Chapter 5: Perfecting the Script
Although it is to improve the script with Touko, in fact, Touzi can’t help much, whether it is the plot or dialogue, it is Shen Yun himself to solve, Toko is looking at the plot, talking about his feelings, giving Shen Yun a scale of grasp.
After all, Shen Yun’s anti-poison ability far exceeds the anti-poison ability of people in the Pokémon world, for example, the plot in the script that seems to Shen Yun is somewhat uncomfortable, and it is absolutely fatal to the audience in the Pokémon world without poison resistance.
Toko also felt very uncomfortable, feeling that this protagonist character is a villain, a villain who uses Pokémon as a tool, such a protagonist, in fact, is not pleasant.
Touko also put forward her suggestion, suggesting that the male protagonist’s character be better, at least not so bad.
Shen Yun also knows this, but if it is modified, the subsequent transformation will not be so big and will not tear up.
Soon, with the help of Touko, the script was almost a quarter of the way through, and the script had come to the time of real transformation.
After writing this story of the complete transformation of the male protagonist, the previous plot is almost complete, and the remaining plot is three-fifths of the sugar, and the last fifth of the knife.
After all, the script is not something that can be solved in a day or two, even if Shen Yun has the blessing of a quick thinking state.
“Whew, why is that? Can’t they have a good ending? After watching this episode, a pair of bright big eyes were already red, and tears couldn’t stop falling.
She didn’t want to cry either, but the content was too touching and miserable.
A villain protagonist who forcibly evolves in order to save the trainer, a villain who sees Pokémon as a tool, can obviously escape by himself, but risks his life to save his own Pokémon.
Such a transformation and contrast can completely move the audience of the Pokémon world, and their favorite is the bond between humans and Pokémon.
But after evolving from Lalu Lass to Shanado, Shanado’s body suffered irreparable trauma, unless he went to the Fangyuan area and found Kiraji, who only woke up once in a thousand years, and made a wish to heal Shanado’s body.
At the same time, after the male protagonist learned the news, his mood changes were also very rich, regret, sadness, anger and hatred for himself, and compassion for Shanaiduo.
The plot came to an abrupt end here, Shen Yun did not continue to write, and the plot after that is sugar, sweet sugar, the male protagonist’s feelings for Shanaiduo, under the relationship of a year, will also sublimate from love to the point of love.
How sweet the plot after that is, how bad the ending is.
A tragic ending can really sublimate the entire movie.
“Anla, an, there are still four fifths of the plot that has not been written.” Shen Yun comforted two sentences, also a little funny, before he kept saying how the male master was designed, but now he didn’t mention this matter at all.
“This script is not bad.” Shen Yun smiled slightly and asked.
He can also be regarded as a high-achieving student of Beiying, coupled with the blessing of quick thinking, and added so many elements of his world, not to mention the movie that hangs this world, but it is definitely a good work.
After all, he also added a lot of elements unique to the Pokémon world, as well as contradictions.
For example, many trainers treat Pokémon as tools, and there is also the behavior of abandoning weak Pokémon, Lalu Lass protects the master, forcibly evolves, and then the male protagonist risks his life to save the female protagonist, which is also a great plus for the audience of the Pokémon world.
“For now, it’s really good, but the previous part may dissuade a lot of people.” Touko wiped her tears and said.
“This is something that can’t be helped, if you weaken the character of the male protagonist, will you still be so moved by the reversal later?” Shen Yun smiled faintly, there will be gains and losses, he believes! As long as one person can carry this plot, see the reversed plot behind, with the barrenness of the Pokémon world film and television circle, he will definitely become a true love fan of this series, crazy Amway others to watch.
This tap water is the most powerful.
And Shen Yun doesn’t believe that the forbidden love between humans and Pokémon, such a big gimmick, can’t attract the audience.
In the film and television circle of the Pokémon world, there is human love, and there is also love between Pokémon, but the love between humans and Pokémon is not, most of which is the friendship and bond between humans and Pokémon.
Shen Yun did not dare to pack tickets, his own movie can explode, but to attract some people, there is no problem in making money.
“That’s true, too.” Toko was stunned suddenly, if the male protagonist was not so bad and made people disgusted, the reversal of the plot in the latter paragraph was not so moved.
It is precisely because of the bad of the male protagonist that the reversal behind will be touching.
“Okay, let’s go find the actor first. There are quite a few actors needed in front of this script. Shen Yun put away the script, according to his plan, the most actors are needed, only one-fifth of the front.
In the back four-fifths, only the shots of the male and female protagonists are enough, but no other actors are needed.
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