, what bad tricks did he do?" After muttering, Jiraiya frowned and picked up his manuscript, "What do you mean, copied it once?"

The first story is based on Yagura and is called "The Peeper". It tells the story of a boy who often went to peek into women's bathrooms out of curiosity. After being caught, his reputation became bad and he regretted what he had done.

This is a long story, which details the boy's happiness before he was caught. After he was caught, the women in the women's bathroom surrounded him, his father beat him, his mother comforted him with tears, his friends disliked him, etc., ensuring that teenagers After reading it, I didn’t dare to have the idea of ​​peeping into the women’s bathroom.

Jiraiya has revised it several times, and he is very confused about whether the boy can be forgiven at the end, so he almost knows the story backwards.

A quick look at the altered manuscript shows that except for the different handwriting, everything else was copied exactly like his... Huh?

At this time, Jiraiya was suddenly startled and looked at the middle section, the turning point of the story, the section where the boy was caught peeping.

Woman 1: ‘Oh my god, someone is peeping! ’

Woman 2: ‘What? where? ! ’

Woman 3: ‘Hey, wait, don’t worry, the one peeping... seems to be a handsome boy. ’

Woman 4: ‘Handsome guy? Hey, what a handsome little guy. Why are you peeping? Just come in and let the sisters take a look, hahaha...'

Jiraiya:? ! !

"Zhengdai! What the hell are you doing?!"

…

Three months later, in the Land of Craftsmen, Jiraiya sat down at his desk in the early morning with a solemn expression.

"I don't know how that kid Zhengdai changed my story again. This kid's thoughts are too unhealthy and must be criticized and corrected!"

"I'll first see what unhealthy thoughts he has this time before I criticize him."

Picking up the manuscript, Jiraiya was stunned for a moment.

"Huh? Is this mine?"

"No change?"

"It really hasn't changed..."

Jiraiya was dazed for a while, feeling a little lost. Reading in the morning for three months had become a habit. He was even secretly thinking about how his story could be adapted.

Why is there no more?

It was difficult for him to ask Zheng Dai about this matter. After waiting for two days, the manuscript was never changed again.

"How about... I do it myself?"

…

One year later, the Land of Snow.

"Oh... Brother Zhengdai, I will miss you!"

Four-year-old Fenghua Xiaoxue kissed Zhengdai on the forehead with a cry, and Zhengdai touched her head comfortingly: "See you soon."

The figure flashed and disappeared directly in front of Fenghua Xiaoxue. Zhengdai appeared on the top of a snow peak in the distance, beside Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Shizune.

Shizune breathed out from the cold: "Can, can you go, Zhengdai?"

"Let's go, his boring hero game is finally over, leave this country." Tsunade said, turned around and left, Shizune quickly followed.

Jiraiya and Shodai followed, and Jiraiya asked in a low voice: "Is this interesting? That turbulent coup was obviously going to fail, but you had to secretly help him, make him the king, and then help Ping Ping on the same day. chaos?

Have you fallen in love with that four-year-old girl? Well, she should be very beautiful when she grows up. "

Masadai clicked his tongue: "Jiraiya-sama, you have become insignificant. The little girl is only four years old."

Jiraiya was startled, the obscene smile on his face instantly disappeared, and he returned to his elegant look. He quickly sighed again: "My book is about to be released."

Zheng Dai's eyes lit up: "Release? Are you thinking about it and are you willing to release a new work?"

It won’t work if I don’t publish it, UU Reading www.uukanshu.net All my savings over the years have only lasted a year and four months with Tsunade. If I don’t publish it, I will starve to death, and... I can no longer write a normal story. .

It's all because of you bastard! Jiraiya glared at Masaida angrily, and said with some expectation: "I hope it will be a big hit, and the name will be as you said..."Intimate Paradise"!"

‘Jiraiya’s correction degree is 100%,

Get free attribute points*5! ’

Zheng Dai almost burst into tears!

Finally, finally 100%!

One year and four months is the longest time I have ever spent on revision. If I hadn't accidentally discovered the coup in the Land of Snow for some reason several years in advance and was about to fail, I would have completely revised the "Snow Land" The country's coup d'état event', the yield rate of attribute points is also too low.

Zheng Dai smiled: "It must sell well!"