Ninja school teacher, I can become stronger by teaching

The main storyline is now complete.

The original idea was to write about Naruto and his friends growing up, but after careful consideration, I felt that there was too little to write.

In the end, it was decided to write the rest of the content as a side story after defeating the Otsutsuki, which would be easier to write and better.

Here, Xiaoju would like to say something from the heart.

First of all, I would like to thank the readers who have been following and subscribing.

Because the performance of this book was really bad in the early stage, Xiaoju almost gave up writing.

The book Xiaoju wrote in his junior year (Night of the Nine-tailed Fox) was published in Sanjiang, but this book, which Xiaoju thought was better in terms of quality and content, did not even make it to Sanjiang.

Xiaoju almost thought that he could no longer write books, and was simply feeling good about himself.

Fortunately, with the support of my brothers, this book without Sanjiang has made a comeback, and at its peak, it was only a few dozen subscriptions away from 20,000.

This result is rare among doujinshi, and Xiaoju is quite satisfied.

However, although the results were beyond my expectations, I still feel a little regretful about this book.

This book is my first book with more than three million words. For a newcomer like me, it is really a lot. One book is more than the previous two books combined.

Due to the lack of experience in long-form serialization, many problems occurred during the writing process.

There are three things that impressed me the most.

The story of the ninja master in the Rain Country, the fight against Uchiha Madara, and the four battles in the parallel world.

The Rain Country is a big story that carries through the main line and plays a very important role in this book, but due to various complicated reasons, it failed to show the effect that I wanted.

There are many reasons, but in my opinion, there are mainly two problems.

One is the character setting of the protagonist, and the other is that there is no experience in writing in this area, which leads to the emptiness of the content and lack of tension.

If I want to elaborate on the latter, it is really not enough to have several thousand words, so let me talk about the character setting problem.

At the beginning, I imagined Mu Yue to be just a graduate who was more worldly-wise, without any special ambitions. As a person traveled to another world, he would feel fear and loneliness, and thus became an egoist without much emotion.

But as the protagonist of Xiaoju who likes a happy ending, can Mu Yue always be such a person?

Obviously, no.

In the plot I designed, Mu Yue initially contacted the disciples just to covet their rewards, and wanted to brush the rewards to explode gold coins and then become stronger to save his life.

But in the process of getting along, the sincere feelings of the disciples moved Mu Yue, and his mentality gradually changed, and he wanted to protect these disciples from the bottom of his heart.

Mutual redemption is the theme I set for the disciples and the protagonist.

Mu Yue changed the miserable lives of the disciples, and the disciples used sincerity to heal a lonely traveler who was about to close his heart.

Although Xiaoju felt that his ideas were good, it was difficult to write them out in practice.

In the early stage, because the protagonist acted for profit, many people commented that he was not worthy of being a teacher and was too selfish. Or too dark or something.

It was the first time that Xiaoju was criticized for writing a book. I was stunned. In addition, the results were not good at that time. Xiaoju could only try to downplay this aspect.

Then the character change went wrong, and the plot of the Rain Country Ninja Master had problems.

In Xiaoju's outline, Mu Yue's change of mentality is very important. After completing mutual redemption with his disciples, Mu Yue no longer looks at the ninja world from the perspective of a time traveler, and no longer looks down on the ninja world from the perspective of an outsider.

Only in this way can Mu Yue feel the cruelty of the ninja world more deeply, recall the education he received, recall the great man he respected, and finally decide to change the ninja world and make it peaceful.

One wrong step leads to another, which led to the failure of the Rain Country Ninja Master chapter. Unfortunately, this is an important plot that runs through the main line. Xiaoju can only delete the Rain Country plot as much as possible to keep reading.

It is for this reason that Xiaoju has always had the idea of ​​writing a Mu Yue extra chapter without a gold finger to make Mu Yue's image more full.

Instead of the disciple's grandfather, the task machine and camera without emotions.

The problem of fighting Uchiha Madara is not as serious as that of the Ninja Master, it is just not that good, not bad.

The reason why it is so impressive is that Uchiha Madara is the core BOSS of the main world. It has been laid for a long time, but it was killed in only 70,000 words.

