Rebirth: It’s Like Flowing Water

Chapter 4: There are pitfalls in composition

   At half past one in the afternoon, the language test officially started.

   Qi Lei, according to the comprehensive test method, first finds the meeting and submits the sub-questions, then stretches his neck to call the airdrop, and it is enough to stop before the invigilator loses patience.

   It was hard to fill in the blanks, choices, and judgments. I temporarily skipped the reading comprehension and recitation of the text later, and turned directly to the last page of composition questions.

   As expected...

   "With "My..." as the title, write a composition of more than 600 words."

   Qi Lei looked at the essay question, he was secretly relieved, but he couldn't help but feel anxious.

   In his previous life, he got a very high composition score because of his grandfather's illness. In this life, can he still write that feeling of true feelings?

  Maybe, after all, the wording level of junior high school is incomparable with his writing level of daily copywriting in later generations.

   But to surpass later generations, is it possible to get a higher score?

   can only say that it is unlikely.

   Because of looking at the composition topic, Qi Lei actually gave birth to a different perception from the previous life.

   This topic... is not simple, there are pitfalls!

   At first glance, "My...", the first reflection of many people is: my father, my teacher, my classmates, my kitten, my childhood and so on.

   These have not been written in the past learning, but at first glance they are the most common narratives

   However, Qi Lei found an intriguing detail. The essay title did not specify the style.

   "With "My..." as the title, write an essay of more than 600 words..."

  What is mine! ? But there is no rule that it must be a narrative!

   You can write argumentative essays, you can also write prose, and you can even write poems without going off the topic.

   This is interesting, it's a big pit.

   You must know that the grading of the composition will definitely be mixed with the subjective emotions of the teacher. Regardless of whether it is the high school entrance examination or the college entrance examination, it is impossible to get a full score in the composition, but it is also impossible to get a zero score.

How many points    give is all in the mind of the critic.

   This essay question, you don’t need to think about it, most of the candidates will write according to the narrative, and it must be my grandfather, my mother and other topics.

   invisibly chose one of the most common subjects among the narrative, argumentative, prose, and poetry styles.

   No matter how good the writing is, in the eyes of the reviewing teacher, it is the same.

   Later Qi Lei’s piece by my grandfather is excellent and impeccable, but it only scored 40 points.

   When you think of getting a higher score, either you are only eight-pointed and shocking, or you have some innovations in the subject matter, which makes people shine.

   Thinking of this, Qi Lei gave birth to a bold idea.

   Give it a go? Don't write about grandpa, but change to a subject that has a chance to get a higher score?

   To be honest, there are risks, and the risks are great. In case of a bad game, there will be a lot less points! Doesn't fit the mature and steady temperament of my middle-aged soul!

   But I am not willing to be a salted fish. Are you still a young man if you are not angry?

   After pondering for a long time, he wrote the draft again, and finally, Qi Lei wrote the written test paper:

""My Homeland"......."

   The title requirement is 600 characters, and there is no cap.

   But Qi Lei knows that the length of middle school composition is about 800 words is the best.

   will not be too short to make the narrative unclear, nor will it be too long to disgust teachers who have to read hundreds of essays every day.

   So, this essay in the form of prose, no more, no less, just a little bit more than 800 words.

   The beginning of a very popular Internet celebrity text in the future, combined with the 98-year flood fighting and rescue environment.

   Qi Lei thinks that he should be able to stand out and be liked by the scoring teacher, right?

   It took about 30 minutes to finish the composition.

   I took a look at the time. The two and a half hours of the exam time only passed by a little over an hour. Qi Lei did not choose to hand in the paper right away this time, but returned to the reading comprehension and recitation questions.

   I filled my reading comprehension according to the level of my own knowledge, never let go of the recitation questions, even if I made up my mind, I didn't leave any space at all.

   Still the same sentence, Chinese is the most subjective subject, especially in this era when there is no computer to mark papers and only a pair of eyes from the teacher.

   You can't tell which word or sentence can make you so much more.

After    was filled, Qi Lei reviewed all the test papers again and made sure that even one punctuation mark was not missed, so he was relieved.

   Punctuation marks are also points!

   After doing all this, there is more than half an hour left, and I habitually care about the next door.

   I saw that Xu Qian had already answered all the questions including the composition and was checking.

   Qi Lei glanced at the title of her composition-"My Secret".

   can't help but shine, it's very novel!

   no longer hesitate, got up and handed in the paper.

   Regardless of the invigilator or Xu Qian, I have long been used to it.

   Xu Qian even wondered, did this guy fall asleep and drag him out for two hours?

   gave Qi Lei a vicious look, a posture of hating iron but not steel.

   And the invigilator has no hope for this very special poor student.

   took the test paper and took a look, couldn't help shaking his head and smiling bitterly, and chanted again in his heart, "What a pity this kid!"

  The invigilator teacher is Li Yanhong. He is a high school teacher in the second middle school, and he teaches Chinese. You can know what Qi Lei is at a glance.

   In addition to the composition, I read the previous part again. It is estimated that for this 100 points, Qi Lei can also get 50 points.

   This level is simply horrible.

   Feel free to turn to the composition, "My Motherland".

   The title is still invisible, even a bit clichéd.

   Almost predictably, Impression Qi Lei lost half of it.

   is actually normal. As soon as she curls up, she knows that many good students in this year's composition will fall into the pit.

   This is an obvious trap. UU reading www.uukanshu.com my home country is not new, so many candidates will lean on it.

   For this year’s essay questions, I don’t know how many good students are going to sink into the sand, not to mention the poor students like Qi Lei.

   scanned down and found that there was a subtitle: "If the miracle has a color, it must be Chinese red!"

"what?"

   Li Yanhong whispered, making the candidates below all look sideways, wondering where the invigilator is.

   But Li Yanhong has a look of surprise on her face, this subtitle is a bit interesting.

   "If a miracle has a color, it must be Chinese red." From a professional point of view, this is a mimic sentence.

   Does miracle have a color? of course not.

   miracle is an adjective, not a specific thing, how can there be color?

   However, the examinee said that miracles have colors and gave the answer-"China Red".

   From the point of view of sentence structure, that is, the color of miracle is Chinese red.

   However, this sentence has to be explained in reverse: The color of China is a miracle! China is a miracle!

The sentence    lifted the breath, even a bit amazing.

   Li Yanhong gave a secret compliment. It was just a subtitle, and the topic was already selected. The slightly clichéd title "My Motherland" was no longer ordinary, and it was sublimated all at once.

"good!"

   Li Yanhongxin said that it is worth at least 10 points on this topic.

   Looking down again, it is startled again.

   "Prose?"

   She found the second surprise again, and the whole person became more energetic. She originally thought it was a narrative.

   moved around, leaned against the podium, and watched the following with a trace of expectation.

   Then, Li Yanhong was completely stunned.

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