Otaku Engineer in Great Tang Dynasty

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Putting away his messy thoughts, Li Zexuan began to read the news seriously.

Of course, it is undeniable that the title of Li Yu's news has been well-received. Compared with the later dynasties, the folk customs of the Tang Dynasty are more open, and the people like to listen to the love stories of these men, women, talents and beautiful women. , Li Yu can attract people to continue reading with this title alone.

After a while, Li Zexuan finished reading the first news, he nodded, and then shook his head again. Li Yu was looking at Li Zexuan's nodding, but he was still happy, but Li Zexuan shook his head again, and Li Yu's face had not opened yet. The smile suddenly froze.

"Uh, boss, what do you think? Why do you nod your head for a while and then shake your head for a while?"

Li Yu asked aloud.

Li Zexuan glanced at Li Yu and said, "I nodded, because I think your news has a very good title, and the content is not bad!"

"It's not bad? The owner just thinks that my content can be written better?"

Li Yu immediately found the crux of the problem from the two adjectives used by Li Zexuan.

"Hey, smart!"

Li Zexuan praised, and then explained: "It is undeniable that the story you chose, Xiaoyu'er, is very attractive, and the story is quite clear, but in my opinion, it is not enough."

Hearing this, Li Yu cast a curious look at Li Zexuan, Li Zexuan smiled and walked towards the gazebo with Li Yu, saying as he walked:

"Hehe, Xiaoyuer, don't be unconvinced, there is a reason why I say this. First of all, your whole news article gives people a feeling of gazing at the flowers. Your description of events is very general, broad and boring. , which directly leads to the lack of immersion in your entire story. You have a good theme, but you do not describe a complete story with full of emotional characters, and readers will only read it and chew it."

Li Yu supported the stone table, lowered his head and muttered dejectedly, "Is it so bad?"

Li Zexuan sat down and said with a chuckle: "It's not so bad, the reason why I tell you so much today is for your own good, of course, more precisely, I want you to earn more money, do you still want to? listen?"

"I want to hear it! Master, please tell me!"

Hearing the money, Li Yu instantly became interested, and the depression just hit by Li Zexuan was also swept away.

"Hehe, you girl!"

Li Zexuan laughed and said: "On your subject, let me write it. I can write at least 30,000 to 40,000 words, and I can serialize five or six issues in the newspaper. Look, the rich man Mo Wuque meets the farm girl Shu Yinglian , you can describe how Shu Yinglian was at home when she was bullied by the village tyrant, how desperate and helpless she was, and how shocked Mo Wuque was when she saw Shu Yinglian's peerless face.

Of course, the most important thing is that the part of Mo Wuque who stepped forward to save Shu Yinglian must be described in detail. How could you finish writing such an important scene in two sentences? The foreshadowing in front of you is all for Mo Wuque to pretend to be forceful and slap in the face, ahhh, it was prepared by the hero to save the beauty!

Also, Mo Wuque's father, when Mo Yunshan opposed his son's relationship with Shu Yinglian, Mo Wuque's contradiction, self-blame and helplessness at that time, why didn't you write it down? Shu Yinglian couldn't be with the person she loved and jumped into the river in anger. Why don't you put yourself in the shoes of Shu Yinglian? This place can touch the tears of readers the most! You have to describe it well.

Also, after Mo Wuque learned that his beloved jumped into the river, his loneliness, sadness, anger, and finally grief, and his heart was ashes, he went to the temple and shaved his hair to become a monk. You should also pay attention to this place. Rendering, these are all words and money! As a reporter, if you don't know how to count words, bah, if you don't know how to write about one thing, then you won't make much money..."

There Li Zexuan talked to Li Yu about how to pour water into the news and how to write one piece of news as five pieces of news. This guy completely forgot that he was the boss of "Datang Daily". If Li Yu really did this, But it's his own money.

Li Yu was on the side, she was dumbfounded. She really wanted to kneel to Li Zexuan. How could the boss personally teach the employees how to find ways to cheat the boss's money! Also, the "watering" that Li Zexuan gave her, ahhh, is the way to start the plot, which really opened her eyes, as if the door to a new world (the road of the water god) was slowly opening to her.

"Cough cough!"

At this moment, there was a light coughing sound from the side. It turned out to be Ma Zhou. He just came out to get some air. He didn't expect to meet Li Zexuan "teaching" Li Yu. , so he hurriedly interrupted.

"Uh, Brother Ma, are you here?"

Seeing Ma Zhou's expression, Li Zexuan knew that he had heard all the words he had just said, and his expression was a little embarrassed for a while.

"Hello, Uncle Ma~!"

Li Yu remembered what Li Zexuan had told her before, "If you have something to do, your Uncle Ma can still take care of you." She stepped forward and called out sweetly.

"Damn it~! When did Lao Tzu become an uncle? Yesterday, he was still calling me a steward!"

Ma Zhou had just walked two steps, and when he heard Li Yu's words, he stumbled, and 10,000 grass and mud horses galloped past in his heart. If Li Zexuan didn't react quickly and raised his hand, he would probably have thrown a dog.

"What's wrong? Isn't the little girl's name wrong? Brother Ma, why are you reacting so much?"

Li Zexuan teased with a wicked smile.

Ma Zhou was speechless. What else could he say, he could only scold Li Zexuan in his heart for teaching bad children. He was sure that this must have been taught to Li Yu by Li Zexuan.

"Your Majesty is here today, is there something important?"

Ma Zhouping calmed down and asked.

"Uh, don't worry, wait until I finish reading Xiaoyu'er's news, there's one more I haven't read! Oh, Brother Ma, you're here just in time, come and see how this piece of news about Xiaoyuer is written! "

Li Zexuan handed to Ma Zhou the news that he had just read, "The Prodigal Son of a Rich Family, But Escaped for His Lover", and he picked up another news and began to read it.

Ma Zhou was helpless, so he could only be patient, sat down, and started watching the news.

"Fuck, fuck! This little girl is doing something!"

Li Zexuan almost screamed when he saw the second news headline. Without him, the headline was really explosive, and he read: "After a woman was in the wild, her clothes were stolen by a man... .."

Li Zexuan touched his nose, it seems that Li Yu is going to carry out the title party to the end, hey, I don't know if it is a blessing or a curse.

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