Poisoned Eggs at Hogwarts

It has been almost a month since the book was opened, more than 20 days ago, I still want to tell you about some places, and it is about the opinions of some readers.

First, it's about the Dursleys.

First of all, I know that the Dursleys protect Harry, but to be honest, for an eleven-year-old child, the Dursleys' actions are indeed too much.

Some people say that the Dursleys raised Harry no matter what, and bought him glasses to teach him how to speak, but everyone, whether you read the original book or the movie, do you think this process will be as peaceful as you imagined?

In ancient China, even if you bought a house slave, the house slave had to be taught to speak and eat by the master when he was young, right?

What's more, Harry grew up in an era where laws were sound and human rights were valued in England. I'm not saying that the Dursleys are extremely evil people, but they are definitely not good people either.

Can anyone tell me the difference between Harry's life in the Dursleys and his slave? At any rate, the servant also has new clothes to wear during the festivals, right?

Some people said that they had love for Harry, so I laughed. Throughout the book, except for Petunia who said that they have a little complicated emotion for Harry because of blood relationship, who has love for him?

What love? Dudley's tattered clothes? Insulting him? Or a small cabinet that has lived for eleven years? The lock outside the room? The Dursleys echoed when Aunt Peggy insulted Harry's parents? Or was it Vernon's greed for Harry's parents' inheritance?

I never deny the readers’ opinions, but you have to give examples, let’s not express my opinions based on conjectures, it’s not that I didn’t want to clear them up, but I have read for so long, I really can’t Find out what to whitewash things for them...

And after the spoiler, I wrote that they have indeed changed. This is already a very difficult decision for me. After all, I said that I want to see more possibilities of the story.

The background of the protagonist is from an orphanage, but to be honest, I was searching for the background in England in the early 1990s. The children in the orphanage at least have a decent set of clothes to wear. Does Harry have it?

How cheap is this if you love it? Cheap or not?

The protagonist is going to improve Harry's life, but I feel that if Sirius picks up Harry instead, it's hard to say whether the Dursleys will survive.

Some people said that my way of writing was too extreme, that it was too powerful for the Dursleys, and that the protagonist was a bit similar to Grindelwald, and that I have magic and I am awesome.

But it's soft enough, I have magic and I'm really awesome.

Equal dialogue also needs a foundation. When you have the power of life and death in the hands of others, it is not awesome to expect equal dialogue with others, it is stupid*...

If it were me, I really wouldn't kill them, but they don't want to feel better...

Is this the truth? I am so strong that you are a Muggle jumping up and down in front of me to show off your power. The protagonist is not a respected old wizard like Dumbledore.

What's more, Dumbledore always gets pissed off by Aunt Petunia...

Those who are interested can browse the deeds of Dumbledore when he was young. He doesn't like Muggles as much as you think, at most he just doesn't hate them.

So in this regard, I don’t want everyone to compare the truth. Just read the book and enjoy it. I can write this after careful consideration.

The other side is about the heroine. I have said that I set up an original heroine, an original heroine.

In fact, this aspect is quite embarrassing.

Because when I wrote the original heroine, I was afraid that readers would not like it, so I thought about it and added Hermione.

I am also afraid that readers who hate to tear down the original cp will not like it, so I am thinking about whether to delete a heroine.

Then I committed the common problem of all compatriots in need: children make choices...

Then I emmm... After thinking about it, the two are actually quite good,

Although some people don't like harems very much, I think two of them should be acceptable...

The most difficult point is that Hermione’s character has largely restricted the development of the harem, because Hermione has always been a very strong and independent girl, and it is very against the law for this kind of girl to write harem texts. , This is also the reason why I plan to cultivate from a young age hahahaha...

Then there are bugs in the early stage of the book, one is Nimbus 2001.

2001 was released when Harry was in the second grade. This is a bug that I didn’t notice at the beginning, because 2000 existed before Harry entered school, and 2001 is an upgraded version. I always thought it was released together...

Another one is that Quirrell was a Muggle professor before teaching Harry, which I have changed.

The main thing is the above, and the emphasis is that the protagonist is not the Virgin, if you treat me well, I will treat you well, and if you talk to me, I will kill you, so everyone, don’t think Long Aotian or something, whoever it is Most people will be like this, not to mention that the main character is originally a little orphan struggling for life in the streets and alleys of London!

The strengths of the two are not equal, there is no equality at all, this is for readers, it is also some experience I have learned in the past few years of work, don't ask for equality with someone who holds your lifeline...

That's all I want to say, and I hope everyone will support this book in the future. There are some arrangements behind the Dursleys, mainly because of the changes I want to describe. The story will start to become more and more exciting from the second grade. Everyone Let's vote a lot~

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