Nomenclature of Night
: The update will resume tomorrow, old book friends please come in
The update will resume tomorrow, old book friends please come in
The revision of the full text is completed today. The last two chapters (966, 967) have been rewritten, that is, the last life and death test has been rewritten. About 8000 words have been added. You can take a look at it as an Easter egg.
This is probably the last time to write and modify the progress, and the update will resume tomorrow. In order to complete it safely, it will be updated before 12 o'clock every night, one or two chapters.
Now summarize the overall modification content.
I won’t talk about the small details, let’s talk about the main ones first.
Even if you haven’t read the progress of the previous revision, you can understand the whole picture of the revision by reading this one.
1. In terms of rationality, the bugs in the full text have been fixed to make the overall logic smoother.
Some students said that the more bugs are fixed, the more they are fixed. I read the feedback, and they mainly focus on the chapters of more than 200 chapters. There is a problem with the background cache of the starting point. As a result, the new content does not cover the old content, so you need to pull down when you read it. Refresh, or download the full text again, as long as you have subscribed, you don't need money.
Here I also explain why some students said why they need money. One possibility is that they skipped the subscription before, and the other possibility is that they used the active currency or enjoyed the limited exemption before, so this happened.
2. In terms of characters, there are three grades for spending pen and ink, with the first grade being the most, followed by the latter.
The first level enriches the details of characters such as Shendai Yunluo, Chen Yu, He Jinqiu, Li Yunshou, etc., making the characters' words and deeds more consistent, and also increasing their richness by using the background.
For example, Kamdai Unra and Onmyoji pass on, and kill Kamdai Chichi with his own hands.
For example, Chen Yu hated his father when he was young, and why his father became his demon later.
Compared to how to change this autumn, from a person who is selfish and distrusts others, to find his original heart.
The second level contains rich details of characters such as Li Dongze, Dayu, Chen Jiazhang, Zheng Yuandong, Li Shu, and Li Changqing.
Li Dongze unlocked the second level of weather forecast, which can actively change the weather and lower the temperature by 40 degrees.
Da Yu obtained the taboo ACE-005 Daifuku, and was informed by Qing Chen of the conditions for unlocking Daifuku's second form.
Chen Jiazhang was cut off from the path of knighthood, but was rekindled by Qingchen.
He Jinqiu gave Boss Zheng the correct gold coin before he died, and Boss Zheng used the correct gold coin to accommodate the steam train. The steam train has been collecting gold coins, and this one is actually waiting.
Increase the role of Li Changqing, Li Shu and Qing Chen. In the original text, Qing Chen did not take Li Changqing out to play. He and Li Shu and other Li's children did not have much interaction, but now they fought together and took Li Changqing to watch the fireworks. , It can be regarded as a perfect character relationship.
The third level arranges nodes for Jiang Xiaotang, Wang Yuchao, Zhao Mingke and others.
When Li Yunshou sacrificed Li's family, Jiang Xiaotang organized civilian airships to attack the Heishui City fleet to sacrifice.
After destroying the Age of Gods, Qingchen went to the north to erect a monument for the soldiers who died in the A02 military base.
Although this level is not so important, it is for some characters to finish.
3. Major changes in the plot.
The first change is that Qing Chen can hide better in the early stage.
The second change is to delete all ambiguous descriptions.
The third change is to delete Qing Chen’s behavior of putting Joker playing cards in the early stage when he is idle.
The fourth change is to modify the last battle in the octagonal cage, which is more reasonable and exciting.
The fifth change is to correct the role of the Heaven and Earth Chessboard in the overall situation. Among them, Li Shutong's hidden role in the middle and late stages will appear in the near future.
The sixth change is the process of Qing Chen being arrested by the Gods and sent to the A02 base. There are major changes here, and many plots involve rewriting. It is more reasonable and more in line with Qingchen's personality.
The seventh change is to add details about the annexation of the Mechanicus by the Patriarchal Council, which also involves a lot of rewriting.