Many readers said that it was sloppy, the death was too easy, the content was not rich enough, and the emotions were not fully released.

Xiaoju reflected on it afterwards and it was indeed the case. The content could be richer.

The reason for this, in addition to the problem of writing, is actually because I am easily influenced by comments.

When most of the comments are saying that the villain should be killed quickly, Xiaoju will subconsciously speed up the progress.

This has both advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that it is easy to know what readers want to see, and the disadvantage is that it is easy to go wrong. After all, readers are not professional authors, and they are prone to misjudgment if they are not firm in their own ideas.

I hope that Xiaoju can be an author who absorbs opinions and can also firm in his own ideas in the future.

As for the four wars in the parallel world, in my opinion, it is the same regret as the Ninja Master of the Rain Country, or even greater.

Unlike Ninja Master, which runs through the main storyline, the original intention of the four battles in the parallel world is to have fun, to have fun fighting the bosses that have not been fought, and it is more operable.

And unlike the plot of the Rain Country, which was criticized from the beginning, the parallel world started very well. Everyone praised it for being more interesting than imagined. It is completely okay to say that it started high.

However, due to Xiaoju's poor mental state at that time, and the fact that the outline written before was not carefully checked, a major problem that Xiaoju did not expect occurred, and it eventually turned into a high opening and low closing.

The biggest conflict in the existing parallel worlds is mainly about the strength of the protagonist.

If the protagonist and Obito and others arrive together, then Obito and Madara of the Six Paths will not be able to come out, and they will all be dealt with in a few moves.

However, in the outline, coming to the parallel world is to fight the BOSS that does not exist in the main world, such as Kaguya Otsutsuki and Madara of the Six Paths.

So the protagonist can only come out at the end, otherwise the outline will be directly announced to be sent out.

If it is just to change the outline, Xiaoju is willing to spend more time, but the problem is that when Xiaoju realized this, the progress of the parallel world was close to one-third, and it was impossible to make major changes.

Xiaoju could only bite the bullet and continue writing.

At that time, every time I opened the chapter to read the chapter review the next day after writing, Xiaoju had to spend more than 20 minutes to brew before I had the courage to click.

At that time, Xiaoju, who had poor psychological endurance, really wanted to uninstall Qidian and the writer's assistant.

But I can't not read it. There are already problems. If I keep writing, it will be easier to have big problems.

After writing the parallel world, Xiaoju thought a lot, and what he thought most was how to write a more fun and exciting four wars.

In the end, Xiaoju felt that it might be better not to write those six-path level.

Because the battle was too compact, the characters couldn't even chat.

But this is the scene of a brutal war. You can't just chat during the intermission.

If it happens again, Xiaoju will focus on the interaction between the double Obito and the big and small Kakashi.

As for the bosses, don't fight them. In fact, there is not much meaning. There is no need to sacrifice the plot for a boss.

In addition, although the main line is finished, this book will not end for the time being. Xiaoju will write some extras next.

In addition to the extras that supplement the main content, there are also some extras that are independent of the main line. Here is a rough list.

Extras:

1. Mu Yue without a system if line

This time, Mu Yue has no plug-in. Will he still have intersections with Obito and others, and what actions will he take?

2. Obito travels through the original world.

Obito wakes up and suddenly finds himself traveling to a parallel world alone.

"Since there is no Mu Yue Immortal in the parallel world, I will become the Mu Yue Immortal here!"

3. Mu Yue was killed by the if line

Due to unknown reasons, Mu Yue died in the battle with Uchiha Madara, and Nohara Lin was also taken away by Uchiha Madara.

The disciples gradually had different ideas and eventually parted ways.

Some people want to revive Mu Yue at all costs and return to the good times, while others think that they should inherit Mu Yue's will and go on with Mu Yue's expectations.

(Will not return to the original line)

4. Supplementary extras to the main line.

This is more numerous and very complicated. There will be the future life of the protagonist group, and there will also be content about the next generation such as Naruto and Sasuke growing up.

The extras mentioned by Xiaoju before will basically be written.

If you have any interesting ideas or extra chapters you want to see, please leave a message and Xiaoju will absorb them as appropriate.