Pirate: My partner is too crooked
Final words
Finally finished another book. The ending is indeed a bit rushed, but there is really nothing left to write about.
The true abilities and identities of Im and the Five Old Stars have not yet been determined. We only know a few of their ability names. If we go into more detail, we might even get stabbed in the back by the old thief Oda. Think about it, let’s just end it like this. If it is delayed for too long, everyone will not enjoy watching it.
Compared with mr3, this book does have many shortcomings, such as the early plot handling, the character design of the protagonist, the pace and the thunder fruit, etc. These are all shortcomings that have to be admitted. I can say it straight now. In fact, during that time, I debated several times whether to cut the book or not.
Fortunately, I persevered and finally gained a lot of experience in writing fan fiction.
Apart from these shortcomings, to be honest, although the results are half-dead, I still enjoyed writing this book. At least no one complained about the summoned characters occ, which is a good consolation~
It's a bit embarrassing to say this, but my favorite in this book is still Aqua. I always want to laugh when I write about the plot of this idiot.
But it is difficult to write, and it is really difficult to write. After all, the text is not as rich as the animation pictures. Some behavioral descriptions are not grasped well, and it seems to be too intellectual. In the final analysis, it is still a problem with the protagonist's character. It is not scornful enough and cannot be corrected too much. Yes, just like a brother said when I started the book, the funny heroine and the serious hero looked a bit awkward. By the time I realized this problem, I couldn't change it even if I wanted to, and the whole book would collapse.
In fact, the character design of the protagonist at the beginning was similar to Kazuma's. Because I was worried that it would be too easy to harmonize, I continued a little bit of the original character design. Thinking about it now, it is still a bit regretful, and a lot of fun was lost.
The story after the ending will be updated from time to time to fill in some pitfalls, such as the rise of Fishman Island, the moon secret of Bika on Sky Island, etc., as well as some short stories of the partners returning to the original world (actually in the beginning It’s written in the direction of a comprehensive comic). The above are all released in the form of free chapters, maybe once a week?
All in all, I would like to thank my brothers for not giving up and chasing me here, and I would also like to thank the editor Penglai for his trust and the popsicle boss (Tom Cat) for his recommendation. Thank you all!
The new book has been released. Just click on the author's information to view it. This time, the original world is more passionate. If you are interested, you can check it out. If you have internal investment, you can do some investment or something. (End of chapter)
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