The eighth change is to increase the plot of Qing Chen taking Li Shu and other Li's children to engage in other shadow candidates, increase the bond between him and Li's children, and have the process of Qing Yi's heartfelt convincing.
The ninth change is to rewrite the life and death of surfing on the sea, which is more thrilling, and adds a small easter egg with Yangyang.
The tenth change is He Xiaoxiao’s group chat change, merged and simplified. Here I wanted to rewrite Chuang Wang and others, but I gave up after changing it, because the friends in these group chats in the follow-up are really not very important, and the writing is like a word count.
The eleventh change is to modify some details of the interaction with Jinguji Maki to make this paragraph more reasonable.
The twelfth change is to increase the details of the containment conditions of forbidden objects (red long sword, Chen Yu Qingniu, etc.).
The thirteenth change is to modify the details of Shadow Qingzhun before parting, such as making the century he lost more reasonable and more in line with his own choice.
The fourteenth change is to correct the inconsistency in the settings of Oba, Nakaha, and Kohae.
The fifteenth change is to correct the details of Kamdai Chichi's identity.
The sixteenth change is the overall rewriting of the skiing life and death test. The original text is abbreviated on Mount Everest. The new version is to come to the inner world and take Chen Jiazhang to the Southwest Daxue Mountain. It is more detailed and meaningful to write here.
The seventeenth change is the sequence of discovering the secret of becoming a god. In the original text, the inexplicable Qing Chen knew how to go on the road to becoming a god. In the new version, he discovered it slowly. Boss He found it for him from the superconducting world. The last piece of the puzzle.
The eighteenth change reduces the plot of Qing Chen's solo journey to the Western Continent, shakes people as soon as possible, and increases the role of the protagonist group.
The nineteenth change is that after Nakahae possessed the time traveler through the nano-robot, he successfully "smuggled" back to the world of the table, and gathered the remnants of the kingdom organization, established the polar night organization, and then joined hands with the puppet master.
The twentieth change is to modify the customs clearance chapter of No. 001 Forbidden Land Amusement Park. Qing Chen interacts with Ren Xiaosu.
The twenty-first change is an embarrassing part of the original text: Dayu and Zard disappeared after being controlled by the puppeteer, and they didn’t even appear in the watch world, so they were revised here and they went online again.
The revision content of the entire book accounts for about 50% before chapter 900, and 50% after chapter 900. When it comes to Dayu, the rewritten plot is: After he is controlled, he will cooperate with the puppet master according to his plan. In fact, he is helping Qingchen to arrange to attract Zhong Yu and the puppet master, and control the remnants of the kingdom finally under his command.
During the period, Nakaha's role in the watch world was increased, how to gather the remnants, how to join forces with the puppet master, and how to interfere with Qingchen's last life and death test.
Then wrote that Dayu borrowed Daifuku according to the arrangement of the puppet master, and prepared to go back to the back world to fight for his life.
The twenty-second change is that the last life-and-death level of 966 and 967 has also been rewritten.
The entire revision rewrote a lot of plots. I wrote badly in the three life and death stages. The sloppyness of the last life and death stage made me disappointed with the later plot, which directly led to the idea of revising the text.
These changes are just a refinement of a large number of changes, but they are not complete. There are too many details that cannot be described one by one. I can only let old book lovers read this modification and continue to read.
Of course, if it’s my suggestion, it might be better to re-read it from chapter 900, but I also know that not all book lovers are willing to read it. If you don’t want to, just read this revised content.
Next, Qing Chen is about to take his last step across the other world. Will he be able to prevent the resurrection of the seven old monsters? Can it become a god?
Update will resume tomorrow!
Next, it is expected to be over in one month, and everyone does not need to vote for this book. I will finish writing this book with peace of mind.
That’s all for today, see you tomorrow!
Thanks to the book friends who made suggestions, thanks to the book friends who encouraged, thanked those book friends who never scolded, and thanked the book friends who never left.
thank you all.
Thanks again.
(end of this chapter)
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